Ratri OS : Dosti ya Pyaar part 3 on pg 14

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Trisha entered the restaurant with a beautiful girl.

Raghav - "Trisha yeh gorgeous lady kon hai"

Trisha - "she is my school friend aur kuch dino ki liye yaha delhi ayi hai"

Raghav hold right hand of Trisha's friend and made her sit on the chair.

Raghav - "can I have the permission to ask your name beauty?"

Trisha interrupted and replied - "Neha!! Neha naam hai uska"

Raghav - "OK such a beautiful name"

Neha-"Thanks"

Trisha - "Raghav!! Khana order kare Please"

Trisha's face was full of anger and frustration. She can't see both of them sitting together and giggling. Raghav noticed her and smiled but ignored her throughout the dinner.

So this is for the teaser. This is a light romantic story with no mystery and case🥱. I thought I should change the pattern of writing story so this is full of Raghav's mischievous activities and flirting with Trisha which meet a good end. 😳I want a suggestion for a proper title. So please give your views on the teaser.

Edited by 1973deepak - 9 years ago

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aww such a cute teaser .raghav flirting with neha and trisha getting irritated. that's soo cute do continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
Aww such a cute teaser .raghav flirting with neha and trisha getting irritated. that's soo cute do continue soon

Tahnks dear, I will continue this after I finishes my previous story.

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Posted: 9 years ago

such a cute teaser... i just love this... Trisha being jealous... and Raghav continues with his flirting... lovely... please continue soon...

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
such a cute teaser... i just love this... Trisha being jealous... and continues with his flirting... lovely... please continue soon...

Thanks dear, will post this story after my previous story revenge is finished.

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

Raghav flirting with Neha infront of Trisha obviously she has to be jealous. He totally ignored Trisha through out dinner that's going to hurt her sometimes raghav's pranks do hurt her
Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Az07
Raghav flirting with Neha infront of Trisha obviously she has to be jealous. He totally ignored Trisha through out dinner that's going to hurt her sometimes raghav's pranks do hurt her
Continue soon

Yes dear sometimes his pranks hurt her badly. But still she loves him. Will continue after my previous story.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome teaser loved it soo much

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ananya, Have U given the title or still in search ??

It can be : Aap toh aise na the 😆

But Dosti ya pyaar is too good !

Thanks for the new story of light comic and romantic scenes

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: babita..
Ananya, Have U given the title or still in search ??
It can be : Aap toh aise na the 😆

But Dosti ya pyaar is too good !
Yes dear but I love this title very much. It suits the teaser very much. I know where I will use this line you will know in further parts.

Thanks for the new story of light comic and romantic scenes
Thank babita, I tortured everyone with my thriller and suspense so this one is just to chill and drown in love.

Edited by 1973deepak - 9 years ago

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Ratri OS : Dosti ya Pyaar part 3 on pg 14

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