To Be With You meharya SS Part13 pg57. 08/10 - Page 15

Created

Last reply

Replies

487

Views

38.3k

Users

30

Likes

668

Frequent Posters

Krishna537 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Houstonmom

No don't stop ! Really wanted to see their reaction to the marriage proposal news 😆
Beautiful chapter SK loves Mehek but is really annoying troubling her all the time . Poor girl doesn't know it's all an act . Amazing job Kishu👏 ! Can't wait to see both their reactions to the marriage idea please update really soon 😛



Thank you maya di for ur comment.. 😳
Haa poor girl just misunderstood him but he too acts like that only. .😆

Will see their reactions soon may be today 😉

Krishna537 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: snehatara

Chapter 2 FB :

Mehek is lost in Shaurya and tells herself that she'll stay away from him if it makes him happy
and she cannot see hatred for her in his eyes. Shaurya comes to Sharma Niwas bearing gifts
and serves them tea prepared by his own hands. He's nice to everyone but Mehek is sad about
his behaviour with her. Shaurya's eyes keep searching for Mehek but Mehek is playing hide n
seek with him. She is having her fill from far and doesn't come in front of him. Shaurya is restless
unable to see her. Everyone has gifts from Shaurya and Mehek gets annoyed that she was given
none.😛😆

Mehek keeps complaining to puppy about Shaurya's indifference. Unable to stop himself,
Shaurya invades Mehek's room and sees her sleeping peacefully and is mesmerised by her
beauty. She is sleeping like a baby with her thumb in her mouth and again talks to puppy in her
sleep about making breakfast for Shaurya.

Mehek is up early next day and is preparing breakfast chup chupke for Shaurya. A determined
Shaurya catches her in he kitchen and hugs her from behind. Mehek's defences melt away with
his closeness and then Shaurya pretends to be angry seeing her in the kitchen. Purposely makes
her think he mistook her for somebody else. Two can play this game Krishna. 😉😆

Will read the next chapter now.😛😃



Thank you so much di for the detailed fb.. Good to read your brief comments in updates 😛

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting Sneha Di 🤗
Krishna537 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: snehatara

Chapter 3 FB :

On being questioned by Shaurya, Mehek lies that she is preparing breakfast for his mother early
as she has to go to college and scoots from there. Shaurya is bent upon catching her lies.😛

Mehek is flustered when KC questions her why she is up so early and wants to go to college
on a Sunday.😆

Mehek's past is revealed and the reasons for her possessiveness and fears are fair enough.
Having lost her parents at an early age an being brought up very protectively by Sharmas
and Khannas with all the pampering to fill up the loss of her parents has made Mehek what
she is. Shaurya might have felt at a loss with everyone's prime attention on Mehek and he
indeed missed his naughty and noisy friend. 😃😆

Party preparations are on for Shaurya's return and Mehrya end up fighting for the proprietory
on the Puppy. Then the families drop the bomb of their intended marriage.😲😉
Waiting eagerly to see their reaction to this news. Don't think they'll give it in easily and agree
for the marriage. Looks like lots of drama ahead Krishna. What have you planned ?
Do update soon.

Thanks for this story and the PMs.⭐️🤗




Thanks for your comment Sneha Di 😃
Their fight on puppy was cute right like Tamatar lal. .
Ha she had a past but it was half revealed about her fears still a half or may a short waiting to be revealed..

Yes A short drama is waiting for you all hope you enjoy that too...
Will update tomorrow di😉
Krishna537 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Wow Krishna...you did great with all updates ...

Read it all in one go ...so Shaurya and Mehak are sort of cross cousins in here ?
They both like each other ...but restrain from expressing it ...
I really like the way how Mehak was always watching him silently ...and the way he was trying to search for her ...every time ...was cute to read ...and finally Shaurya decide to peep in to check Mehak out 😆...
And they were arguing for the puppy while there parents want them to get married ...sure these two want the same ...but sure these two might create a scene ...let see wat happens next ...great chaps...



Wow it's great to see your comment Thabs Di 😳

Thank you so much for reading and commenting Di 😃

I'm glad you liked it.. Yeah these two will create a scene about marriage proposal...
I'll update it soon di 😛
Anuteja10 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Krish waitig for yo our update
Pls update soon
Krishna537 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago


Thank you so much husnkimalika😃
Krishna537 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandana2010

Krish waitig for yo our update

Pls update soon


Update will be coming soon di 😉
Krishna537 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Hello guys this is the new chapter. Hope you like it. Thank you guys for all your lovely comments...😉
Chapter 4



"We want you get married to Mehak, this is Meera's wish and Karuna wants to fullfill it... " Harish stated angrily to Shaurya. Mehek and Shaurya both looked at each other in shock for a minute. "What my marriage with her? I.. " before he complete his sentence he was interrupted by mehek words. "I have hopes about my life chachi... I won't marry to this angry bird who always scolds me and make me cry " her tone was heavy and filled with pain. Vicky come there saying hello guys .. Mehek saw him. 'Mami If you want then I will marry to this Vicky' mehek said angrily while rubbing her teary cheeks. Shaurya's anger rised to another level. 'Mehek I have a girlfriend and besides that I'm two years younger than you' a shocked Vicky told her.. "Bus Karo thum dono" (shut up you both.) shouted Karuna with tear filled eyes. If you don't want to marry then keep quiet but don't say stupid words like this. Now please leave puppy here and go to your rooms. Both gazed each other with pain filled eyes before leaves from there. Karuna collapsed on chair. Kantha comes to karuna and pacified her. "sorry karuna Ji; on behalf of Mehak " said kantha "No need kantha Ji, it's not like that. Tom and Jerry is better than these two.. Can't sit quite for an hour.. They a re grown up, but still Always fighting like kids.. When will they stop quarrelling with each other? " Karuna was in pain with her both kids behaviour. Harish and kantha consoled her saying by the time flews they will change. They are fighting silly, it's not a big deal. They will understand soon. Karuna sobbed on harish shoulder saying I'm afraid of that only bcz they may go any extend with this silly fights only.. Anything won't happen like that Karuna don't over think about it... Harish stated.
"We thought something but don't know what God decided for both of them.." Kantha said. We shouldn't disclose it with them this soon. We could have gave them some time Karuna said with a ray of hope. Whatever Karunaji you calm down now and forgot about this matter here only..Kantha told them before Harish taking her inside the Home.




Shaurya and Vicky came in his room. "Bro what's this all, whats this marriage proposal and you both fighting? Can you please clear me.. Asked Vicky. A frustrated Shaurya ruffled his fingers through hairs. Mujhe Kya patha hai yaar. (what I know ) I even hadn't a proper talk with mehek. Before I talk to her this all happened. I think she is angry with me or is it some other thing I don't anything. Bhai what if there someone else in her life may be because of that she rejected you. Vicky is reasoned. Shaurya broke the vase on the table with the thought of someone with mehek. Seeing the blood on his hand, Bhai what are you doing you are hurting yourself Vicky concerned. What will I do than this.. Shaurya shouted. Do you Love her? Vicky asked. His sudden question stilled shaurya. Her smiles and their beautiful memories played in his eyes. Shaurya sat there on bed With a smile on his lips. She is the one important in my life, without her I can't live. I like her the most... Shaurya said with a feel.
Then you should have told that infront of all Vicky asked
" I was about to ask I need time and wanted to talk with mehek. But I was inturrepted by her stupid words. I never expected mehek answer would be like that. First their marriage proposal and then her answer I was totally blank. besides That all went with flow not giving me chance to say my word."
Shaurya told his side of story.. Even you too. He added tauntingly at Vicky.
I really needed to talk to her. But after what happened before few hours it's difficult to start a conversation with her. but I will. ... He thought and thinks to meet her now.







On the other side Mehek locked herself in the room and started crying badly hugging a pillow. She felt very sorry and bad for her rude behavior and the puppy she loves.. How could I tell you Shaurya I can't live without you. I even can't listen rejection from you. And I can't bare the distance if you leaves me again. Haa hoon main selfish, isiliye it's better if I reject you. She sobbed hardly. After some time her door knocked by Kantha chachi saying mehek open the door. Please don't cry but she didn't opened. She catched some sleep after sobbing badly. At around 3:30pm her door got knocked again. She got up and opened the door . "chachi I want to live alone for some more time" said mehek without looking at the person who came.. Karuna came in with lunch tray in her hands and a bag in her another hand.. Mehek started crying again seeing karuna.. Mehek why are you crying this much I told you na if you don't want to marry go away.. I Called off your marriage. Now be a good girl and finish your lunch and give me a smile she said while handing the lunch tray. "Mami I'm sorry I did.." mehek was about to say her something but karuna cut off her. You don't need to be reason beta. I never go against your wish.. I promise. Now finish this soon. I have to do so many arrangements and I want your help in that. Mehek smiled and hugged her sideways saying Don't know how would have my mom reacted if do this to her.. But you are not even saying single word to me. you are the best Mami and I'm your.. 'Naughty girl' before mehek complete her sentence karuna finished her line with a big smile on her face. Okay now have the food or should I feed you? Mami ek bath boloon ( mami may I say one thing) I don't mind if you have time to feed me. Of course I will be glad if you do so.. Though time is getting decrease for the party Karuna smiled and said
Thum bilkul chote bachi ho, (you are a kid only) ... Karuna feed mehek happily, mehek wanted know how shaurya is, had he eaten or not ... but kept quite as it will create another topic. Karuna gave the bag which she brought. Wear this dress tonight . Now let me go and look after the arrangements or else I will be late.. Get ready fast you have to be in the party soon with all smiles which we all want to see.. Karuna told her before leaving mehek room for which mehek nodded..


Listening to Karuna last words shaurya hide behind the wall. Shaurya saw Karuna feeding mehek lovingly and listened their talks. At times he missed the lovely moments and care of his mother when he was out of country. And now he felt jealous of mehek because Karuna didn't bothered to ask him about his opinion but here she is feeding mehek .



To be continued...


Ignore mistakes
Hit like button and leave your comments. And correct if any probs you find. .😛
friendlyghost08 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Res
Unres..yay i m first...thnx for the update and pm
So shaurya confessed his love for mehek in front of vicky...and mehek don't want to be rejected by shaurya so she herself rejected him...loved the bonding of karuna ma and mehek..and aab shaurya felt jelous of mehek...was shaurya came to mehek to confess his love for her?
Enjoyed the update...plz continue soon
Edited by friendlyghost08 - 7 years ago
ic_2000 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Enjoyed the update.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".