RaTri SS : Black End!! Chapter 3 on Page 21 - Page 7

Originally posted by: babita..

Nice beginning and loved the emotional track in the whole chapter. Thanks Amreen 👏👏

Thanks babita 😳

As a couple, RaTri have excelled and i loved their teasing though the bossy wife was almost at the loving end in front of her agent hubby 😉

Wifey pyaar karti hain.. par izhaar nahi karti na... Yehi problem hain... 😉😉

Oh, Delhi in this mess ?? Felt bad over the blast and the kids' kidnapping.

So, it's the revenge by one of the criminal and to release him, all this is created. Very bad on the part of the bad elements i must say !

Well it's the bitter truth of current times na... Yup it's revenge but kyu n kis se yeh agle chap me pata chalega!!!!

The RaTri emotional scenes took the heights where they both are fighting with the luck. Liked Raghav hiding the DNA reality and took all the charge.

Thanks a lot for loving the emotions presented... I cannot write a mechanical story.. its my way of narrating 😊

Mr. Agent is emotionally challenged but he cannot let any mess happen na... he is like that... razor sharp IQ and impeccable presence of mind!!! 😳

He knows that Trisha cannot handle the news now!!

Felt very sad over a mother's plight of recalling her kids and not able to find them even being in CBI.

Well every mother will break apart if something like that's happens to her kids.. mad the fact that she is a CBI but still isn't able to do anything is gnawing her as well as him... more than us Bawa bro and Swati bhabhi can understand d couple's plight n pain...😭

Now the revelation --- Hope this is not his son. I do feel so. You won't let it happen Amreen. I know you 😳

Wait for next dear 😉

Loved the first part, but why Black end dear ?? A fear comes through the title.

Title bohot soch samajh ke rakha hain... it is suggestive ofsomething u all will know soon 😳

Loves to U and you know it ❤️

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Well I have tried made a banner for the story but it wasn't fully made before the posting so introducing it now...

Plz bataiyega kaisa hain 😳





Is the aggregation of pictures looking too chaotic???

Originally posted by: Az07

I hope u r not pissed off with me one doubt why was Trisha not seen in the chief's office in the evening of bomb blast along with her team?

Originally posted by: bawaswift

I have no experience of writing any crime stories or thrillers... this is a first time

O really... ?///// 😳

Yes... really!!! 😃

Amreen... this is fabulous plus intelligence of your capability of handling this kind of theme... ! ⭐️👏 Just loved it.. !

Thank u very very much bro... I was finding it challenging to write this really but then I tried thinking "jo hoga dekha jayega" n after completing it I thought it's somewhat good... but I had not expected u all to like it so much.. Thank u 😳😳😳

Not liked what happened to the victims... n where RaTri kids are.. ! But loved the way you have penned down the emotions so well... So well put in that i read it without blinking once... !

Yup... its painful but it's true na... kids are...!!! Well u need ro wait 🥱

Thank u... it gives a god feeling that u liked the emotional tracks...

Loved the emotional couple n the hard man taking the charge of every situation.. ! Be it how a strong lady... but when it come to her kids... every Mom wud react like Trisha did... ! Awesome narration..n apt wordings.. 👏

Thanks u again... The man has been through so much in he past too so he has become tough!!! But a woman... especially a mom cannot handle every situation like this... I was inspired by my mom to write the emotional parts of Trisha... the way she had behaved when I had an accident some 2 years back!!!

Thanks a lot for liking the efforts 😊

The track is very seriously going to take the tears out from every parent here... but it looked more natural how Raghav pacified Trisha n took care with full concern of what she is going thru...

Awww... Thanks a lot bro... this is the second time u have said that u were emotional reading the chapter... Thank u very much for such appreciation.. 😳

Though he is going thru the same n even more... but his presence of mind is so sharp that he excelled here even dealing during the DNA test... !

All thanks to his intellect!!! ⭐️

Very powerful write Amreen... Three cheers to you n your efforts of giving us RaTri as a couple.. !⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Loved them in love n as lovers... they even dated... 😳 What cud be the time... haye...

The pink scarf is the loving thing... but its taking my heart away giving it to beat heavily...

Thanks!!!

Oh... that dating part must have been beautiful... 😉

The scarf was found burnt near crime site... now u guess what must have happened till tomorrow and ask ur heart to relax 😛

Will wait for the next... the result has to be negative.. ! No thats not his son... 😳

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Good going... keep it up ... !!! ⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hello Sweetie 😊

Hello bhabhi.. how r u??? How's shubh??? Too naughty 😉

Bang on with the first connect 👏 Presentation is awesome and the track is fully thriller and logical!⭐️

Thanks a ton!!!

Raghav and Trisha as a couple have cutely open up with the kids around. The lovely family looks so complete with the two cute kids in their life! They are their everything and right now their life is at a stake.

Thank u... its a relief that I was able to merge the family scenes and the case in a presentable way... and I am so happy u liked it...

Life always tests na... its their phase...!!

How were the names of the kids by the way...?? U liked them 😊

Far from the thoughts to see Delhi in this condition. The criminal minds have no hearts, and this is where God never forgive them.

Sadly these people have no hearts and it was hard to portray their heartlessness... 😡 😡 😡

The loving couple solving every case so obviously, but their own kids are now kidnapped. This is the testing time for both of them. They have to go on with the case, with Trisha so broken heart and Raghav so helpless. I felt so sad over the happenings and the state their kids must be in.

Yup.. testing time and this is the toughest test they will ever give in life!!! They have to find their kids and not let anything more happen to other's kids all along with balancing and collecting their state of mind...😭😭 I can understand how as a parent u must have felt...!!! 😭

The past recovers good thoughts that they dated before their marriage, they married and soundly living a lovely life altogether. But fate always tests the righteous. Here too RaTri are going through a testing time and i wish them good luck.

Fate does so... well said!!!

The memories are only something that keeping them from falling apart... !!

Like others, i too feel that the reports are not positive and Raghav will keep the promise to his beloved bossy wife and will find their kids.

Wait for next...😳

Amreen, well woven the story and beautifully themed. 👏Truth will prevail and The case will be solved with the black end twisting into the bright light of happiness.

Thanks a lottt...

It's was such a lovely review... I have no words to thank u 😊

How are your studies going on dear? Keep yourself ready and space up yourself for the studies. Take care, luv ya ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: SanaaMalik

Wow yaar u are amazing Aahana and Sharad have to read this I can't wait for a part 2
😊

Originally posted by: Az07

Lovely banner Amreen

Originally posted by: Rine

Nice Banner 👏

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

ammu I have read this update 5 times till now really a wonderful emotional story really loved it a lot

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

you are a excellent writer ammu.really really loved this story