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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: AntarGrewal

New story ki excitement toh hoti hai
Yahan meri ek story ko kissi ne pucha bhi nahi 😭

Koundi story??😲

Meine toh his wife his maid keliye motivation BHI diya tha ...😭

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Anu

@AntarGrewal

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: dwriter

Koundi story??😲

Meine toh his wife his maid keliye motivation BHI diya tha ...😭

Yaad kro hai ek

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: AntarGrewal

Yaad kro hai ek

CID Wala hai na...

I badly wanna read that..trust me😭

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Anu

@AntarGrewal

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: dwriter

CID Wala hai na...
I badly wanna read that..trust me😭

Nahi jiska sirf prologue hai sirf bcz no one wanna read it😭😭

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: AntarGrewal

Nahi jiska sirf prologue hai sirf bcz no one wanna read it 😭😭

I guess the title is bit confusing Junior...

Silent readers won't be having the idea that it's a new story.

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Anu

@AntarGrewal

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: dwriter

I guess the title is bit confusing Junior...
Silent readers won't be having the idea that it's a new story.

OKAY
Let me add FF right😃

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Octothorpe

@Octothorpe

Stunner

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Posted: 6 years ago

#47

Gosh @dwriter. This was so beautifully written. I realise, I can't emote my stories so well. 😆 I was really sucking for a sad story for a really long time and I'm glad I could read this. Loved the new take on the beautiful song. Though people want you to write a part 2 or sequel where Mehek and Shaurya meet and stuff but I wouldn't want you to continue because it is left on such a beautiful point that all this will seem meaningless if more is said (that's just my POV and would not stop you from not writing further😆). Beautiful ! Thank you🤗

PS: I don't remember where my res post is😛

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Octothorpe
Gosh @dwriter. This was so beautifully written. I realise, I can't emote my stories so well. 😆 I was really sucking for a sad story for a really long time and I'm glad I could read this. Loved the new take on the beautiful song. Though people want you to write a part 2 or sequel where Mehek and Shaurya meet and stuff but I wouldn't want you to continue because it is left on such a beautiful point that all this will seem meaningless if more is said (that's just my POV and would not stop you from not writing further😆). Beautiful ! Thank you🤗

PS: I don't remember where my res post is😛

Awww...

Thankyou so much Hash for reading and leaving your valuable fb...🤗

I guess you are the best in writing emotional stuffs..👍🏼⭐️

Well I do agree with you..

This plot and ending was the song's demand. So it ends here. Hence no second shot.😃

Haven't planned much about the sequel ...it will not be the continuation of this one ...I guess.😉😆

But would write as I have promised few of the dearies..😃😆

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Anuteja10

@Anuteja10

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#49

oh god yeh itna dukh bhara kyon likhi yaar😭

i cant see them like this

pls second shot do with happy moments pls cutie pie😊

beautifully written his turmoil

but that hug n scenes were very emotional i loved the whole scene😉

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Chandana2010
oh god yeh itna dukh bhara kyon likhi yaar 😭
i cant see them like this
pls second shot do with happy moments pls cutie pie😊
beautifully written his turmoil
but that hug n scenes were very emotional i loved the whole scene😉

Awww...

Anu di apne padh liya...😃

@bold1: I knew it...aap mujse yeh zaroor poochegi..😉. song's demand di.

Second shot nahi hai di..

Will be bringing up something else..

Thanks a lot for reading and leaving your valuable fb🤗

Plz be back soon..we are missing you badly.😭