**Lag ja gale**..Mehrya OS...[Dedicated]

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1154991

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Posted: 6 years ago

#21

Firstly , so beautifully written👏😳

Secondly, why a sad ending😭

But anyways loved the writing style

Need a cutie lovey dovey os soon😃

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dwriter

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Posted: 6 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Manoyana

Beautifully written and Shaurya's expression of his love for Mehel...

Want to read more please... 😳

Thankyou so much Mano di for reading and leaving your valuable fb ..🤗

Planning for a sequel of this one on demand...stay tuned😃

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dwriter

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Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Awesome os

Thankyou so much Ekta for reading and leaving your valuable fb..😃🤗

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dwriter

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Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan
Firstly , so beautifully written 👏😳
Secondly, why a sad ending😭

But anyways loved the writing style

Need a cutie lovey dovey os soon😃

Awww...Yashu girl .thankyou so much for reading and leaving your valuable fb .🤗

A sad ending on demand of the plot and the song..😕

Am planning for a sequel for this one...to mend all those broken hearts.😃

Am not sure ...when.

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Jennet

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Posted: 6 years ago

#25

Superb job Shinu 👏 👏.
Beautifully written.
Shaurya's love for Mehak and the way he is not able to digest the fact that she is no more 😭 😭...
Thanks for the pm...

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1154991

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Posted: 6 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: dwriter

Awww...Yashu girl .thankyou so much for reading and leaving your valuable fb . 🤗
A sad ending on demand of the plot and the song..😕
Am planning for a sequel for this one...to mend all those broken hearts.😃
Am not sure ...when.

Will wait Di🤗

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dwriter

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Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: josejen
Superb job Shinu 👏 👏.
Beautifully written.
Shaurya's love for Mehak and the way he is not able to digest the fact that she is no more 😭 😭...
Thanks for the pm...

Awww...Jen Di... you read this one?😃

How are you Di?...Hope Jiju is fine.

Don't worry everything will be alright..

Our prayers are with you.😊

Thankyou so much for reading and leaving your valuable fb Di..🤗