simi's beautiful msg pg 1 & updated pg 3!!!!! - Page 7

Originally posted by: ramas

Thanks yaar this was my kind of msg. Simi is calling herself radha who is going crazy after her natkhat lal. for her abhi is natkhat lal as one minutes he puuls the craziest prans and the next he is ready to solve all her problems and take care of her.

He behaves really like anatkhat child doing crazy abd stupid things liek putting chili seeds in halwa and yet he takes on cahllenge to deat RB and get her dad's shop.

Her self radha for her kanha(abhi), a premdiwani who is waiting for her abhi.

Actually dadi was just tlling I can't stand chillis and th next omnt she was on fire😆

Originally posted by: shanti05

Actually dadi was just tlling I can't stand chillis and th next omnt she was on fire😆

I miss dadi now. she needs to comeback for more chilles.😆

Originally posted by: Tas

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww u r a gifted writer..or i must say poet..awesome yaar...simi ne to do chaar line likhi..bt u wrote the whole poem..and its fantastic..it conveys bth simi and abhi'sfeelings very beautifully..loved it...the whole rhyming process and all the words used r jst beautiful and perfect...
hey i knw u r already writing a ff..bt start one more na...i am dying to read more ff on abhi-simi..i need some dose of their beautiful..passinate romance.... 😊

thhans I will start new FF totally diff style with short chapters.

Originally posted by: bee5

Hi ramas,

Wow!! you having amazing talent!!
Just now I got up and logged into the forum and reading this 1st, it was a treat and a great way to start the day!! Hope my rest of day goes as beautiful as your kavita.

maanna padega mere yaar
tumne rok liya Abhi ko traffic me,
taaki tum likh sako chaar aur line mere yaar

Loved the stronger Simi appearing in each and every line after "samajh payi hu ab mai tera pyar".
Also the Abhi in last para when he replies to Simi that he would ask her father to give her hand was adorable especially the lines "aapki beti ka hath dedo muje ek baar".
Why not Abhi, even I would recommend RS to trust you and give his daughter to you, you are the right johari who had identified what a gem Simi is!

ramas, I don't have even an inch of talent that you have, but I felt, these lines would be nice with the following changes:
"bani aaj hai darshdiwani" -> "bani aaj ek darshdiwani"
"ab sukh rahe hai mere pran" -> "ab sukh rahe hai mere pran mere yaar"

Bee I am still thinking how to cahnge those lines I will change them and let you know Thanks any one can write you can write as well you can give a try.😊

Originally posted by: ramas

I miss dadi now. she needs to comeback for more chilles.😆

Maybe Dadi will come with Nakul on saturday..
I really like Abhi that he prank and same time mature person..

Originally posted by: pop77

Maybe Dadi will come with Nakul on saturday..
I really like Abhi that he prank and same time mature person..

youa re right dadi may accompany Nakul. I hope she isnults anit aonne more time that will be a delight to warch.

Abhi to Simi

the pawns have been dispatched to stem the tide
unfortunately they know not how to deride
is this the result of your search far and wide
perhaps its time for them to take a bow and step aside.

😃

Originally posted by: shanti05

Yeah Bees his exprssion was really taken him for a surprise and then he gives a nice reply back !! Yes he never thought that Simi cud write such lines.. Actually its really sad that Simi's playful momnts ar hidden somewhere !! Abhi is trying to pull them out evn the catching game and then she also ready to play that with him and thn the way she pulls him by th collor and tells him not to leave her ..

I hope Simi can live her happiness whnever she is with Abhi😳

yes, that was so good ... I missed it when I saw first and when I replayed I found that. I loved her pulling him by the collar. That was such an endearing moment.

Originally posted by: bee5

yes, that was so good ... I missed it when I saw first and when I replayed I found that. I loved her pulling him by the collar. That was such an endearing moment.

simi deserves to live her own life and now that Nitu and anuj are happy in their own way and have their love simi to realize that she has to live her own life and that life with her love abhi. All those hidden feelings are coming out that were burried in her heart for abhi in form of this msg.