RaTri OS : Kuch Khaas Hain... Part 2 on pg 6 and Note on pg 5 - Page 8

Originally posted by: -Amri-

This was AMAZING.

Loved your beautiful story. Keep writing and regale us with more RaTri tales:)

Thanks a lottt!!! @Amri... will Surely keep penning whenever free...

Originally posted by: babita..

Main kya karoon Amreen, main kya likhoon, Uff yummaaa, RaTri☺️☺️

Relished it, loved it, got fascinated by your every line dearie, me in the RaTri land

What a magnificent end to the two chapter story👏👏Awesome artist's impression of the two lovers who don't know the feelings of the other, and are not able to express themselves too. Such deep lines and minute descriptions -- kuch khaas toh hai😃⭐️⭐️

The song itself said so much and i loved to read it while reading the chapter ! Beautiful wordings, and going smoothly with the story, marvelous !!!

I loved to read your narration Amreen👏👏Very fine descriptions of emotions, inner perceptions and misunderstanding ! Everything leading to the confession of love and the mount of reaching each other's heart !

The way Raghav touched and held Trisha, My My☺️

The way Trisha surrendered and enjoyed being almost collapsing.😳The way RaTri melt into each other and forgot the world around them. The way Raghav searched for Trisha, and then the cutest fight. The way they both confessed and then hugged like🤗

Trisha's home sees them alone and finding them kissing for the life ! Amreen. Amreen. Amreen. All Loves to U❤️

I'm almost shivering while writing all this and wondering what U would think of me😛😉

Please hold me, i don't want to come out of this land😉

Trisha : Unse mili nazar ke mere hosh udd gaye

Raghav : Bhool gaya sab kuch, yaad nahi ab kuch

Naughtiness, lovely moments that followed, really irresistible as said by Bawa bro😛😉😆

I loved how you started the story and the jealousy took the front seat. But with this ending chapter, U have given a beautiful way to express the emotional flow of RaTri where they are together, want to be like that, but have many queries before moving on. Loved every bit of it, and enjoyed so so much. Thanks, per ye dil maange more😉🤗

Hello babita... hey may I know ur age... and yeah looks like u have also become crazy abt RaTri... ur review suggests that... waise me toh always in a RaTri land...
Thanks so much for ur lovely review...
Will reply in detail later... can now say that I loved ur review... and aapka dil maange more... Mera bhi... bas time ki kami hai...😉
Time milte hi I will be writing two more One Shots... I have two more ideas in my mind which will suit RaTri... but tell ur dil to wait till I am free... 😆
Loves and Regards... ❤️
Ciao
Amreen

@ananya925... hello and welcome to the forum dear... due to some issue am not able to quote ur reply... so commenting here... really thanks a lottt... amd don't worry... this long comment has made up for the last one... so no issues... will reply in detail soon... thoda busy hoon... plz understand...
love u and ur review
Amreen

Originally posted by: CT_Shreya

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Oh my! Amreen that was splendid! I'm not one to say many words when I try to praise someone but here I could go on and on. I loved the second part so much. The music, the dance, the closeness...so good. I actually played the song along with reading it and I really loved it!</font>

Oh thanks Shreya... really these sweet and lovely warm words mean a lot to me... so sweet that u can praise me so much... Wow... even I had played the song while writing part 2... thanks again...
Loves to u... ❤️
Amreen

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Part 2-

Nice os dear

love this story of yours its amazing

Amreen, I am so sorry for late comment. The story was so romantic and all the events was perfectly set first the jealousy factor and then rain scene and ratri confession. I love the line said by raghav- "Because I love you dammit... Pyaar karta hoon tumse... bohot chahta hoon tumhe... isliye tumhari fikar karta hoon... tumhe takleef mein mahi dekh sakta... sun liya..." I would have died at that moment. I love the jungly confession and then their closeness and I like cute trushna how sweet her mischievous act made raghav and trisha more closure. Ankit was really a idiot who can not see that raghav and trisha are madly in love with each other. I am sure that your new os will be awesome and lovely like previous one. 😳😊