RaTri SS : Black End!! Chapter 3 on Page 21 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Phew!! So finally you r back haan!!! Kitna intezaar karwaya tune...mujhe to laga tha yeh adhuri kahaani ban jayegi... Bt itna pressure rahne k bawajoot tu time nikaal k post kr rahi hai..tnx a lot for that...welcome back to forum Ammu drlng.. Was missing u badly dear...
Teaser s awsm nodoubtly...Trisha's delivery!!!waoo...it should be very interesting... update soon... Akhir intezaar khatam ho hi gaya.. [:D/] once again welcome back.. 🤗



Hi sweetie... tujhse to roz baat hoti hai 🥱
Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai na 🤣
No issues yaar... anything for u guys 😳
Thanks a lot... for welcome n feedback both 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DEKER

welcome back amreen , i am very happy to see you again in this forum😊. Coming to the teaser it was so interesting and soo cute i love it yar , thankyou so much for rejoining this forum and also for the teaser thankyou sooo...much dear

and Congrats for your result



Hey first of all welcome to my thread...
n thanks for ur welcome 😳
And thanks a lot... I never left it... just was busy!!
Thanks again!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Ammu did u read my story. Pls tell me how it was if u have read it



Sorry Tasha.. but I have bookmarked.it but couldn't read till now... There are so many stories I have to read... will soon do and let u know!!!
Am sure u must have rocked it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Az07

Welcome back Ammu
We missed you
Glad that ur back to forum
Very very happy u r turning this into a SS
Coming to teaser it's interesting
Looks like there's a FB scene of Trisha's delivery and it looked so natural Trisha in labour pain my God for more than a day it looked so natural when she blamed Raghav 😆
And poor Raghav got so embarrassed and doctor smiling because she is used to this scenario for years
😆
Continue soon



Thank u Uma... 🤗
Thanks a lot... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
A loud wail that Amreen is back... 👏
N the loudest wail of RaTi baby coming to the world.. ! Lovely teaser ... off to read the chapter now.. n will give the review later in the morning... !😳

Welcome back Amreen n that with such good grades... ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏
No worries dear... Any stream you wud opt.. it will be the best for you... An upcoming doc in making... that i know n feel very proud of you... !👍🏼
Keep the good job of what you want Writing ... right... ?//

It's fine dear... it was my wish.. But elders are born to make good decisions for us... !
All the best for your written works n Medicals.. ! I know you are capable of doing whatever you will take in your hands.. !
God bless.. !

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amreen...


That's my favourite part... lemme tell u now that screenwriting was something that always fascinated me... medicine is also something I like but writing is my first love... I even had plans to complete B.A. In Mass Media & Communication and then doing a 3 year PG course in Screenplay writing and direction from FTII, Pune followed by a diploma from the same!!
So that I can refine my writing and enter into film making and writing but alas!!! My dad isn't allowing me to do it... he says I can do anything other than media and I have no choice but to pursue my second career option.
But let's see what fate has in store... I so want to make my career in writing... hope I am able to!!
Thanks a million for the encouragement... it means a lot... hope u will keep giving ur invaluable feedback on my future works too...
Lots of love to my favourite member her... Dearest Bawa bro!! 🤗
Amreen

You are too sweet Amreen my sis... 🤗
Have replied you in the PM... have a look... !
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update ammu .loved it soo much it was truly marvelous. you are simply awesome dear. so have researched soo much for this update. it was soo informative. it was better than a episode so Agent Raghav. so much loved it .so raghav is going undercover as Arif to get the code black .Trisha asking him that isn't there another way to solve this and get their kids back.her worry was natural as her kids are already in danger and now her husband is too going there . The Ratri kissing after that was such a awesome scene .showed all their emotions at that time . so loved the plan by Raghav made to get all the information from the terrorists .it is such a well executed plan by all the team members .loved how Trisha decoded black with the names of the members of the terrorist group. The flashback scene was soo awesome. thanks soo much for completing my request .loved it soo much year .that was simply cute .their emotions shown were so natural. now Raghav saw their kids in the room in an semi conscious state .loved how he controlled his emotions over there .
OMG the last scene looks to scary .Raghav and the kids in danger .hope Trisha does something and they are saved .
why are you nervous sweetie. this is such a awesome update.you have researched soo much and Made it soo informative. simply loved it soo much. thanks a lot for such a awesome update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amreen...



Sorry Tasha.. but I have bookmarked.it but couldn't read till now... There are so many stories I have to read... will soon do and let u know!!!
Am sure u must have rocked it ❤️

no worries dear all the writer's of this forum are my inspiration to write something over here. hope u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome teaser Amreen and welcome back once again 🤗
It's worth the wait. The RaTri child is born and Trsiha is all in blaming Raghav 😉 More than awesome 😆
Loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice progress of the story and what a nervousness in between the lines !!! 👏👏
I liked Raghav coming in disguise of Arif but before that making Trisha a bit relieved was so necessary ! And it came out so lovingly !
Veru nice execution of the plot and Swati and Trisha helping with their skills and came out with the code of BLACK in terms.
Liked how Raghav made Bhaijaan a fool😛 And the way he entered the den, it was amazing to see him in disguise and sending the signals to Swati through his helping instruments. Liked him so aware of their attitude towards being human and being friends.
The way he asked the room to be unlocked, it was a sheer bliss for him that he got his kids and even the keys of the room. But at last the most scary terrorists caught him and the three lives are in danger, as so is the city.
Now the decoding is done, i guess the CBI team with police will reach in time and save everyone including the three hearts of Trisha !
Loved the recalling of Trisha of a happy family and how they got their two kids in this world. But got so emotional to see a helpless father watching his unconscious babies and struggling hard to keep the control.
Will wait to know the haps and mishaps of terrorists through the much appreciated team of CBI !
Amreen, it was worth the wait dearie ! Liked the chapter a lot and will be waiting for the next. Loves and hugs❤️

So here is the third chapter... Please tell me honestly how it came out!!!
Tried to inform in detail a few things and aspects of the terrorism world and ethical hacking!!
Was it too much??
Does the chapter look to lax????
Am nervy as he'll about this chapter and hence need detailed reviews!!

It came out so lovely as always Amreen 👏👏
And thanks for the detailed info they have helped us to understand the decoding and the other aspects too well ⭐️⭐️ Loved your efforts and the way U have described each and every thing with proper and researched details. Few words must be taken as much here pls. And thanks is a little word for what U have given us !👏👏
Missed you and your stories looking abandoned. Happy to get you back 🤗

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