~MEHRYA FF~ - TANGO- Chapter 17 Page 143 Updated on 02/5 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please continue! waiting for your update & get well soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I haven't written anything before so don't know what i am doing..Bear with me if there are any grammatical mistakes and my bad writing 😆
Character sketch and chapter 1 will come in later

PROLOGUE

Mehak being the only child always supported her mother by working in different restaurants and pastry shops as she was talented in arts and also in baking she used to enjoy working in pastry shops. For last two years her mother became very ill and she couldn't work so Mehak had to take responsibility of running the house and in order to do so she has to work all the time and giving up her dream of joining a university to continue her further studies in art

Mehak had her best friend (Anna) working with her in the same pastry shop she was working in and they used to enjoy their time being together. She always used to encourage Mehak to never give up her dream of studying further. Mehak gave up on that dream quite a while ago

Mehak: It is a farfetched dream Anna leave it at that. And even if I got into a good university somehow I couldn't afford its fees

Anna: You are gifted Mehak, you draw so well and you have good scores throughout your studies a university will definitely give you scholarship, you should at least try for a university please

Mehak: So you won't let this topic go away easily? OK I will try for it (Both smile)

Anna : That's the spirit and oh hey by the way today is that important order of a birthday cake of some rich businessman, we have to deliver that on time if not Boss will fire us both

Mehak: Oh yes you look after here I will go deliver that cake

Saying that Mehak takes the cake and starts walking towards the bus stop, it is on the other side of the road and as she was about to cross the road a car suddenly came out of nowhere but luckily the person applied brakes at the right time and didn't hit her but in her reaction she threw the cake in air and it fell on her head

Who was that person in the car and will she lose her job?

Stay connected to find out

Edited by HaRiSKh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Hey u showed up with ur update ...cool...nice start
Mehak seems to be an hard worker ...
Got an best friend ...Anna ??
Well the cake fell on her head ??


Im Sure WO kuch aisae lag rahi hogi ...

Well ithne sare TV shows and update padne ke baad I guess everyone can tell it was shaurya in the car ...lol

PS...update shuru hotey hi khatam Hogaya be 😳..😆...
Well written ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Hey u showed up with ur update ...cool...nice start

Mehak seems to be an hard worker ...
Got an best friend ...Anna ??
Well the cake fell on her head ??


Im Sure WO kuch aisae lag rahi hogi ...

Well ithne sare TV shows and update padne ke baad I guess everyone can tell it was shaurya in the car ...lol

PS...update shuru hotey hi khatam Hogaya be 😳..😆...
Well written ..

Yup she will look something like that lol
I already gave that away in the preview thabs lol
Thabs i lost prologue and chapter 1 and 2 which i wrote before so i just wanted to get this out😭
Chapters will be longer this is just to set up the story moving forward but thabs be honest if its bad tell then so i can stop this madness😆
Edited by HaRiSKh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start, waiting for 1st chapter dear...
Hope nothing major with your bed rest, get well soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Oh hello it was good...lekin update ke name pe mandir ka prashaad chada ya huva hai tune...
How did u lose ur chapters ???
Dont tell me if is not allowing the Goldie's too , to post big chapters 😲

Pagal panti ko jaari rakhna zaroori hai be ...get that straight 😆...
Try to save your update in an notepad or sumthing else ...and then try to post it here...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Oh hello it was good...lekin update ke name pe mandir ka prashaad chada ya huva hai tune...

How did u lose ur chapters ???
Dont tell me if is not allowing the Goldie's too , to post big chapters 😲

Pagal panti ko jaari rakhna zaroori hai be ...get that straight 😆...
Try to save your update in an notepad or sumthing else ...and then try to post it here...

prashad ke baad langar bhi lagega dont worry😆 and chapters will be lengthy but i still have to look around what is a good length for a chapter and i write fast so it won't be a prob 😆
i would have included the confrontation in the prologue but i left that for chapter later and no i try to save them in my laptop first and then post it, but my laptop's window got corrupted and its battery gone as well so i have to change all that and i lost a lot of my precious data 😭
i might just get off this madness as i am sure i won't be able to do any justice to it nor i am capable of doing it any...Better stick to reading 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey ...don't give up so easily ...
I know loosing precious data feels horrible ...
Cum on , wen ur free from ur routine ,if u get sum breaks ...do start writing ...coz I like your funny take on everything and I'm sure others wud enjoy reading ur story too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Interesting di .Please continue.
Don't worry di I can understand the feeling of losing precious data.It happened with me many times.
Waiting for ur next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Good start Harry..
Don't stop it..
Do Continue.

It you have already written than it must be stored in your head...so type it again😛

Waiting for the next chapter... 😉

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