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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: babita..

What about this thread Amreen ??😃


If u mean with me replying to all ur comments... then u am extremely sorry dear... not able to reply coz am badly stuck... will try to do it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

lovely os amreen. Really liked it a lot
liked how u showed the case being solved a lot . Really liked that .liked the scene where Trisha gets jealous when she see Raghav with somebody else thanks so much for this RaSha Os


Thank you Tasha...
Thank god am able to write the case in a way that most if u liked it... I have no experience to write crime fiction..
Jealousy to hogi hi naa...
U r most welcome...
Love you...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
RaTri... I love this name for the couple.. so if you allow me Amreen..😳


Lovely OS... n you have kept the essence of the main leads alive.. !⭐️👏
What i loved the most is the way RaTri knows each other so well... They both have respect for each other n the frndship they possess is bonded so well...!
Yeah.. there is sumthing else that we see in each other's eyes n hearts.. but they never speak up.. or rather we can say that .. Love needs no words.. !😉😃
The case,, the Gauri's birthday ,, the Aisha's remarks in Raghav's cabin to Trisha,, all are so well narrated.. ! A good tricky route to see how Trisha is inclined towards Raghav n so caring she is.. ! Raghav is a friend who play pranks n pull legs.. but he knows his limits n this way they are going on in work n even in life.. !
Loved the convo of RaTri later... the likeness n jealousy side by side can be a path to their hearts speaking.. but this may take hell of the time cos wo accept nahi karne wale..😛Only way is the time will tell them how special they are for each other or one another.. !
Awesome story Amreen.. keep it up dear.. ! You have excelled in taking up the characters so well.. ! Hope to read more from you.. !
[DIV][B][I]Thanks a lott

Hey bro... sorry for being so late with my reply...
And yeah... even u love the name RaTri for them... but used RaSha because of Tasha's poll... so...

Thanks a lot... Oh really... was I able to keep their essence alive... Thanks..
Their is an invisible string that connects them together and their hearts...
Yup.. They have something in the hearts for each other and their language need no words to talk to each other...
I am so happy u like my narration... Yes... Trisha is inclined towards him and she has a space for him in her heart above anyone else...
Raghav is the only one in the office who has the authority to pull Trisha's legs and joke around... No one else and Trisha only can tolerate his mischiefs... no one else's... such is the equation...

Abhi nahi kahenge par kabhi toh jazbaato ko aawaz milegi... and the time is not far away as per me...
Thanks a lot again bro... I am so happy to know that my writings are adored so much by u all... will surely pen more stories whenever time permits... u r most welcome...
Thanks again...
Regards
Amreen
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Aalina.

I just watched last two episodes and loved it. And now read this amazing OS.👏👏



Thanks a lot dear Aalina...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Lovely banner and very interesting one Amreen👏Raghav and Trisha are looking quite energetic with their work and with each other! Thanks for yet another fab in your cap sweetie👍🏼

Khatta meetha rishta!
Honestly, Amreen i've not yet watched any of the episodes, we don't have this channel here in Chicago. But, thanks to the online promos and a glimpse of an episode and the only scene when Trisha was about to tell Raghav something, and he was found sleepy and she covered him with his coat. This is for the sweetness! And one more scene when he was ruling the scene with his skills and solving a case. This is what i know of this show from last night, and the first thing in this morning is this review😳Hope it's up to the mark!😃
What i've found in your story is the true picture of this show is handled with. Loved the OS and enjoyed the sweetness of RaTri⭐️
Trisha's hold on the case and in the office is well portrayed, and Raghav's hold on every case and it's progress dealt by him is well judged!👏
Trisha entering the cabin, and joining the colleagues in their laughs is the sign that she is not only a strict officer, but also a human being who loves to be with her friends. Her liking of Raghav is purely from her heart and her jealousy over other girls talking of his handsomeness is natural.😳
Raghav asking Aisha for apology landed me in the respect he has for her. He can do any kinda flirt with the accused to solve the case, but the time his boss is insulted, he took no time to take the charge. I loved your pen writing this. Loving and beauty!!!
Case is solved, but the hearts have not yet solved their unknown feeling. Where Trisha cares for him missing his Mom, he cares for her being given proper regards. Though the cute banters and leg pulling continues, there is something that we can see it's different from others. This pair behaves differently and somewhere in between their talks, they leave some words never uttered. This is where lies what's missing and called " more than friends "
Loved them relishing this sweet and sour relation, with their hearts coming closer every time and minds always speaking while caring of the words. Yes, like every one i wud also like to wait for the day when they say the unsaid words their hearts possessing for long.
Lovely, beautiful and very adorable story Amreen, i enjoyed it and will always remember this part whenever the name of the show comes to me - cos for me this is the start of RaTri😳😃
Thanks sweetie, luv ya❤️🤗




First of all apologies for being so late to reply... was too busy...
Secondly Thanks a lot... i take the che credit for pics while banner credit goes to Koeli_Appy...
U r most welcome Swati bhabhi...
Oh... Thanks for liking the title... I feel that their equation is no less than a sweet sour tamarind...
Oh... plz give the show a go online if u can... am sure u will love SK there as u loved I'm him in KTLK... He is teriffic here too as always...
And the scene u are talking about was one of the bestest scenes of the show...it depicted her care and concern for him so sweetly. If u want to see some more plz watch episode 4 and episode 16... These have the cutest RaTri scenes... And Raghav always rules the team with his bang on performance and reliable skills... love him for that.

Yes my dear... ur review is absolutely awesome...
Thank you so so so much... They both am have the ability to hold the case awesomely... and the coordination is amazing... as if each knows the other too well...


Obviously each boss is a human at last...and needs to laugh and smile to erase the worries of the world. She may be strict as a boss but as a woman jealousy is natural for the person u admire when somebody else is commenting on the person's looks...
Whike Raghav can be flirtatious at times for some reason... how van he tolerate someone insulting his dear boss... no way!!! Thanks a lot again...

A day the heart to heart case will solve too... and then no stopping will be there... Care is always there among then for the other... be it any situation... an hence the story goes for them to be "much more than friends"...

Thanks a lot... hope u have relished their Khatta Meetha Rishtaa too... hope CVs don't make us wait too much for the unsaid words to be mouthed... and if they do... we are here to fulfill our needs for RaTri romance dose... I feel honoured to know that this has made an impression on u that u will always remember this... And this is start for me too... and a beautiful one..
Love you too Bhabhi...
Regards
Amreen


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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: PrInCeSs_dIVa

That was great! Very well written...

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Thank you so much Kajol... when will I get to read more from u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Very nice.
Loved it.
Very beautiful love story.
Awesomely written and narrated.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
I always be a secret follower of agent raghav and your stories on it. This made me to join this forum, I just love the story and the way you describe the characters and their feelings (especially of trisha and raghav). Raghav ne kya Kaha aur trisha ne kya javab diya, akbar dil ki baat zubaan pe a hi jaati Hai. I like the part when trisha was jealous and the samosa wala part raghav ne soch bhi kaise Liya ki trisha will make samosa for him. 😉
I am eagerly waiting for more stories written by you that have lot suspense, teasing, love etc.❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

I always be a secret follower of agent raghav and your stories on it. This made me to join this forum, I just love the story and the way you describe the characters and their feelings (especially of trisha and raghav). Raghav ne kya Kaha aur trisha ne kya javab diya, akbar dil ki baat zubaan pe a hi jaati Hai. I like the part when trisha was jealous and the samosa wala part raghav ne soch bhi kaise Liya ki trisha will make samosa for him.😉

I am eagerly waiting for more stories written by you that have lot suspense, teasing, love etc.❤️



Thank u deepak!!
My god... Kya kahu yaar mai.. itni saari tareef kar di aapne 😆
Thank u... very very very much!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome amreen loved this one

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