simi's beautiful msg pg 1 & updated pg 3!!!!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: bee5

yes, i was bowled-out on KB bcos of the SMS technology used.👏 thats really good and used to fullest!

I saw agree here. I like to see simi this say sending such msgs to make abhi crazy about her even more. It has been 3 days and I still can;t get over her msg.

Too bad I could not judge lol I not understand

aah!! was this iambeic pentameter??? where is the bard when i need him?? oh wait..there is he..in the throes of subterranean jugglytwirls and twists
iss ke aage hum..aur kya kahen..

Originally posted by: bee5

...and to think of it, Simi sends that message in such a hurry and the expression on Abhi's face when he reads that was just awesome!! It was exactly how a person who has no knowledge that the other can write such lines would have when he reads that! Abhi never knew Simi was capable of writing those playful lines and he is in wonderment! That was such a great scene!! I too am fida over that initial SMS from Simi. Kudos to the creatives.

and ramas, your extensions were equally good. Each one of those punch lines were like googly and I liked him calling her 'sarkar' the best!! He likes her to control him, as if in "I am all yours"!

I am stil not over it after 3 days and watched that scene so many times. i was sold first time I watched. It has such a deep meaning. Simi calling herself Radha jiske man me sirf uska sawara(abhi) hi tha. Thanks for the complement, I can describe things better in poetry than words. it is god's gift i discoverd just few years ago.. simi is definately a sarkar as when she is in charge no one can say anything/😆😆

Originally posted by: pop77

Today epi. was treat for us. When Abhi read message, he can't believe that Simi should wrote this lines..
Now we know that simi loves Abhi as much as Abhi love her...

Bee they use new technology with old way message,,,

simi surely loves abhi she is tooshy to tell him. But the way she looks at him it shows. Every time she looks at him she is lost.😊

Originally posted by: Laila2009

As always Ramas you are an excellent poet.

thanks Lailla I try. I love wrting poetry. when I see a romance or sadness it just comes out in words.😊

kab aaoge mere yaar (kehta hai dil tujhe pukaar)
chhed diye hai tumne dhadkan ke taar (jaise ho Ravi Shankar ki sitar)
aa jao bas is baar (agli baar, barraumbaar)
ab ho nahi raha intejar (inteJAR???) (na aye to ho jaoongi bekaar)
jiya ho raha hai bekraar (chaayi hai bahaar)
karne chaah raha hai ikraar (lekin milenge papa ke thappad lagataar)
karti hun mai tumse pyar (baar baar, beemaar, daal ke daam ke maar)

abhi replies
jeena tumhare bina hua duswar (vs.11var?? somvaar, mangalvar ityaadi...)
abhi aa rahun hun mere yaar (thuma hua hai sara sunsaar)
kar lo mujhpe aitbaar (vah vah, hun kaisa main funkaar)
mai tumhara hun dildar (itna ki chud raha hai tez bukhaar)
karta hun tumse mai bhi pyar (chashme ka number hua dus huzaar)
tum ho meri sarkar..(not the ram gopal varma 1..one hopes)

when they meet abhi

mai aa gaya meri sarkar (maai..yahan maai kya kar rahi hai...) (tum ho mere jadaoo haar)
karta hun mai ikraar (issse hai nahin mujhe koi inkaar)
ho gaya hai mujhe tumse pyar (keh do ub sub ko 'khabardaar!')
kya kaheti ho dildar (kyon? Chalen chaand ke us paar?)

simi
haan karti hun tumse mai bhi pyar (itna ki mera bukhaar to hua degree ek saw char) ab jab ankhe?? huyi hai ??char (uske chaar aur tumhare bhi chaar..what a major amount of aachaar!!!)
ho gayi mai to sharmsar (lekin phir bhi hun tumhare liye uphaar)
tham lo mujhe mere dildar (na to ley jaye ga mujhe humara jamadaar)
chhupalo bahon me mere yaar (phir kaise hoga mera deedar?)
karlo pyar ki baate do char...(and so ends the emoshional atyaachaar.. wah!wah! wah!...thenk u all, in ehdvaance!!)

Originally posted by: KB_Axer

kab aaoge mere yaar (kehta hai dil tujhe pukaar)
chhed diye hai tumne dhadkan ke taar (jaise ho Ravi Shankar ki sitar)
aa jao bas is baar (agli baar, barraumbaar)
ab ho nahi raha intejar (inteJAR???) (na aye to ho jaoongi bekaar)
jiya ho raha hai bekraar (chaayi hai bahaar)
karne chaah raha hai ikraar (lekin milenge papa ke thappad lagataar)
karti hun mai tumse pyar (baar baar, beemaar, daal ke daam ke maar)

abhi replies
jeena tumhare bina hua duswar (vs.11var?? somvaar, mangalvar ityaadi...)
abhi aa rahun hun mere yaar (thuma hua hai sara sunsaar)
kar lo mujhpe aitbaar (vah vah, hun kaisa main funkaar)
mai tumhara hun dildar (itna ki chud raha hai tez bukhaar)
karta hun tumse mai bhi pyar (chashme ka number hua dus huzaar)
tum ho meri sarkar..(not the ram gopal varma 1..one hopes)

when they meet abhi

mai aa gaya meri sarkar (maai..yahan maai kya kar rahi hai...) (tum ho mere jadaoo haar)
karta hun mai ikraar (issse hai nahin mujhe koi inkaar)
ho gaya hai mujhe tumse pyar (keh do ub sub ko 'khabardaar!')
kya kaheti ho dildar (kyon? Chalen chaand ke us paar?)

simi
haan karti hun tumse mai bhi pyar (itna ki mera bukhaar to hua degree ek saw char) ab jab ankhe?? huyi hai ??char (uske chaar aur tumhare bhi chaar..what a major amount of aachaar!!!)
ho gayi mai to sharmsar (lekin phir bhi hun tumhare liye uphaar)
tham lo mujhe mere dildar (na to ley jaye ga mujhe humara jamadaar)
chhupalo bahon me mere yaar (phir kaise hoga mera deedar?)
karlo pyar ki baate do char...(and so ends the emoshional atyaachaar.. wah!wah! wah!...thenk u all, in ehdvaance!!)

hey wasnt this a seperate thread called achaar?? read it, came bak to comment on it and gayab just like the others which question 'syntactically incorrect bosh' 😃

awsum 😆

Originally posted by: KB_Axer

kab aaoge mere yaar (kehta hai dil tujhe pukaar)
chhed diye hai tumne dhadkan ke taar (jaise ho Ravi Shankar ki sitar)
aa jao bas is baar (agli baar, barraumbaar)
ab ho nahi raha intejar (inteJAR???) (na aye to ho jaoongi bekaar)
jiya ho raha hai bekraar (chaayi hai bahaar)
karne chaah raha hai ikraar (lekin milenge papa ke thappad lagataar)
karti hun mai tumse pyar (baar baar, beemaar, daal ke daam ke maar)

abhi replies
jeena tumhare bina hua duswar (vs.11var?? somvaar, mangalvar ityaadi...)
abhi aa rahun hun mere yaar (thuma hua hai sara sunsaar)
kar lo mujhpe aitbaar (vah vah, hun kaisa main funkaar)
mai tumhara hun dildar (itna ki chud raha hai tez bukhaar)
karta hun tumse mai bhi pyar (chashme ka number hua dus huzaar)
tum ho meri sarkar..(not the ram gopal varma 1..one hopes)

when they meet abhi

mai aa gaya meri sarkar (maai..yahan maai kya kar rahi hai...) (tum ho mere jadaoo haar)
karta hun mai ikraar (issse hai nahin mujhe koi inkaar)
ho gaya hai mujhe tumse pyar (keh do ub sub ko 'khabardaar!')
kya kaheti ho dildar (kyon? Chalen chaand ke us paar?)

simi
haan karti hun tumse mai bhi pyar (itna ki mera bukhaar to hua degree ek saw char) ab jab ankhe?? huyi hai ??char (uske chaar aur tumhare bhi chaar..what a major amount of aachaar!!!)
ho gayi mai to sharmsar (lekin phir bhi hun tumhare liye uphaar)
tham lo mujhe mere dildar (na to ley jaye ga mujhe humara jamadaar)
chhupalo bahon me mere yaar (phir kaise hoga mera deedar?)
karlo pyar ki baate do char...(and so ends the emoshional atyaachaar.. wah!wah! wah!...thenk u all, in ehdvaance!!)

what are you trying to do here taking some one 's work and making it in a seprate topic. Plz do not break forum rules causing discruption in the forum as it is heading that way. Consider this as a warning . Nerxt such occurence will resul in raised warning level. You had taken my work and made another post. What ever you want to post . post it here.

KB dev Team

Originally posted by: sharen123

achaar .. 😆 😆

you have beem banned for using multiple accounts.