RaTri OS : Kuch Khaas Hain... Part 2 on pg 6 and Note on pg 5 - Page 7

Originally posted by: CT_Shreya

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Amreen I would really love to read this, but as I don't have a lot of time on my hands to read in parts, can you please tell me when you're done? I'll read it all in one go and post my feedback together.😃</font>

Main kya karoon Amreen, main kya likhoon, Uff yummaaa, RaTri ☺️☺️

Originally posted by: radianteyes.

I am truly enchanted with your work
This was so so beautiful , I could actually visualize and to be true at sometimes feel the whole scene that went across my eyes .
I mean you have a beautiful power of expression , you could make people imagine the thing you have thought hats off.
Now I liked the whole of detailing and the best part was to add both of their's feeling on it .
It was so great to hear all of their POVs
Waiting for more from u.
Thanks for writing 😊

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Amazingly Awesome... !!! ⭐️👏

Amreen... its a sheer beauty to read the whole chapter in one go... n then realise that the end is so very beautiful n solemn.. !!! Just out of this world... ! Loved it ... thanks.. ! 😊

Hi bro... thanks a lot... For the long and quick feedback and and slowly for these lovely words... 😳😳

Awww... thanks dearest bro... really am overwhelming with response... coz this a is a little inactive forum with less members but a till it has reached 10 pages...

The way you have described the inner thoughts of RaTri... they are presented in a lovely aroma of passion n magical.. ⭐️ They both love each other immensely.. n have no idea of what the other end is thinking of.. ! They both have the capability to know what they cud be feeling.. but had no sign that they both are feeling alike.. ! Just loved your pen writing down their hearts out there.. !

Thank you again... Yeah they do love and adore each other but expressing becomes hard and they get tongue tied... remember the alliance wala scene... And I needed to show their feelings before they express it out.. thanks that u loved it...

The party ,, dance.,, n then the confession in the rains... Purely a visual treat to know the two colleagues are so madly in love n are not able to find out their feelings.. Wow.. !!!

Really... thanks again... at last Pyaar aur izhaar ho hi gaya... tho in a fictional way...😃😉

I loved your way of expressing their emotions n even fighting out of misunderstanding.. ! 😳 While the love is there... the idea is to know what they are craving for.. ! Great efforts to show the mental aspect of RaTri.. !

Thank u bro... really... My expressions... Oh thanks a lot... no words to reply to all the love I get here...😊

The confession n the knowing of Trushna's tricks.. the blushes on both the faces gives a smile to mine..😉 The more the merrier.. n the kitchen hug completes the missing thing that they were,,, n it made them closer n even more for the rest of their lives.. !!! 👏 Just irresistible.. ! 😳

Hmm... the cupid did her work...😉

Oh... she has made the strict boss go red with blushes in front of her MAN... 😆

Hmm... I don't how I express romance... but if u feel they are nice... Then thanks a million...

They are irresistible to me too...

The song is so aptly chosen n found.. n the lyrics gently matched the RaTri scenes.. ! 👏

Thanks dear for this very excellent performance by you /... where you have made RaTri dancing on your tunes,, n melting thru your pen.. 😃 Hats off.. !

Enjoyed it .,, !

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Romantic!!!! Passionate!!! Outstanding!!!👏

Hi Amreen😃

Amreen, this is the most loveliest part that i've ever read sweetie👏The purity is intact, the grandeur is highly elegant and the fine version to see what the love stands for RaTri!

What was going on in the minds, was not coming to the hearts! Raghav sensed his love for Trisha, but he had apprehensions and agony for her sagayi. Trisha wanted to be with him, blushing and surrendering, but she saw him sad and frustrated. What they were looking for, was not visible and what they were looking at was not the way it looked. Very tough way to convey the every scenic beauty, but you have overdo the mastery! Luv ya dearie for your awesome flow of descriptive love!⭐️

Be it the party scene, or the rains, Raghav's sincere concern made him so glued to her and the love is expressed! He not only made her closer to him, but fell for the same within himself. Love did it all!!!

The internal tussle and the misconceptions have played a vital role in their confession and the need to be with each other. And i loved to see them so proximate and contiguous to feel the first touch!❤️I loved to see them caring and not able to find the reality, cos this way they find each other exactly the way they wanted to

Very beautiful ending to see them confessing and then making up and even blushing for the ensued love! The wet Trisha, and the uncontrolled hunger of Raghav seemed still the moment, but you have pretty pleasingly given a scene of sheer bliss and the life together afterwards! Lovely and graceful ( and hot too😉❤️)

Amreen, yes sweetie you have penned it down and i can see a lovely writer throwing away all the apprehensions aside and writing what she is loving to write down. So very sweet of you👏👏

Thanks dear, for this very special and my first encounter with RaTri that you have made me watch. Luv ya❤️🤗and keep it up!👍🏼

Want to see you writing more and even more!