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Jia Roh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Shaurya albeit not very well and a bun in the oven...stay tuned😆

Shaurya cooked it,why u taking the credit?😛🤣

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Misthilove
Hi kely di,im mishti.
congratulations for this new ff.
i love the prolougue.
do continue soon.
if possible do pm me.thank u.

Hi Mishti welcome to my ff thread. Thank you for appreciating what I have done. Because I am such an air head I have sent you a buddy request to ensure that you get a pm on future updates. I hope you enjoy the story as it winds along.😊

Kelly

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Shameela

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Loving the new story. So Mehek has amnesia... interesting... please continue.

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thabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Congratz on your new ff , Kelly ...the first part was thrilling to read...he had been searching her for two and a half months after her accident ...but she ends up being her chef in his own resort which he buyed for her ...?

Y is she calling herself meera sharma ? Did she forget things ?

And was shaurya trying to make her remember things in the part being as her co-worker ?

Very nice chapter !

Well written !

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

This really sounds interesting!!! Mehak has no memories of her past n is pregnant with Shaurya's child. Shaurya is here with her... N of course your favorite Hina too!!!

Thank you for the PM Kelly!!! Looking forward to reading this one.

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Thank you Shristi. I swear just last night I was thinking okay Kelly, you are going on a writing hiatus as soon as you finish Discovering the Magic, and the next thing I know I am sitting up in bed typing away words that were begging to get out😆

So yup another FF has evolved, and yes my favorite PA Hina is making her third appearance in just as many stories.

I hope you enjoy the story, will def. PM when the next chapter is done.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: jani_faizal
Loving the new story. So Mehek has amnesia... interesting... please continue.

Thanks Jani, I guess I contemplated one too many times how the CVs were going to handle this leap and expected separation, and all of a sudden a plot came to mind.

Was thinking of a simple OS, but by the time I had reached the office, I realized that, that wouldn't do.

I will PM for sure when the next update is ready

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Thabassum..
Congratz on your new ff , Kelly ...the first part was thrilling to read...he had been searching her for two and a half months after her accident ...but she ends up being her chef in his own resort which he buyed for her ...?
Y is she calling herself meera sharma ? Did she forget things ?
And was shaurya trying to make her remember things in the part being as her co-worker ?
Very nice chapter !
Well written !

Ah the elusive Thabs: missing you from Discovering the Magic, my friend. I am beginning to think that those mega chapters are scaring you away😆

At any rate, thanks so much for commenting here. I believe that I have a pretty special story in the works here. As you have noted Mehek was drawn back to the resort, but due to her post-accident state, is not certain why. What better way for Shaurya to keep close to his wife than getting back in the kitchen himself.

And yes SR looks to have happened in my FF at least, as out Mehek reemerged pregnant.

Hope you enjoy the story!

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thabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Kelly buddy ...I know my writers wud be wondering becoz I have kept everyone on hold without commenting in any ff's...the reason...is I haven using 3g net pack now ..which speed is low than the usual one I use ...but I'm catching up the episode kelkky ..I read the 24A&B part of DTM ...

Will soon read the others and five my feedback. 😃

Thanks for waiting patiently 😳...

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Shamz15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Thanks Shamz. Just last night I had resolved to taking a break from writing after Discovering the Magic ends, and this morning I woke up with these words aching to come out- go figure.

I like some continuity in my stories, so yes his ever-faithful Hina is here as well😛

Had planned for a OS, but by the time I got to work a proper FF had formulated.

And yes as you can see SR happened here at least😉 for Mehek to returned pregnant.

Will put myself on a proper writing schedule now that I am balancing two stories😆

Will PM when next chapter is available.

I can't wait for the first part...

She has lost her memory but didn't forget the things which he had thought her ...

And I am wondering why he had to hide that he is her husband😳

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Thabassum..
Kelly buddy ...I know my writers wud be wondering becoz I have kept everyone on hold without commenting in any ff's...the reason...is I haven using 3g net pack now ..which speed is low than the usual one I use ...but I'm catching up the episode kelkky ..I read the 24A&B part of DTM ...
Will soon read the others and five my feedback. 😃

Thanks for waiting patiently 😳...

I honestly thought I had lost you, my thread is not the same without your animated fb. But take your time and I will look forward to when you have caught up and have the time to let me know how (if)😆 you liked it.

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