Mehrya SS: One Last Chance Thread 2 Last part Updated 26/8 - Page 11

Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries

It was one beautiful chapter Di and thanks for even putting those caps in it. I loved every bit of it. I know it took you lot of time to write this chapter but I wanted to read more. I guess the reader in me will never be satisfied with the length of your chapters. I loved the breakdown scene of the chapter. Mahek knows what Shaurya feels but trust once broken takes a lot of time to be fixed. I'm loving the story with each passing chapter and I'm grateful to you for putting this up for us to read. Thank you. Update soon. 😃

Originally posted by: chandrima02

The sequence was indeed very intense and absolutely well written with correct words & punches. I loved it as a standalone sequence with every conviction. But honestly strictly going by the flow, as a reader personally, I failed to connect the way I had wanted to this much awaited confrontation. Why so!!! Might be because drunk confession (if at all I consider this incoherent blabberings as a confession indeed) is not something I, personally, am fond of or confession in inebriated state without proper soul searching and subsequent realisation is not the thing for my stomach ... Waiting for your next chapter ...

Originally posted by: Shazmi

It's well written confrontation dear.
Loved it,how Shaurya asked her to marry him n how Mehak was taking care of him.
So,she understood his feelings.
Hmm... can understand her helplessness
It might have taken u a long to write this chapter sorry but I didn't feel it was long
I need more 😭
Thanks for the pm
Waiting for next update
Take ur time n come up with a long chapter

Originally posted by: Leandra

Wow intensive love story really nice yar very well written eagerly waiting for next update shristi

Originally posted by: koyel.c

Superb... what an intensity... spellbound.. please update tge next part asap

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Poor Shaurya couldn't control his feelings just blurted it. Hope he remembers next day otherwise Sara confession bekaar ho jayega. Mehek left from his farmhouse she knows next day he would forget what he confessed last night.

Thanks for PM Shri

Vinu

Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

Di I loved every dialogue in it.

Thanks for those caps in between the dialogues.

Hope he remembers what happened the next day.

She could understand his inner turmoil but she can't trust him again and it's too late.

Please update next chapter as soon as possible di.

I'm waiting

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Phew ...phinally the update ...

Shri...for ur decision of ending the flash back here ...😆

Next ...it was an very intense update ...

Shaurya tried to make sense in front of mehak , intoxicated state me sahi ...he almost confessed that he is still

With her ...tats y his

Encounter dialogues heart felt ...

Mehak must have understood it ...but I guess its too late for any thing ...

She gave him the apt answer ...sumwer he pushed her to this core , we're she is gonna end up with man like ajay ...

Waiting for shaurya to tell

To mehak 😳

Well I'm curious know wat all trick is shaurya gonna use to stop her getting married from ajay 😳

You chose the perfect words to describe the scenario ..👏

Very well written update shri ⭐️

Originally posted by: tibs09

Finally the the genie is out of the bottle

Well in this case alcohol bottle ...
I loved that Shaurya Khanna is finally off his high horse Shristi
Well Done

Originally posted by: ragnabw

Loved ur update the way mehek asked him 👏 plz update next part soon