~FATAL ATTRACTION~ SS On MehRya , Chap 10 part B on PG-140 28/01/18

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Posted: 7 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: Heli84

Amazingg FF Di ... Great start 👏

Last 7 chapters were

SK ne MBA ki business management mein but destiny ka plan

toh kuch aur hi tha 😕 Sk ko plolitics pasnad nehi but waqt (time) ne wahi lake khara kiya 😊

But aapko pata hei mujhe yeh chapter puri filmy lagi 😳 Action tha , Hero ka dard tha , Revenge thi aur heroin se bhi takda gaya ...atlast Hero ka haat mein power bhi aagay..aab bas Phirse ekbaar Taqdeer ka badalna baaki hei...😃

MS - KK chat ..😳 Thank you Di...MS - KK ko yaha add karne ke liye 😃

Aur kya baat hei in kuch dino mein Bhai ko Bhabi ki adaat bhi pad gayi 😳 BTW yaha meri Bhai toh sach mein Bhai hei 😆

Aay hayee ...Bhai toh meri bechan ho gaya...Bhabi ki sath baat nehi hui toh 😳
Bhabi ko business ka idea bhi de diya 😛

pad yeh kanta chachi 😡 😡 Chachi ki toh mein...villain chachi 😡 😡
Iski waja se Meri Bhai - Bhabi dono pareshan hei 😭 😭
lekin ek achhi chiz hei Bhai ko aapna feelings dhire dhire realize ho raha hei 😃

Aur looo yeh toh PWG bhi chala gaya...Bhai teri aadat nehi gayi na ... aur kya microchip bhi fixed kar diya...😆

Yeh Jis speed se jaraha hei Chapter 10 tak toh mein Buaa bhi banjayungi 🤣

Puri time baithke Bhai Bhabi ki situation samajh raha tha 😳 kitna Romantic hei 😳

Driver uncle..aapna muhh bandh rakhni chahiye thi ... ho gayi na chutti

Yepii ... Bhai ne pahechan li MS ko
hann..Bhai tune sonal ka name suna hei lift mein ... memory pe zor laga 😉

Ajay - Langoor kahika 😡 Bhabi se Shadi karegi..jake koi Bandaria dhund le aapne liye 😆

Oopss !! Mehek ki ring finger cut gayi 😲 aur yeh chahi phir bhi engagement ke piche padi hei 😡
Ek chiz dekhlena yeh KC haat jor kr maafi mange MS ki aage 😡 mujhe yeh KC pasand nehi 😡

Hehehehe...Sonal 😆 ekdam sachhi wala Best Friend hei 😳 Tum Right track pe ho sonal..👍🏼 😉

Han..Bhai Tu chinta naa kar...Bhabi teri hi hei 😳 baas tere sath hi achha lagegi 😃

Han bhai han bhai tujhe pyaar ho gaya aab toh shadi bhi hogi
Chinta maat karo..sonal - nehal tum dono ka wish hi puri hone wali hei 😆
Mehrya Date 😳 bhai ban gaya driver 😆
Aur Ajay toh gaya 🤣 achha hua..Bhabi ko pub pe le jayega 😡

Kitne sare cute moments tha ( sorry mein caps nehi de payi 😔 ) ek sath dinner , Bhabi Bhai ke baho mein aur Last mein Hug nd yes Car Moments 😳 Humesha Sehi waqt pe sehi gaana bajte hei radio pe nehi ... 🤪

Aur Bhai toh zabardast fasne wala tha 😆 😆

SK ke maan mein toh ladoo fut raha hoga...ekdin mein itna kuch 😆

Humm..Bhai ke baat Bhabi ko effect kar rehi hei 😛 Mehek ki suspect list mein aagaya hei Bhai nd Aage toh yeh aur bhi badne wala hei..right ?? 😉 " SK " aage ishise bohot kuch hone wala hei..kyun?? 😉 😆

Ohh god..Bhai ne unlogo ko maar diya 😲 😲

KC ko toh detective hona chahiye tha..ishe sab samajh aati hei..bas Ajay ka intention nehi 😡

Ajay ka drama chalu ..Langoor 😡 Bhabi ko bahar leke jayega..and KC toh bas sabkuch mein hi han..Khud chale kyun nehi jaate 😡

Bhai..tune WC kharidli ...MS se connect mein rahene rakhne ke liye 😲 😲 sachmuch pyaar pagal hota hei 😲

Oopss !! Date pe toh bohot kuch ho gaya 😆
Bhai ke Bhai toh achha karne ke chakkar mein aur bhi bigad diya situation 😕
ab kya hoga 😕

Ohooo ...gadbad ho gayi re..Shadi 2 din mein 😲 😲 kya kar diya tune Vicky

KC..emotional blackmail chalu 😡 50 lakhs dena hei..phir bhi akal thikane nehi aayi 😡
Sonal kuch samjhao MS ko...Ekdam Correct track pe hoo 👏

Bhai toh aab Aapne pe aagaya re 😎 Vicky Tu toh rahene de , Bhai sabko dekh lega 😳

P.S.
For the PM ...🤗 ❤️

Heli that was a beautiful feedback...🤗

Hahaha 10 chapter tak pakka tujhy buaa banadongi...agar koi aur ideas Nahi Aaye warna ek aad chapter aagy peechy hoo Sakta hai 🤣🤣🤣

KC ko baad mein pachtana padega yeh mahek par rukawat lagany ke liye 😡😡

Tera feedback padh Kar meraa haans haans Kar pet dard hogya...Ajay ko toh koi banadriya BHI ghaas Nahi dalegi 😆😆

Tuny ek chapter Ka kaam feedback Diya hai kya..😆

Tere Bhai ki mehndi aur Haldi ki rasm hogyi 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: Diva200
Thank you for the pm
Lovely update
So Sk seeks Sonals help
He writes S mhendi on her hand
so what will happen next pls update soon

Thank you for reading Diva ...😳

Next will be marriage😆😆

Will update soon dear😳😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: shristi0706
So Sonal is helping Shaurya to stop Mehak's marriage. Smart move! Since Vicky's plan failed, Shaurya is using his brains to marry Mehak...
Sonal being a true friend is concerned abt Mehak so much so tht she helped Shaurya to complete his Haldi rituals...
Dost ho toh aisi!!!! 👍🏼
Thank you for the update Sham... Muahhh!!!!

He is still using his brain and heart...not using his power😆😆

Sonal has seen only one side of him and got ready to help Shaurya😛

Thank you for the feedback Shri 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: anuteja
Di 21 hours more😆

How many hours left now 😆😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#765

No one is here to tell me the time 😭

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Chapter - 8

Hello Good Morning... Happy Lohri..Pongal and sankratri Friends🤗

Note : I have added the prologue part here but made few changes in it so please read it once again😆😆 highlighting the part so that you know where are the changes... Enjoy the chapter 😳😳

Next morning mahek was about to wake up from her sleep ,she had all Haldi marks on her face but before she could wake up Sonal applied the remaining Haldi on her cheeks...Mahek jumped from the bed when cold Haldi touched her cheeks...What are you doing Sonal ?? She questioned irritatingly... applying Haldi to my best friend... I want you to glow like a flower on your wedding day Sonal replied pulling her cheeks...mahek pushed her away and saw her image in mirror her whole face was covered with Haldi ,she quickly went towards washroom and cleaned her face.. while cleaning she saw a dark red S written on her palm...Sonal she shouted from washroom ...Now what happened?? Sonal questioned and went inside washroom ... You wrote this ?? Mahek asked pointing her finger at the letter...Sonal looked at her palm and mentally made a note that he loves mahek so much that's the reason the colour is so dark... What are you staring?? Iam asking you something?? Mahek shouted ...Sonal came out of her chain of thoughts and replied...Haan I wrote it because I know the mehndi which you will be applying of Ajay's name wont come out so red and I have more rights than that Ajay ... can't I write it ?? Sonal ask shedding some fake tears ...Mahek heart melted down...of course you have baby.. they both hugged each other , Achaa now fresh up soon and have your breakfast later you have to get ready for your mehndi...Sonal said before leaving the washroom ...mahek later realized that her ring is missing and both Sonal and mahek tried to search it in the room but couldn't find it...mahek was scared what will she reply to chachi but she was lucky no one noticed it when they were having breakfast.

They were at the venue and Sonal requested kanta that she will apply mehendi on mahek's hand ...she had already switched the mehendi bowl with shaurya's bowl ...nehal also came and sat with them.. after few hours when Sonal applied mehendi design nehal holded her hand and saw the design and tries to find the alphabet A in it but she couldn't find it... where have you written A in this ?? Nehal questioned confusingly...Sonal pulls mahek's hand back and says ...do you have to search it ? The one who has to search will find it easily..Sonal replied with a wink...Huhhh whatever nehal replied and left the place ...Mansi brought lunch for them in a plate and asked Sonal to make her eat ...she took it started feeding her ...while mahek was eating Sonal questioned her ..mahek just imagine tomorrow even my parents force me for a marriage and i know that guy is marrying me only for money...and later you come to know that there is someone who loves me secretly and will keep me happy more the person whom iam about to marry...so what will you do ?? Will you help him or will you let the marriage happen ?? For few minutes mahek just stared her and than questioned why are you asking such stupid question?? Please na mahek reply it ...I want to know ..Sonal requested ..mahek thought for a minute and replied...i will definitely help him ...if he truly loves you than you should be getting married to him...mahek replied with a smile...Sonal also felt happy hearing that .. even though she was helping Shaurya but she had that guilt in her heart ...she carefully hugged mahek making sure her mehndi won't get spoiled ..

Later in the evening Haldi ceremony proceeded and everyone danced on different songs... Shaurya also reached the same place and met with the owner of place ...Sonal saw him from distance and wonder what he was doing here while dancing... later when the ceremony was about to end owner of the place came and spoked with Sharma's saying that they can't have the marriage function tomorrow here as there was some misunderstanding... they didn't check the booking before...the place is already booked 1 month back for another marriage...and if they want to organise the marriage at the same place than they have to pay the double price...whole Sharma's were angry hearing that and started arguing with him..just than the same broker who was handling the decoration at PWG interrupted them and said he has better place for the marriage and they don't have to pay even 1 rupee there ...Jeevan questioned which place ?? White Chillies. .. tomorrow they are launching their hotel and they wanted to organise a marriage and are ready to give the place for free for the promotion of their place. .. and I know the owner personally..so if you want I can talk to him... Supervisor replied the same things which Shaurya asked him to say ... Wowww white chillies ...Di marriage will happen there..and you know the owner Shaurya khanna ?? Nehal questioned excitedly...Sonal and mahek looked at nehal shockingly...Even Sonal wasn't aware about the owner...what a master stroke ..Sonal said in her mind... Nothing will be free they will say like this and later they will charge for other things later ..kanta said interupting between them ...If any such expenses are there than I will pay it from my pocket... supervisor assured them ... whole Sharma's discussed and agreed to book white chillies as the venue for marriage...

Next day marriage mahurath was of the night.. Sharma's reached the venue and was waiting for the groom...when baraat came there was lot of disturbance in the place ..loud music..fire crackers and everyone was dancing...when all girls were looking baraat from the window Sonal spilled the drink on mahek's dress as per the plan...mahek shouted at her and later Sonal guided her to washroom where Shaurya was waiting for her ... before she entered Sonal hugged her tightly and said ...Iam sorry and I love you and started crying...mahek was puzzled...it's okay Jaan I will clean it ..it's not a big deal..mahek pacified her...just stand here don't go anywhere..mahek said her and went inside ... suddenly washroom lights got switched off and mahek was about to shout Sonal's name but before she could shout a powerful hand came on her mouth and closed it tightly...mahek tried hard to free herself but she couldn't...she bited his hand and Shaurya winced in pain...Ahhh pagaal ladki he said and took out took out a handkerchief to tie her mouth...who are you and why are you tying me ?? She questioned when Shaurya was tying her hands ...she couldn't see his face because of darkness... you will get all your answers Shaurya said while trying to tie her mouth...leave me else I will shout...mahek said ... Shaurya laughed... everyone is busy in the baraat and they can't hear you even if you shout at top of your voice...and by the way iam here to save you not to harm you.. Shaurya said while lifting her on her shoulder...mahek tried to beat him on his back but it didn't effected him...he took her from the backdoor and no one came to know about it except Sonal...later when the whole baraat came inside everyone started searching for mahek...even Sonal pretended to search her and replied to kanta that she saw her last time when her dress got spoiled and she went towards washroom... whole Sharma's were shocked and lodge a complain to police thinking it to be a kidnapping... neighbors and relatives who came to attend the function made thousand stories and left the place...pammi was mad at kanta and she broked the marriage and left the place asking kanta not to show her face again in her life ... Sharma's also left the place and tried to search mahek in near by area ...

Later Mahek was sitting on a bed in a dark room, wearing her bridal dress , her mouth and hands were tied and she was tired after trying to free herself from hours ...her hairs were messed and her mascara was spread over her face ...she was about to faint when she heard someone opening the door...same persons entered the room...she tried to look at the face of the person but couldn't see because of darkness...he came near Mahek and freed her hands ...I will remove that cloth from your mouth also if you promise me that you will not shout again...Mahek nodded her head in agreement as she didn't had any energy left to shout or any argument...but she realized she had heard this voice before... he took out his mobile and kept the light on her face and removed the cloth...in the process Mahek can see his eyes and was trying to remember where she had seen him before...After removing the person opened the lights of the room and turned towards Mahek ..she looked at him confusingly and questioned..who the hell are you and why did you kidnapped me from my wedding?? He came near her and wispered in her ears that he is her would be husband... Shaurya Khanna , Mahek eyes turned red .. Shaurya khanna ?? She remembered the name ...you are the owner of white chillies?? and than she remembered nehal words .. that the owner is planning to gift the restaurant to his wife...and than she remembered where she saw him before...he is the same person who rescued me from the pub and remembered the letter SK written on his jacket...She became lifeless and fell on the floor.. thinking he must have attacked those goons and Ajay... .why do you want to marry me ...I don't even know you..she shouted , You know me Mahek , Infact no one in the world knows me better than you he said with a smirk...and took out some legal documents and sat beside her .. what are these papers ?? she asked with a confusion... Nothing jaan I need a small signature of your's on this after which you will be my legally wedded wife ...he said lifting and kissing her hand and handed her the pen...She stared him with eyes full of haterdness..I will never sign on this paper...she shouted back...Jaan do it willingly else I have other ways to get this signed...and iam sure you don't want to make it complicated for me...he said making her hold the pen...I will die here but iam going to sign this papers..Mahek declared .

Do you think I will let you die ?? You don't even know how precious you are to me... Shaurya said while kissing her forehead...she jerked him away...don't you dare touch me...why can't I touch you... infact I have my half rights on you...he said kissing her mehndi palms..what do you mean ?? Mahek questioned...He smiled you know how beautiful you were looking yesterday night while sleeping...when I was in your room to celebrate our Haldi and mehndi...he replied while tucking her hairs backside and than he took out a diamond ring and made her wear on the ring finger...mahek tried to pull her hand but he pulled her more close to him...she fell on him and he was pushed back to floor...she tried to get up but he holded her tightly to his chest..Now half of the rituals are done just marriage and suhaagraat is remaining..he said with a broad smile... You were in my room ...means you put that mehndi on my palm and Haldi on my face ?? She remembered Sonal words which she asked while they were having lunch...Means you have used Sonal in your plan ?? How could you?? She started hitting him on his chest...he holded her head and pecked her lips to calm her down...she pulled her head and pleaded.. please let me go my family will be worried for me ..mahek said with tears in her eyes which were falling on his face...He lifted his head slightly and sucked the tears which were falling from her eyes. Don't worry about them they will come tomorrow to our wedding...he replied while brushing his cheeks with her's ...mahek managed to get up and she warned him that she isn't going to marry him at any cost...

Ohhh God mahek you are trying to do me the things which I don't want to he said while getting up from the floor and he went to the near by drawer and took out another legal documents...and handed that to her ...what is this ?? Mahek questioned...Read it you will get to know...he replied...No you can't do this don't tell me you have purchased the whole PWG lane just to get married to me...mahek questioned while her whole body was shivering...I did it mahek and if you aren't signing those marriage papers than whole area will be demolished tomorrow morning and I will be constructing a mall there .. Shaurya replied looking deeply into her eyes...No you can't.. you can't do it..mahek said while tearing the papers...he laughed loudly...do you think I have given you the original documents?? It's a Xerox copy jaan and the original is with my lawyer who is on his way to the corporator house and he will get the permission soon to demolish the whole area... Shaurya replied pulling mahek into his arms...No you are just playing some stupid prank with me ... you can't be serious...mahek replied... Shaurya pulled her more closer and dugged his head on her shoulder and kissed it gently...mahek you know me and infact you have praised me so many times saying that I have a clear vision and i am focused and I take things very seriously...he said while inhaling her smell from her hairs...she pushed him back...I never said you these words...mahek said loudly..than think mahek whom you have said this words ?? He questioned...Mahek looked at his face and than closed her eyes for a second and a name came out from her mouth...KK ...she opened her eyes immediately... you are KK ? She questioned him in disbelief...Thank god you recognized me Jaan ...yes iam your KK he replied with a smirk.

Precap : Shaurya marries mahek in Mandir and invite whole Sharma's.

Edited by Shamz15 - 7 years ago