Mehrya SS: One Last Chance Thread 2 Last part Updated 26/8

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

She must be editing it 🤣

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Shri yeh Kya Kiya

Sham I have PMed...i wll update today...there is some technical issue...few minutes please..I m sorry for that

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: shristi0706

Sham I have PMed...i wll update today...there is some technical issue...few minutes please..I m sorry for that

Shri i replied...hope it works out😕

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Shri i replied...hope it works out😕

It did...Thanks Sham...u are a sweetheart!!!

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TheLifeDiaries

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

It was one beautiful chapter Di and thanks for even putting those caps in it. I loved every bit of it. I know it took you lot of time to write this chapter but I wanted to read more. I guess the reader in me will never be satisfied with the length of your chapters. I loved the breakdown scene of the chapter. Mahek knows what Shaurya feels but trust once broken takes a lot of time to be fixed. I'm loving the story with each passing chapter and I'm grateful to you for putting this up for us to read. Thank you. Update soon. 😃

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: shristi0706

It did...Thanks Sham...u are a sweetheart!!!

WELCOME dear😳

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candy02

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Posted: 8 years ago

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The sequence was indeed very intense and absolutely well written with correct words & punches. I loved it as a standalone sequence with every conviction. But honestly strictly going by the flow, as a reader personally, I failed to connect the way I had wanted to this much awaited confrontation. Why so!!! Might be because drunk confession (if at all I consider this incoherent blabberings as a confession indeed) is not something I, personally, am fond of or confession in inebriated state without proper soul searching and subsequent realisation is not the thing for my stomach ... Waiting for your next chapter ...

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Shazmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

It's well written confrontation dear.
Loved it,how Shaurya asked her to marry him n how Mehak was taking care of him.
So,she understood his feelings.
Hmm... can understand her helplessness
It might have taken u a long to write this chapter sorry but I didn't feel it was long
I need more 😭
Thanks for the pm
Waiting for next update
Take ur time n come up with a long chapter