MehRya SS: Forbidden - Ch5 Teaser pg 14 04/08

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thabassum

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Posted: 6 years ago

#101

And it was Well written ...

Loved while reading it ..so Mehak who belongs to a forbidden community ..

Had to flee away with her father immediately after her birth was living a normal life ...the job to save people ..sounds tremendous...and she is about to move soon becoz of higher studies meets Vicky assists him to the destination he was looking for ,with warning offcourse but Vicky's

Fall from the place has put his family and the police in confusion that this might be suicide..Mehak managed to save him ..

On the other side worried Shaurya was looking for Vicky and got to know his accident through his assistant Nehal who is more sensible ...

Shaurya wants to thank the girl who saved his brother ...not to forget both the brothers think of her like an angel

Mehak did not just fulfill her duty but was also concerned about Vicky and assured him that she wud help him on anything ..the way Shaurya handled things after knowing about Vicky and nehal was smart and sensible...

And he finally met Mehak ...his irkness on her reference to bhaiya was hilarious 😆...

So they both got some spark from Thier encounter eh ?

Let's see they spend time together ...

You know that ...Right ?

Edited by Thabassum19 - 6 years ago

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Lima

@friendlyghost08

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Posted: 6 years ago

#102

Waiting for update kelly...where are you

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Anuteja10

@Anuteja10

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Posted: 6 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Thabassum19

And it was Well written ...
Loved while reading it ..so Mehak who belongs to a forbidden community ..
Had to flee away with her father immediately after her birth was living a normal life ...the job to save people ..sounds tremendous...and she is about to move soon becoz of higher studies meets Vicky assists him to the destination he was looking for ,with warning offcourse but Vicky's
Fall from the place has put his family and the police in confusion that this might be suicide..Mehak managed to save him ..
On the other side worried Shaurya was looking for Vicky and got to know his accident through his assistant Nehal who is more sensible ...

Shaurya wants to thank the girl who saved his brother ...not to forget both the brothers think of her like an angel

Mehak did not just fulfill her duty but was also concerned about Vicky and assured him that she wud help him on anything ..the way Shaurya handled things after knowing about Vicky and nehal was smart and sensible...
And he finally met Mehak ...his irkness on her reference to bhaiya was hilarious😆...
So they both got some spark from Thier encounter eh ?

Let's see they spend time together ...

You know that ...Right ?

beautiful fb Thabu I too want fb like this 😆

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Anuteja10

@Anuteja10

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Posted: 6 years ago

#104

Hi Kelly where are you
eagerly waiting for update
😛

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 6 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Chandana2010
beautiful fb Thabu I too want fb like this 😆

Oh I will after reading your work anu...😳

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#106

Chapter 5 teaser...

He seemed to sense her intent, and acted as soon as she pressed the button that would shut the elevator doors, removing the sight of him, and hopefully abate the acute embarassment she felt coming face to face with him once more. One outstretched arm was all it took, and then he stepped into the lift and into her personal space. No, that wasn't right...he seemed mindful that they were not alone in the elevator, but if her reaction was anything to go by, they might as well have been. Just as she had experienced last night, his proximity was playing havoc with her senses. She tore her glance from him, which somehow proved a worse mistake as instinctively he other senses acknowleged the man. His scent...the essence of him that was enhanced by the appealing overlay of his cologne reached her and she inhaled deeply of both. And then, dear God he spoke, his voice as husky as she remembered.

"I cannot imagine you would have gotten to far without this, Mehek."

Her helmet, the forgotten item which had necessitated her return to the hospital ward, came into sight of her downturned head, and by rote she took it from him.

"Thank you, Khanna Saab."

"Khanna Saab," he repeated softly, before reaching for her chin and tilting her head back so she could not, not look back at him. "I would think that the closeness we shared last night should all but negate the need for such formalities, Mehek, don't you agree?"

Shocked at the bluntness of his comment, in the presence of others Mehek gasped...

Edited by crtkelly - 6 years ago

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AD04

@AD04

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Posted: 6 years ago

#107

Welcome back Kelly😛

We missed u alot and u r finally here with the teaser😛😛😛

I jus loved it ...reading ur writimg afterso long is treat to read .. .Please continue soon and dont go for so many days😕😲

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Haseena2020

@Haseena2020

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Posted: 6 years ago

#108

Well, look who is here to give us a teaser, welcome back Kelly. how have you been? This teaser is amazing and I am excited to know what happens with these two. Do continue soon dear have a blessed day ahead.😉😆