RaTri SS : Black End!! Chapter 3 on Page 21 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Yeah Yeah... just curiosity got better of me!!
Hmm... I can say so!!
Preparing for NEET in one month is not at all easy... but I have tried!!

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

That's OK...if you wanna know anything else... Please ask...
I know preparation is not easy...we can just try... All the best dear...

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Hello Amreen

Originally posted by: bawaswift

The way the story progressed from the last chapter.. its mind boggling Amreen... ⭐️👏

Thank u bhaiya.. 🤗

I cud feel what RaTri were going thru,, their tears were silent... yet their hearts were beating n voicing so loud...

😭 😭 😭

Raghav as Arif.. nice get up... nicely woven the plan... well taken the charge... n very well understanding the routine life of terrorists...

Bollywood helps a lot 🥱

Liked how he went in n found his kids unconscious... but it was hard to learn that he was incontrollable... any one wud...

Thanks a lot 😳

His own mistakes turned back that he is caught by them... ??/

Trisha n Swati did the best job ever... Decoding the code was a fab job... n they did it.. !

Was too apprehensive about the code... glad u liked it!! 😃

Liked how Raghav was helping them with his fingers touching the lappy n all was happening...

Very Well Researched n Presented the chapter... wonderful job Amreen... ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

Thank u so so much!!! 😳

So... all is not yet gone.. n all is not yet set...

Have to wait for the next as to how he was grabbed n how he will be out of that mess...

Lovely plot into action...n loved Raghav making fool of one of the best terrorist of the Den.. 😳

Hope the wait doesn't traumatises u... does it?? 🤣

Am really bad to keep such loyal readers waiting 😆

Liking your presence n your story coming back dear... keep coming n keep posting new ones too... !

For RaTri... Sab yahi hai... sab sahi hai... bas ek sabr aur sab tera... sab tera jo HAI tera... !

Thanks Amreen... God bless.. !🤗

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

This update has come out very well Amreen 👏

😃 😃

I just loved the execution of the plan and how raghav and Trisha implied that.

Lovely way of narrating even a minute description and your research has let me thinking of how intelligently you have brought up the action scenes with all details. Wow!⭐️⭐️ 👏👏👏 👏👏

OMG!!!! 😲 Thank you so much bhabhi!! 😳

Love u ❤️

I loved how raghav pacified Trisha where he himself was so nervous. He did what he cud. And on the other hand, Trisha acted so bravely in this time of tension and despair.

That's what we call an ideal hubby 😃

Raghav's planning was truly magical and i loved how he fooled the bhaijaan and then entered the most dangerous place his kids were stored. I loved him giving signals to the team with all the possible ways he cud. I loved how he reached his kids.

Thank u so muchhh again... I had to do a lot of research for all that... and thanks to my engineer bhaijaan for helping me in that 😆

The way he peeped in and then made the door open. Very touching scene of him taking his kids into himself. i got emotional. 🤗

Awww... how sweet!!😳

But he is caught, that's not a good sign.

Even then he comes to know the decoding. And the team back - they have also decoded the code and all is clear to them.👏

Now only to reach the den, catch the culprits and save the kids and the city.

Thank u... yeah now it's just left for them to have the terrorists under teri claws!!

Very beautiful way of picturizing the whole picture in front of us dear. Loved every word of the update, as if i was watching it. 😃👏

Really... thank u bhabhi!!

Thanks dear for coming back to the forum. Missed you too. Luv ya for everything you do and did.❤️🤗

In luv with your works,

bhabhi

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

such a awesome update amreen you are simply awesome. you have researched soo much for this update. you have made it soo interesting. loved the RaTri moments soo much .thanks soo much for Such a awesome update. loved it soo much

Originally posted by: kr_shivam14

Originally posted by: kr_shivam14

Hello di.I come to know about u by poonam di(16lvkkk) my sister. The story was bindas di. I was just thrilled