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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
laila,
your opinion is respected and held up as your idea on a subject..u don't see any1 else pillorying you on it..humour at the bard's expense, wordsworth , shaw , tennyson .. or any other creative effort is a part of the process..it happened then and shall continue after we have passed...
i am perfectly entitled..just as you are , to opinions, to say that i found ramas's effort honestly..funny!!! there is no issue of vendetta on any of our parts..and yes i do speak collectively on behalf of "us people" as we have been labelled..the only protest is that opinions that differ are not handled maturely..
that said..if there was a post that i have agreed with , i have said so..and so have the others..to do this you guys vs. us people is infantile...
we are all adults with our opinions and a forum is a site where all can express their thoughts...
guess i was really wrong..this IS becoming a place for yes people!!
not finding humour is your prerogative..WE thought it was hilarious..and we said so...
c'est tout!!
also ..as a PS..the basic function of being a critic is to dissect a work and view it through a lens of objectivity...science thrives on the art of asking questions and not accepting things ad nauseum...
a writer can NEVER agree with a critic..because his/her work is his/her baby...but he/she learns that criticism is something hat produces better work in the future and sharpens one's skills...

i am , frankly, like sankum, disgusted by this constant discussion and monitoring..it was in no way vulgar or base...and neither was it malicious, despite how you guys choose to view/portray it...
but the dev team are all.. all honourable people..
Edited by femmedivine - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: femmedivine

laila,
your opinion is respected and held up as your idea on a subject..u don't see any1 else pillorying you on it..humour at the bard's expense, wordsworth , shaw , tennyson .. or any other creative effort is a part of the process..it happened then and shall continue after we have passed...
i am perfectly entitled..just as you are , to opinions, to say that i found ramas's effort honestly..funny!!! there is no issue of vendetta on any of our parts..and yes i do speak collectively on behalf of "us people" as we have been labelled..the only protest is that opinions that differ are not handled maturely..
that said..if there was a post that i have agreed with , i have said so..and so have the others..to do this you guys vs. us people is infantile...
we are all adults with our opinions and a forum is a site where all can express their thoughts...
guess i was really wrong..this IS becoming a place for yes people!!
not finding humour is your prerogative..WE thought it was hilarious..and we said so...
c'est tout!!
also ..as a PS..the basic function of being a critic is to dissect a work and view it through a lens of objectivity...science thrives on the art of asking questions and not accepting things ad nauseum...
a writer can NEVER agree with a critic..because his/her work is his/her baby...but he/she learns that criticism is something hat produces better work in the future and sharpens one's skills...

i am , frankly, like sankum, disgusted by this constant discussion and monitoring..it was in no way vulgar or base...and neither was it malicious, despite how you guys choose to view/portray it...
but the dev team are all.. all honourable people..

How interesting that it was only "your group" that found Ramas' poem hilarious when it was not meant to be ha-ha funny in the first place.
Edited by Laila2009 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
sankum i aim to please.....

simi to abhi:

jalane nikli hai tumhari behen anita hamare armaanon ka funeral pyre
tum lagate kyun nahin uske bhi peeche ek gunda for hire
jo kam se kam karde puncture uski gaadi ke ek do tire
taaki peecha na kar sake woh hamara aur ho jaaye retire



in reply abhi writes.....

darling, the newly appointed pontiff
in a manner most harsh and stiff
has warned me to not create a tiff
by threatening to throw me off a cliff


Edited by bewajah - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
How interesting that it was only "your group" that found Ramas' poem hilarious when it was not meant to be ha-ha funny in the first place.
Imagine that! That there should be people who do have a sense of humor! Of course the original wasn't meant to be 'funny' (if there's one thing the original author cannot be accused of, it is a sense of humor) . . . your sense of duty, loyalty (bordering on the obsequious?), defense of the weak, downtrodden, underprivileged is to be lauded. However, Laila, your withering disapproval of 'us,' 'you guys', 'vengeful', 'your group', is falling on the same deaf ears as our 'protests' were!! Had you but half the gumption to speak up then about the injustice, your words now would have been a great deal more tasteful, if not palatable! This is a free country, protests will not cease, so unless you can learn the bitter lesson of equity, in my very unhumble opinion, you should save your breath to cool your porridge!!
Oh and while you're at it - GROW UP and take it on the chin like a woman!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: SValeCalGal

How interesting that it was only "your group" that found Ramas' poem hilarious when it was not meant to be ha-ha funny in the first place.
Imagine that! That there should be people who do have a sense of humor! Of course the original wasn't meant to be 'funny' (if there's one thing the original author cannot be accused of, it is a sense of humor) . . . your sense of duty, loyalty (bordering on the obsequious?), defense of the weak, downtrodden, underprivileged is to be lauded. However, Laila, your withering disapproval of 'us,' 'you guys', 'vengeful', 'your group', is falling on the same deaf ears as our 'protests' were!! Had you but half the gumption to speak up then about the injustice, your words now would have been a great deal more tasteful, if not palatable! This is a free country, protests will not cease, so unless you can learn the bitter lesson of equity, in my very unhumble opinion, you should save your breath to cool your porridge!!
Oh and while you're at it - GROW UP and take it on the chin like a woman!!

Aw you missed us guys then didn't you?? 😉
Couldn't stick it out on your own. It took you a whole week and this is the only plan you could come up with?? 😆😆😆
Give me a break Ms. Hypocrite. You only feel the need for others to stand up for you. You have no principles. I saw it the day when I got my warning. Didn't see you anywhere around when I was not posting. So don't come here and give me your high and mighty bashans about standing up or injustice blah blah blah. This only matters when it effects you. Oh, and let me add here, I took matters into my own hands. You on the other hand have to resort to poking fun of people and you can't even do it alone.
Edited by Laila2009 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Aw you missed us guys then didn't you??
Oh yes! dreadfully! I'm (as are my 'disciples') pining away from a serious lack of cerebral stimulation!
Couldn't stick it out on your own. It took you a whole week and this is the only plan you could come up with??
How right you are! 'We' are not a terribly imaginative bunch - and I the least of them all!! That privilege lies entirely with you!
Give me a break Ms. Hypocrite. You only feel the need for others to stand up for you.
Daaarrrling! Do please expend the picosecond it would take (for surely you can spare that amount of time) to see when/where I did stand up for 'myself!' That there are like-minded people, speaks volumes for those who will not tolerate high-handedness, as if this were a bloody private forum. Furthermore, do you - for a nanosecond this time - think that others are incapable of independent thought simply because their's appear to synchronize with 'mine'?!!
You have no principles. I saw it the day when I got my warning. Didn't see you anywhere around when I was not posting.
Ah yes! Is that why you were sending me a PM asking for my return because the postings on the forum had become limited (I think that was the term you used)?!! I typically choose not to bandy around with those who have amply demonstrated their intransigence over the picayune . . . especially if it's on a subject of which they have nary a clue! Besides, talk about hubris! I was not around when you were posting?!! Hah! You truly think you have anything of substance to say?!!! Something that I - or those of my 'ilk' - should want to 'hear'?! We did not tarry around posts that elicited not an iota of interest in our individual breasts! I subsribe to the notion of 'chacun a son gout' . . .
You on the other hand have to resort to poking fun of people and you can't even do it alone.
A doggerel by any other name is still a doggerel! The 'fun' was at the expense of that, not a person! And if it's a case of vituperation, then dear, we could not hold a candle to you!! Go back and read some of your own posts - they should be the best medicine to cure you of any and all of your maladies - professed or otherwise!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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SValeCalGal]Aw you missed us guys then didn't you??
Oh yes! dreadfully! I'm (as are my 'disciples') pining away from a serious lack of cerebral stimulation!
(YAWN)
Couldn't stick it out on your own. It took you a whole week and this is the only plan you could come up with??
How right you are! 'We' are not a terribly imaginative bunch - and I the least of them all!! That privilege lies entirely with you!
(YAWN AGAIN)
Give me a break Ms. Hypocrite. You only feel the need for others to stand up for you.
Daaarrrling! Do please expend the picosecond it would take (for surely you can spare that amount of time) to see when/where I did stand up for 'myself!' That there are like-minded people, speaks volumes for those who will not tolerate high-handedness, as if this were a bloody private forum. Furthermore, do you - for a nanosecond this time - think that others are incapable of independent thought simply because their's appear to synchronize with 'mine'?!!
(YAWN AGAIN AND AGAIN)
You have no principles. I saw it the day when I got my warning. Didn't see you anywhere around when I was not posting.
Ah yes! Is that why you were sending me a PM asking for my return because the postings on the forum had become limited (I think that was the term you used)?!! I typically choose not to bandy around with those who have amply demonstrated their intransigence over the picayune . . . especially if it's on a subject of which they have nary a clue! Besides, talk about hubris! I was not around when you were posting?!! Hah! You truly think you have anything of substance to say?!!! Something that I - or those of my 'ilk' - should want to 'hear'?! We did not tarry around posts that elicited not an iota of interest in our individual breasts! I subsribe to the notion of 'chacun a son gout' . . .
OH MY GOODNESS, I THOUGHT YOU HAD YOUR HEAD UP YOUR (CLEARING THROAT) WHEN YOU WROTE THAT LAST POST WHEN YOU TALKED ABOUT HOW WONDERFUL YOU WERE AND THREATENED TO LEAVE (PASSIVE AGGRESSIVE BEHAVIOR - TEXT BOOK VARIETY).
BUT THIS IS HILARIOUS 😆😆😆
WAH WAH!!! YAAR, DO YOU ALSO SAY MIRROR MIRROR ON THE WALL WHO IS THE FAIREST OF THEM ALL?
You on the other hand have to resort to poking fun of people and you can't even do it alone.
A doggerel by any other name is still a doggerel! The 'fun' was at the expense of that, not a person! And if it's a case of vituperation, then dear, we could not hold a candle to you!! Go back and read some of your own posts - they should be the best medicine to cure you of any and all of your maladies - professed or otherwise!!!!
WOW, YOUR POSTS ARE A GOOD CURE FOR INSOMINA
👏👏👏
Just as I thought you could not respond without taking each sentence and dissecting it.

Bahenji, Have a nice day.😛



Edited by Laila2009 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Laila can I dare ask your age??? Cuz it is beyond me how a grown woman can be so immature. How long can you argue over a fight that was not intended to include you in the first place! Move on with your life already! And are so academically premature that you couldn't comprehend anything and responded with " yawn"???? Btw insomnia is not spelled insomina!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: chocoholicFarwa

Laila can I dare ask your age??? Cuz it is beyond me how a grown woman can be so immature. How long can you argue over a fight that was not intended to include you in the first place! Move on with your life already! And are so academically premature that you couldn't comprehend anything and responded with " yawn"???? Btw insomnia is not spelled insomina!

Oh, so this fight is with Ramas? O, on behalf of the group you want to admit you are not complimenting her poetry but mocking it? Really, what high school type behavoir is that from all you padah likhi women? I thought with all the education amongest you, this type of behavior would be beyond you - and you complain about me???😆😆😆
Here, you can spell check this: YAWN!!!
Edited by Laila2009 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gals Gals what's happening. This is a discussion forum and not a battle field.

We all look at things in different ways and thats alright. But lets not take it to a situation where we end up fighting. Ramas has written her poetry and lets respect her work. This is not for any contest and its her personal interpretation so lets not go as far as Iambic pentameters.

KB your poem was really hilarious but there was pun intented. Yes when a topic is opened its up for discussion but lets not take potshots. It looks like you were upset over Ramas over something prior to this and this may be a retaliation to that.

You are free to post even if you do not agree but please put your comments across in a manner that does not offend the member posting. Right now the discussion has taken a whole different turn and lets get it back to what it was about Abjhi and Simi's love in poetry.KB I am sure you can share some meaningful shayaars and not just dissected ones.

Lets forgive and forget and move on. Happy Discussing!!!

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