Ratri OS : Dosti ya Pyaar part 3 on pg 14

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

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awesome update dear.loved to see Ratri know each other soo perfectly. loved Trisha telling everyone that raghav plays with his Rubiks cube when he is disturbed. loved the lift scene soo much .wow raghav wrote his name in numericals that's soo intelligent. really loved it a lot .thanks for such a awesome update dear love it soo much

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
awesome update dear.loved to see Ratri know each other soo perfectly. loved Trisha telling everyone that raghav plays with his Rubiks cube when he is disturbed. loved the lift scene soo much .wow raghav wrote his name in numericals that's soo intelligent. really loved it a lot .thanks for such a awesome update dear love it soo much

Thanks dear, I am glad that you like the update. I filled this update with light romantic scenes and Neha the one who make them closure. Thanks again for reviewing

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Lovely update ananya
I liked the way they both knew each other they should be a couple rather than colleagues
Both were intelligent one wrote the name ulta and other one in numerically
Finally Raghav got his pyaar ki Nishaani he waited for a long
But I didn't like that Neha called her rude

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Az07
Lovely update ananya
I liked the way they both knew each other they should be a couple rather than colleagues
Both were intelligent one wrote the name ulta and other one in numerically
Finally Raghav got his pyaar ki Nishaani he waited for a long
But I didn't like that Neha called her rude

Thanks dear, as we know that they are CBI officer so they will not leave any clue of their love. Neha is just to make them closure in some events, she just tease her that she is rude.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Sorry Ananya for being late...

Loved this update dear...how well they both know each other...each other's choices, likes and dislikes...i loved it...

The lift scene was well written by you dear...👏

I loved the way of writing their names on each other's body...great idea...

Neha...such a cute friend ...acts as a cupid...

Loved this light hearted story sweetie..😊👏

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Will be back at this thread Ananya ! I was not feeling well for past few days. Hope U will gimme some time, loves ❤️

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Very lovely ending Ananya 👏👏

Loved the lift scene and Trisha becoming a rescuer to Raghav but with a different style 😉

Awesome names written but the numerical and opposite alphabets -- Both are daring but quite intelligent 😆

Lovely to know how they both know each other while explaining what they both do in stress. Neha got success in taking out the love they both were sharing until now. But no one comes to know or rather everyone knows 😉 and the last scene ☺️

Beautiful ending to the lovely story, loved it to the core ❤️

Thanks dear and hugs 🤗

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Sorry Ananya for being late...
Loved this update dear...how well they both know each other...each other's choices, likes and dislikes...i loved it...
The lift scene was well written by you dear...👏
I loved the way of writing their names on each other's body...great idea...
Neha...such a cute friend ...acts as a cupid...

Loved this light hearted story sweetie..😊👏

Thanks dear for the lovely comments, and no need of sorry at all for me your love for the story is enough. They are quite intelligent as they are CBI officers. I am glad to hear that you love this light romantic story...

Will update my next story by Sunday. 😊