RaTri OS : Khatta Meetha Rishtaa... - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Awesome - you wrote the first fan fiction on our couple.

It was very well done, and I loved the moments that you portrayed.

Kudos!

Thank you...
Congrats to u too on d initiation of fanfiction on the forum...
Thanks for the warm words... 😊

Originally posted by: mayraa

Hey amreen...I'm not a viewer of ARCB but ur story is superb really enjoyed it...

Now I think I should watch it...

Thanks for pm dear...

Hey Maayra...
Am so happy that I am able to increase a viewer for the show... The realisation gives me immense pleasure...
U should absolutely watch it... amazing show and best for Sharad deewanis... like me... 😳 😳
You r welcome...

Originally posted by: radianteyes.

Lovely story and so beautifully written , I was hooked into it till the end
I have nothing more to say simply loved it

Thank you very very much yaara...
Am so glad u liked it...

Originally posted by: ...mano...

It was absolutely amazing👏loved it!! Congratulations on the first ever fanfic oneshot on our RaSha😃Thanks for writing it.👍🏼

Thank you dear... 😊
Congratulations to you also... aakhir fanfiction ki start ho gayi... 😃
U r welcome... 😊

hello :)
well i am pleased to get a RaTri OS..
i am becoming their fan now :p
Coming to the OS, I thank a friend of mine for giving me the link..
The sudden spur of words was fab ...
Raghav wooing a girl... not paying heed to anybody..
then..the drama in the cabin..
Pooe trisha..annoyed and jealous ...but raghav supported her...
The samosa scene was cute too..that would be.a miracle..
I loved the os.. plz excuse me for the small comment dear.. using mt phone..
plz keep writing.

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu

lovely and cute story...

Bina boss ki permission k raghav aur rajbir ne gauri ko birthday party di...

boss ne mara nhi raghav ko😆I know trisha achchi boss hai

aur waise bi raghav pr uska bas chalta hi kahaan hai raghav wahi krta hai jo use krna hota hai

Dr. Arti raghav ki tarif kr rhi hai to trisha ko achcha nhi lag rha

to trisha ko kaho wo bhi raghav ki tariff kr skti hai

Raghav ka samosa prem tak to thik tha...but trisha raghav k liye samose bana kr layegi

ye raghav ne soch bhi kaise liye😆😆😆usi tel me trisha raghav ko tal degi😆😆😆

case was nice...but case k end k bad jo RaTri scene tha wo zabardast tha

lol raghav ne kya bola aur trisha ne kya jawab dia

raghav bahut chalak hai...btao boss ko bhi lapet lia...

bechari trisha bhagne k alwa kuch aur uske pass option nhi bacha tha

a lovely os...RaTri k hisab se ek dum perfect...

Thank you dearu..
Nahi... nahi maara... Bach gaya bechaara...
Ab vo Raghav hai... apni marzi ka maalik...
Jealousy is the first step to love... Toh Aarti tareef karegi toh Trisha ko gussa aayega hi naa...
Samose nahi banayegi... sabko pata hai... bolne mein kya jaata hai...
U liked RaTri scene... Thanks yaar...
Ab paidaishi chaalak hai banda...
Thanks again dear...

Originally posted by: babita..

Beautiful and a cute story👏👏Amreen, U have done it again🤗

Thanks dearie, for this sweet shot and the first one at this forum👏

The case and then the cabin scene, well merged the relationship of RaTri that;s going like a khatta meetha rishta. Well given the title👍🏼

Got smiles while reading the last scene where Raghav said something and Trisha felt else. The burst out made me giggles and i loved how this man is loving to have his boss a slight embarrassment.😉

I can visualize them bantering and talking and raghav smiling on her leaving like one who is caught😛Lovely scenic start. Would love to know if they will open their hearts someday and have themselves more than a companion.
What a magnificent way to know more of RaTri from your pen Amreen, will wait for more.👏

Loves❤️

Thanks babita... Am sooo happy you liked it... I knew it that u wud love the title... from the very first day I had thought their r ship to be very khatta meetha like a yummy imli...
Awww... how sweet the scene face u smile... am so happy I could do that...
Oh Raghav loves to irritate Trisha... and never leaves a single chance... then how can he he leave now...
Thanks for liking the start... will surely write more... ek din toh zaroor aayega when their hearts will talk... wait till the day...
Love
Amreen

Originally posted by: babita..

Lovely banner Amreen👏👏The RaTri pics are awesome and makes a cute story😳

The hands making heart is sooo sweet. Loved it🤗

Thanks dear... even I loved the heart...

That was great! Very well written...

What about this thread Amreen ??😃