MehRya SS: His Last Valentine...Epilogue page 35 04/03/18..... - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: bworm

Interesting and exciting.

Looking forward to what happens next.


Chapter 2 is up...and it looks that the story will be a bit longer now. Enjoy😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Diva200

Lovely update

So Sk was curious about who send Ms the bouquet.
He was getting engaged to Shurti and Ms dropped the plate.
They were interrupted by goons who had eyes on Sara
Shurti turned on her cousin which upset Sk but MS was there on rescue mission to save Sara.
What happened between Sk and Ms ?


Young love interrupted has led to where we are...all to be explained in coming updates.
I hope you enjoy the story😊
Thx for commenting Diva
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Houstonmom

Really nice story but the title makes one feel like a really sad story where the heroine of the story is gone.
This SK is really strange ! Mr Grump hates Valentine's Day but went all out and chose it as the day to propose to his horrible girlfriend ? Out of all the flowers in the place he borrowed one from Mehek to give to the woman Mehek despises the most as if he is trying to hurt her intentionally . Really curious and have a lot of questions running in my mind like what did Mehek do 7 years ago that after he loved her so much he talks as if she deceived him and seems like he can't stand her ? Why is he torturing Mehek she obviously loves him still but he made her present the engagement ring herself to the ...( never mind I have no nice words to say😡) . Also who sent the huge floral arrangement to Mehek I'm guessing it's from Sara and her husband but definitely not a guy . Then the restaurant got robbed felt so sorry for Sara her beautiful surprise got spoiled and her no good cousin 😡 threw her out to the wolves literally! Huge wake up call for SK even more when Mehek sacrificed herself to save Sara and her baby . What a reality check ! So curious please update soon 😛


Have I ever said how much I love fb from you Maya, Your analysis is on point. That being said I hope you enjoy the story. 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Shamz15

What should I say about this story...

Mahek got roses from some unknown ...shaurya and mahek are school friends 😲 but still he was about to get engaged to Shruti😲
Shaurya called her Jaan 🤢🤢

Than out of no where few unwanted guests enters WC 😕 mahek agreed to go along with them

What's going on Kelly you are really inspired from CV's now ...
Waiting for the next part ... don't forget it's Vday special story😆

Thank you for the PM ..

@ bold... I aspire to emulate the ST and his crew...SAID NO ONE EVER😆😆

I know a whole lot of awful going on here Shamz, but I promise it will be okay.😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Evangelina

So curious to know what will be next. Waiting for updated


Thanks Evangelina, I hope you enjoy it,😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Mishtilove

Kelly di,its beautiful but how can shruthi is one he gonna propose.i dint like that shruti.plz mehrya should be together.

I love ur writing skill u knw i hv upgrade my vacablory coz of u so big wala thanks.im little sad but i knw mehrya cant be separated for so long.
Thanks for the pm.update soon


no one likes Shruti, but this a MehRya story so never fear, Mishti😊. Thank you so much for you appreciation of my writing😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Shagun_2702

"Amazing" would be a small word to describe the fantasy you have wrote . Well this is the first time I have read your writings and this was something I was waiting for long... actually its a perfect story their past which is affecting their present and present which makes the future. His last valentine I think its about mahek being the last valentine of shaurya because further shaurya is not going to date someone else. The flashback which shows mahek used to teach shaurya but after scoring 91% he became scared that if mahek would leave him? Well his fears were true .mahek left him for a reaso n but what was it ? but when mahek came back in his life after so many years he would surely have some trust issues if anyone would be at his place , he would also reacted the same and shaurya is no exception but atleast once he should listen to her point of view because it would be injustice to her . Not listening to her and making her realise.that what she has lost by proposing someone else infront of her is a silly thing🤢 not to mention whatever Mr. Khanna tries he will always remain the 8th wonder of the world. Ohk well Sara 's husband Tyer was madly in love with his wife who is carrying his child but poor Sara was actually attacked by the robber .. well according to me what shruti did was not wrong but atleast she should have tried her best to protect her little sister somewhere or the other she knew shaurya would have arranged the police but she didnt do anything and instead betray her own cousin sister who loves her a lot os actually unpardonable and here was mahek who knew that she is going to hell but she did it because of her best friend .That proves that love is beyond blood relation .I just hope it melts the heart of that shrewd man and made him should that mahek has gone into hell for her best friend and he was her love so there would be a strong readon for her to leave him


Firstly, thanks for giving one of my stories a go😊 I am thrilled you have enjoyed what I have done...Feel free to look up my index. I am probably the slowest updater ever, but I lover mehRya, and have enjoyed writing on them.

As to Shruti, you are right, you can't exactly fault her, what woman but Mehek would do this, but I would hate that someone, especially a relative would purposively throw her younger kin to the wolves as she did...SK definitely seeing the caliber of woman he has chosen.

I hope you enjoy the story.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: crtkelly


Young love interrupted has led to where we are...all to be explained in coming updates.
I hope you enjoy the story😊
Thx for commenting Diva

Lovely story Kelly 👍🏼 Thank you 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Kelly just read part one ⭐️ Exciting my kind of story 😆 when are you updating the next part 😆 eager to read 😆 it has action love it ⭐️ Please update soon 😆


Yes, I not my normal at all right Sharl. ST has inspired me to jump off the story with action and criminality😆

next update posted...read and enjoy.

Oh and you know me...this story is going to a little longer than I expected...just because😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Well I have so many questions ...

Mehak and Shaurya were classmates ? ..but now Shaurya is her boss ?
From there past talks ..looks like ...Shaurya was very much on to mehak ...but mehak was not ...
What happened ...so that Shaurya had to propose shruti ?
And the flowers for mehak ? Who were they from ?
Shruti wud be shruti at the end of the day ...and mehak is mehak...how much concern and care , she had for her pregnant friend ...that she willingly went toward to be the hostage ...

Great , new and lovely concept ...you have composed here kells ⭐️


Good Grief...you mean I had to write a crime to get Thabs here😲😆😆

Hello Friend...it's been long, so let's answer the questions

Yes to classmates
Yes she works for him
Past: they were totally into each other...until 😉
flowers...will let you know😆

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