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Desaitara1234

@Desaitara1234

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#201

sorry for being late dear school is about to start so was a little busy

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#202

The way the story progressed from the last chapter.. its mind boggling Amreen... ⭐️👏

I cud feel what RaTri were going thru,, their tears were silent... yet their hearts were beating n voicing so loud...

Raghav as Arif.. nice get up... nicely woven the plan... well taken the charge... n very well understanding the routine life of terrorists...

Liked how he went in n found his kids unconscious... but it was hard to learn that he was incontrollable... any one wud...

His own mistakes turned back that he is caught by them... ??/

Trisha n Swati did the best job ever... Decoding the code was a fab job... n they did it.. !

Liked how Raghav was helping them with his fingers touching the lappy n all was happening...

Very Well Researched n Presented the chapter... wonderful job Amreen... ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

So... all is not yet gone.. n all is not yet set...

Have to wait for the next as to how he was grabbed n how he will be out of that mess...

Lovely plot into action...n loved Raghav making fool of one of the best terrorist of the Den.. 😳

Liking your presence n your story coming back dear... keep coming n keep posting new ones too... !

For RaTri... Sab yahi hai... sab sahi hai... bas ek sabr aur sab tera... sab tera jo HAI tera... !

Thanks Amreen... God bless.. !🤗

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#203

This update has come out very well Amreen 👏

I just loved the execution of the plan and how raghav and Trisha implied that.

Lovely way of narrating even a minute description and your research has let me thinking of how intelligently you have brought up the action scenes with all details. Wow!⭐️⭐️ 👏👏👏 👏👏

I loved how raghav pacified Trisha where he himself was so nervous. He did what he cud. And on the other hand, Trisha acted so bravely in this time of tension and despair.

Raghav's planning was truly magical and i loved how he fooled the bhaijaan and then entered the most dangerous place his kids were stored. I loved him giving signals to the team with all the possible ways he cud. I loved how he reached his kids. The way he peeped in and then made the door open. Very touching scene of him taking his kids into himself. i got emotional. 🤗

But he is caught, that's not a good sign.

Even then he comes to know the decoding. And the team back - they have also decoded the code and all is clear to them.👏

Now only to reach the den, catch the culprits and save the kids and the city.

Very beautiful way of picturizing the whole picture in front of us dear. Loved every word of the update, as if i was watching it. 😃👏

Thanks dear for coming back to the forum. Missed you too. Luv ya for everything you do and did.❤️🤗

In luv with your works,

bhabhi

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Ahh!!!
Bro and Bhabhi came back 😉
Was eagerly waiting for reviews from u guys 😃
Loved them... will come shortly and reply to the sweet comments 😳
Loves and Hugs ❤️ 🤗

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kr_shivam14

@kr_shivam14

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: 1973deepak
Amreen,
Truly speaking the story was full of emotions and thriller. You have shown trisha with such pure feelings for her children and how much she cares for her children. I love raghav consoling trisha. In this story you have shown raghav as a strong and bold character. The story was totally based on current terrorism. In negative zone I want to say that the story is very emotional even I feel like crying😭 when trisha react by listening her children name and by remembering beautiful past with her children. Please update soon waiting for trisha's dangerous avatar.😳

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kr_shivam14

@kr_shivam14

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Hello di.I come to know about u by poonam di(16lvkkk) my sister. The story was bindas di. I was just thrilled

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Bloomie

@bloomie

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#207

woah lovely story

raghav and trisha after the terrorists even though thier own kids are in danger

shows a true cop's quality

the way raghav got into the terrorists den was fantastic

even trisha is handling everything so maturingly

loved the way the cbi team is supporting them

cont soon

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Vaidehi_1924

@Vaidehi_1924

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#208

This is my 1st story which I read on Agent Raghav forum.. well, thanks to Amreen for PMing me otherwise I'd forgotten that I'd bookmarked it!!

Spy stories & thrillers r exciting to read only when they do have an interesting plot.. kudos to U for that in this story.. d banner is eye-catching & perfectly apt (Y).. both kids r super cute & RaTri as always mind-blowing :)

So, d terrorists have planned a sleeper cell attack to release their terrorist brother & kidnapped RaTri's kids to take revenge from him, well inse aur kch expect v nhi kr skte :p

The flashbacks were like a breath of air amidst d current situation depicting RaTri's grief & sad demeanour.. (Y).. its costing them a lot to keep themselves normal in front of everyone, they botg r strength of each other, love d way support each other :)

I love whenever this happened in AR..disguising.. :D..but here, it was really risky!!U know while reading all this, I felt like I am watching a movie & everything is happening in front of my eyes '

U stopped it at a bad point yaar.. the readers will die with suspense that how Trisha & team will rescue Raghav & kids.. waiting for next, do update soon

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#209

ammu I have one more request. hope u don't get annoyed as I am requesting something for the second time .but can we have more fb scenes where Trisha remembers her pregnancy period or something like that .