**Lag ja gale**..Mehrya OS...[Dedicated] - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: AntarGrewal

RES

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Shinu Di it was very emotional
I'm crying. Please update it with some romance in next after Vandana came. Make this flashback please. Make this Two Shots please.
I beg you 😭😭😭

Awww... apologies for your precious tears Junior...😭😊
Thankyou so much for reading...🤗
Even it was difficult for me to pen it down..shed few tears too.😕

Would definitely come up with a sequel of this one...if you wish to read.
Plz do let me know
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Mishtilove

You left me...speechless. ❤️


Thankyou is simple word to tell u my gratitude for writing this exceptional...broken yet beautiful shot.

and one more thing * lag jaa gale* will be more special song henceforth in my life.

I really adore u girl.

Lots of love,
From moonlight to my dear sunshine🤗

Thankyou so much moonlight for reading this one inspite of your pain ...🤗
Aaah ...in tears...after reading your fb..😭
Love you too dear..❤️🤗

Apologies that I couldn't give a romantic rendition of your favourite song.
Feeling blessed to hear that you liked it.😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Shinu,make us happy wd the second shot plz...
Its difficult to see so much pain for shaurya...
Usse uski mehak lauta do naa...plz❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Mishtilove

Shinu,make us happy wd the second shot plz...

Its difficult to see so much pain for shaurya...
Usse uski mehak lauta do naa...plz ❤️


Haven't planned anything Mish...
But will definitely come up with a second shot or sequel.😃
But it"ll take time😕
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: dwriter


Haven't planned anything Mish...
But will definitely come up with a second shot or sequel.😃
But it"ll take time😕

I want Sequel😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice scene you picked Shinu. This scene where KV enacted the scene still etched in my heart, the way he cried it also made all of us cried. I cant see it. I can feel the pain , the emotion in your write up. well done dear, do continue soon have a great day ahead
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: AD04

Res 😉

Unres😛
Thanks.for thia beautiful and emotional OS shinu😛
You have beautifully written with perfect combination of song in it. Loved it😛
This is one of the powerfeul.scenes of mehrya emotional moments and you have described it so well . But sad.ending is bit saddy for us ...do we have other part or just this one 😉
Thanks for the PM😛

Thanks a lot Aarti di..for reading and leaving your valuable fb .🤗well this plot was the song's demand..so a sad ending😭
Even I prefer a happy ending..
I haven't planned anything before..
But would try to come with a sequel of this one..if you all wish to read😉
Edited by dwriter - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Haseena2020

Nice scene you picked Shinu. This scene where KV enacted the scene still etched in my heart, the way he cried it also made all of us cried. I cant see it. I can feel the pain , the emotion in your write up. well done dear, do continue soon have a great day ahead

Thankyou so much Haseena di for reading and leaving your valuable fb... 🤗Yep KV did a fab job ..and it was easy to imagine the scenes while writing.
Glad that you could feel the emotions😃
Well this was just a single shot featuring this song Di..
But I would be planning a sequel for the same..as this one broke many hearts.😊
Wishing you too a great day ahead Di...🤗
Hope you are feeling better now.
Edited by dwriter - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautifully written and Shaurya's expression of his love for Mehel...

Want to read more please...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Res. Putting this res so as to remind myself that I have to read this. LL be right back soon hopefully 😒

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