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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
First of all Ananya, sorry for being late. I am not well past four days and can't sit with lappy for so long.
The update now :

Amazing and too romantic 👏👏
In the aura of RaTri ❤️

The way Raghav took care of Trisha was so romantic and every one seems like what's going on. What Neha asked even Trsiha wanted to know blushing and smiling a teasing way 😉 The girl friend is a chance in Raghav's life :: now this is super news bcos of Raghav is having a GF, then someone larger to the life and full of authority. ( Trisha ) 😉
Lovely pyaar ki nishaniyan ⭐️⭐️ from both of them ! i wish koi dekh na le Trisha ki neck 😉 Neha has almost caught Trisha that she is in love but she has name a novel experience. Let's see if she will be able to hide it for long from every one. And then there is the name of her love on her neck.
MY, i am full of imaginations Ananya, and now leaving the more of creativity and imaginations up to you 😆
Lovely update, thanks and loves ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc



Sorry for being late...was down with viral yday...still having it,,,, 😭

I am wishing for your well being Manisha ! Get well soon 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update ananya di. Loved it soo much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Lovely part Ananya, the way they both were shown to be talking to each other and Raghav expressing his love in front of others without giving a clear indication of who she is...well narrated dear...

Raghav took Trisha with him and wanted to spend time with her...the morning scene was so cute...i loved it...
In the office, Neha saying that she would interrogate before falling in love with someone was hilarious...all in all a lovely update Ananya...👏👏

Sorry for being late...was down with viral yday...still having it,,,, 😭

Thanks dear, It was a short update so was thinking whether the reader will like it or not but glad that you like all the scenes.
No problem don't be sorry and Get well soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Az07

It's a lovely and romantic update Ananya
I liked how everyone including Trisha asked about Raghav's GF
Raghav so wanted to reveal it to be Trisha
I liked how he wanted his Pyaar Ki Nishani 😳
And Trisha instead of kiss she wrote her name in his hands and he on her neck 😳
Neha in Cbi office was she just being naive or something else is going on in her mind 😲
Waiting for last part

Thanks uma for complement. I just love Raghav teasing Trisha related to BF but I want to see Raghav in same situation, so write it down.
Actually this time Raghav have to wait for kiss Trisha will not easily give everything to him.
Will try to update it soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

First of all Ananya, sorry for being late. I am not well past four days and can't sit with lappy for so long.

No problem babita Hope you will get well soon.
The update now :

Amazing and too romantic 👏👏
In the aura of RaTri ❤️

The way Raghav took care of Trisha was so romantic and every one seems like what's going on. What Neha asked even Trsiha wanted to know blushing and smiling a teasing way 😉 The girl friend is a chance in Raghav's life :: now this is super news bcos of Raghav is having a GF, then someone larger to the life and full of authority. ( Trisha ) 😉
Raghav is always asking and teasing Trisha about BF so now its time for Trisha to tease him but she was scared that if he would tell her name
Lovely pyaar ki nishaniyan ⭐️⭐️ from both of them ! i wish koi dekh na le Trisha ki neck 😉 Neha has almost caught Trisha that she is in love but she has name a novel experience. Let's see if she will be able to hide it for long from every one. And then there is the name of her love on her neck.
This is my favorite part of the story, now this nishani will definitely bring some twist in the story and how both of them will tackle, you need to wait until the last part.
MY, i am full of imaginations Ananya, and now leaving the more of creativity and imaginations up to you 😆
Lovely update, thanks and loves ❤️

Will update the last part soon
Loves
Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Awesome update ananya di. Loved it soo much.

Thanks dear for complements. Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for the next update ananya di
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Third part


Trisha and Raghav came and sat on their respective places.

Neha-"hey guys Trisha is very ride and bold, Don't you think so "

Everyone was silent.

Neha-" Are daro mat vo tum logo ko suspend nahi karegi "

Raghav -" Nahi, She is nice, understanding, practical, strict at times, intelligent, beautiful... "

Neha -" bas bas Raghav, mujhe lagata hai tumhe Trisha kuch zyada hi pasand hai"

Rajbir clear his throat

Trisha - "well Neha, tumne office dekha"

Neha-"nahi, please I want to see where my friend works "


Near Raghav's desk

Neha-" toh yeh Raghav ka desk hai"

Raghav - Haan"

Neha - "tum bohot mysterious type ko ho kya"

Rajbir - "haan kai baar toh mujhe nahi pata hota ki isje dimaag me kya chal raha hai"

Trisha - "Haa par ab kai raaz khulne lage hai"

Raghav smiled at Trisha

Neha-"tum log toh ek dusre ko acche se jaante Hoge, right!! So jab tum log stress me hote ho toh kya karte ho means what is your common reaction. Starting with Trisha "

Everyone started thinking

Raghav -" Trisha jab tense hoti hai toh bohot gussa hoti hai ya pen twist karti hai"

Neha-"well correct Trisha "

Trisha was seeing Raghav how much he know her.

Trisha -" absolutely Right "

Neha -" aur Raghav tum kya karte ho"

Rajbir - "kuch nahi"

Bikram - "he has no sign of anger on his face, not even panic"

Trisha - "Rubic cube!!"

Neha-"what!! rubic cube matlab?

Trisha - "Raghav tension me rubic cube solve karta hai"

Raghav - "correct!!"

Neha - "tum dono dost ho ya husband - wife ek doosre ko itni acche se jaante ho"

Trisha blushed profusely but controlled herself - "kya bol rahi ho come I will show you my cabin"


All were not able to enter in one lift so Raghav and Trisha took another lift. In between the lift was stuck due to power cut.

Trisha - "what is this ab lift ko kya ho gaya aur network bhi nahi hai"

Raghav's past memories started coming back

Raghav sat down.

Trisha switch on torch in her cell phone

Trisha - "Raghav what happened, are you ok?

Raghav -" Trisha vohi yaade baar baar ati hai"

Raghav was so panic and scared

Trisha - "Raghav look at me ab main hoon na"

Raghav looked at her and they were just lost in each others eyes.

Raghav slowly started leaning towards her lips. She closed her eyes by seeing his action.

And suddenly lights were on and both of them move awy from ech other and blushed profusely.


On the floor

Neha-"tum dono theek toh ho"

Raghav and Trisha nodded in positive manner

While walking

Neha - "Trisha just remove this scarf itni garmi hai aur tum yeh scarf peheni ho"

Neha forcefully removed the scarf without her permission

Neha-"ek minute yeh kya hai kuch likha hai tumhari gardan par"

Trisha - "kuch bhi toh nahi vo galti kahi lag gaya hoga"

Neha - "No let me see"

Neha-"18-1-7-8-1-22 yeh kaise numbers hai"

Trisha - main wash karke ati hoon "


Raghav folded her sleeves according to his habit.

Rajbir -" yeh kya likha hai"

Raghav jrked her hand back.

Raghav - "kuch bhi toh nahi"

Bikram - "kuch toh chupa rahe ho"

Rajbir - "batao kya likha hai"

Rajbir- AHSIRT yeh kya likh hai"

Raghav -" Maine bola na kuch nahi main wash kar leta hoon "


Trisha entered in the washroom and was pulled hardly.

Trisha found Raghav in ladies washroom.

Trisha -" pagal ho gaye ho yaha ladies washroom me"

Raghav moved her hair to one side of the neck and look what he has written on her neck.

Raghav - "apni jaan se milne aya hoon aur apbi nishani lene"

Trisha - "maine... Di toh tumhe"

Raghav - "apna naam ultha likhkar mujhe laga tha tum bohot daring hogi par..."

Trisha - "accha aur tumne toh apna naam numerical order me likha ab batao daring kon"

Raghav came close to her and placed her between wall and him.

Raghav - "main... Ladies washroom me tumse milne aya hoon"

Raghav locked the door. Trisha heart beating increased.

Trisha closed her eyes and soon Raghav touched her lips and kiss her passionately

Raghav - "I Love you.."


The End


Hope you all like it. Please review and like it forcmore and more ideas. Thanks for reading.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Waiting for the next update ananya di

Sorry dear was busy with my schedule. Have posted above the third part

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