~BIN TERE ~ FF ON MehRya .. Chap 9 Updated on Page 121 on 25th May. - Page 25

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Shamz15 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago

Tabu it's better you don't listen to your mind this time...I can turn the tables😈😆
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Hola ..ther cums my official cumnt ...

Read it all in one go ...😉
First , glad that u came up with this story ...


was missing reading your work 😳...

Second You know I love to tease you

Hope you dont mind for cumnting in late 😳 sowwie abt that ..


Becoz you bear my rants ...😆..to the core ...

First part ...was


Shaurya khanna ke rehte vilian ki zaroor at nahi hai ?? 😲

Seems like sumbody did an deep research for character sketch 😉 part ...it was



Vicky and nehal in love ...and thier respective siblings wanted to sort out thier problem ...
Sibling bonding was lovely to read 😳

Mehrya encounter was absolutely adorable to read ..
The way he taught she looks like elder sister and her thoughts abt shaurya wud have kids if he got married at right time ...!!

Without thinking she threw water in his face 😆 ,
And his question abt tea , coffee or me ?!?!?



This guy is full on besharam ...😆
If Vicky and nehal dint inform th...I guess these two wud have not stopped ther rants with each other ...right ?? 😆

After reading that villainous line abt shaurya..I thought he wud be khadoos ...
But yeah tho poora flirt dikh raha hai..I mean the girl was scared and wahan bhi he was trying to tease her regarding his proximity 😕
Mehak seems to be super irritated with him 😆

And he kissed her in the cheek ?

Well poor girl had to face so many things on thier first meet 😆
My crooked mindvis already thinking so many things abt how thier second encounter will be 😉😆

But the girl met with an accident 😲...



With this story so far 👏 and


Baby ...u know that 😉
So tell me


Now 😳 ?


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehryalove

Tabu didaa jaldhi parkar feedback do na mujhe partner ki zaroorath hai yeha 😈 🤣

Mission accomplished partner 😎 😳 😉 ...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

tabu it's better you don't listen to your mind this time...I can turn the tables😈😆

Glad I'm not giving u chance for it 😆...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-



Hola ..ther cums my official cumnt ...

Read it all in one go ...😉
First , glad that u came up with this story ...


was missing reading your work 😳...

Second You know I love to tease you

Hope you dont mind for cumnting in late 😳 sowwie abt that ..


Becoz you bear my rants ...😆..to the core ...

First part ...was


Shaurya khanna ke rehte vilian ki zaroor at nahi hai ?? 😲

Seems like sumbody did an deep research for character sketch 😉 part ...it was



Vicky and nehal in love ...and thier respective siblings wanted to sort out thier problem ...
Sibling bonding was lovely to read 😳

Mehrya encounter was absolutely adorable to read ..
The way he taught she looks like elder sister and her thoughts abt shaurya wud have kids if he got married at right time ...!!

Without thinking she threw water in his face 😆 ,
And his question abt tea , coffee or me ?!?!?



This guy is full on besharam ...😆
If Vicky and nehal dint inform th...I guess these two wud have not stopped ther rants with each other ...right ?? 😆

After reading that villainous line abt shaurya..I thought he wud be khadoos ...
But yeah tho poora flirt dikh raha hai..I mean the girl was scared and wahan bhi he was trying to tease her regarding his proximity 😕
Mehak seems to be super irritated with him 😆

And he kissed her in the cheek ?

Well poor girl had to face so many things on thier first meet 😆
My crooked mindvis already thinking so many things abt how thier second encounter will be 😉😆

But the girl met with an accident 😲...



With this story so far 👏 and


Baby ...u know that 😉
So tell me


Now 😳 ?




Kisi ne Sach kaha Hai ... Intezaar ka phaal meetha hota Hai...you won't believe but today in my dreams I have seen that you have gaven your feedback...lol 🤣

Loved the feedback as always ...⭐️


SK won't be Khadoos here ...if she taunts him or hurts him he will scare her out with his proximity😳

I'm super happy to see your reply and I know you have done lot of mehnaat for this feedback

I have already started writing the next chapter so wait for your next reply 😆

😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
Aapi sumtimes I feel ..you are not adult but an kid...😆...
I mean u saw my cumnt in ur dream ...
Your reply is as lovely as u 😳...
Yeah with 2g net of mine it took 45 mins for me to post that cumnt ...
But ithna wait karvaya hai tho ...jawab bhi waise hi dena tha na ???
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Aapi sumtimes I feel ..you are not adult but an kid...😆...

I mean u saw my cumnt in ur dream ...
Your reply is as lovely as u 😳...
Yeah with 2g net of mine it took 45 mins for me to post that cumnt ...
But ithna wait karvaya hai tho ...jawab bhi waise hi dena tha na ???


45 Minutes😲
Itni deir mein toh mein Chapter likh deti..
Hats off to your patience and dedication👏
I'm kid by heart 😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
4g net ..after 8 gets activated ..so yeah tats y so much time with 2g ...pages we're opening very slowly ...
Update is on the way...wow aapi u have picked up the speed of our show ...!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

4g net ..after 8 gets activated ..so yeah tats y so much time with 2g ...pages we're opening very slowly ...

Update is on the way...wow aapi u have picked up the speed of our show ...!!


U encouraged me for this quick update😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 3

Mahek is still dumbstruck with his act and Starts her scooty and starts talking to herself out of frustration...Khadoos.. Rakshas..jungli hope I don't have to see his face again in my life , on the other hand Shaurya is having a mischievous smile on his face pagaal ladki she don't know it's a small world and she has to face me again and again . Suddenly it starts raining and Shaurya parks his car aside and starts enjoying the rain sitting inside the car.

Mahek who was already pissed off because of Shaurya and delhi's traffic gets more irritated because of sudden rain... Hey mata Rani ab yeh Baarish bhi Abhi hona tha..she thinks instead of stopping and wait to for rain to stop she better drive fastly and reach home , ...She drives rashly and when suddenly takes a turn she bumps her scooty with a car and fell down on the ground with a injury on her elbow and a strain in her ankle ...driver of the car and a lady comes out runningly to help her , Mahek's dress get spoiled because of mud , ... driver gets scared and ask and asks for forgiveness...Mahek replies nahi Bhaiya it was my fault...Mera dhyaan kahin aur tha.. Lady helps Mahek to get up and asks driver to help her make her sit in the car and park her bike in a side...

Mahek: Aunty let it be I will manage and will call someone from home .

Lady : Beta it's already dark and how will you stand here in this rain and look at your clothes my home is just 5 Minutes away... please let me help you out because it was my driver's fault also he applied sudden break.

Mahek agrees to go along with the lady and sits in the car and introduce herself as Mahek Sharma, on the way she calls Nehal and inform about the accident and asks her to make some excuse that she will be late because of rain to kanta chachi...Nehal gets worried but mahek tells nothing to worry j will manage and come down soon.

They reach Khanna house and as it was dark Mahek couldn't see the Name plate outside the house and the lady who helped her was Karuna .. Shaurya's mother .
Karuna takes her to room and gives a saree to change.

M : Aunty saree .??..and this looks very costly iam Sorry aunty but I can't wear it .

K: Beta please manaa mat Kar , you know shayd mujhy yeh Zindagi Bhar aisy hi sambhal Kar rakhni padegi , I have buyed so many sarees for my would be daughter in law but I don't think my son will ever select a girl and get married she laughs and request her again.

Mahek smiles and nods her head ...Karuna tells you just change and I will bring turmeric milk and bandages for you, Mahek goes in her washroom to change ...she wasn't comfortable but looking at Karuna's gesture she melted down.

Shaurya enters the house and eager to meet her mom to discuss about Vicky and Nehal...he enters the room where Mahek is standing in front of the mirror looking and admiring herself...she takes the saree pallo and puts it on her head and smiles ... Shaurya couldn't see her face from behind and misunderstand her to be a
intruder and goes near to her and holds her mouth tightly...Mahek gets shocked and tries to shout and free herself, in this attempt her bracelet fells on the floor, Mahek bites his hand and push him away he fell on bed and mahek turns around... They both are shocked to see each other and Shouts at the same time TUM ...what are you doing here ,?? Shaurya gets up from the bed and goes near to her and tells this is my house Miss Sharma ,Are you following me ?? Mahek puts a hand on her cheeks and tells this all happened because of you that I have landed here.

Karuna comes there and surprise to see both of them glaring at each other...Karuna asks do you know each other ?? Shaurya tells Haan maa just met her few hours back , Karuna is happy to hear that they knew each other, and she describes the whole incidence about the accident, Karuna makes Mahek sit on the bed and tries to do bandage Shaurya tells Tu rehny de MAA mein karta Hoon ..Mahek stares at him and gives him a angry look .. Karuna is happy to hear that her son is actually trying to help a girl who always maintains a distance from girls .

She gives him the first aid box and tells I will just look where this Aawara is I have asked him to bring Milk for her, she leaves the room .. Shaurya sits on the bed and tries to hold her hand to Clean her elbow with Dettol , Mahek takes it from his hand and tells I will manage...and she tries to put Dettol using cotton but scared to keep it on her bruises ... Shaurya takes it back and scolds her ... bahut Sherni bannein ki koshish Karli give it to me , He puts the Dettol and mahek closes her eyes because of burn and a tear comes out from her eyes , Shaurya rubs it from and tells you will be fine he puts a ointment and keeps a band aid on it and asks her to forward her leg he will do a massage and put a bandage it

She denies but he force her he sits on the floor and hold her foot ...he finds Mahek's bracelet on carpet and he keeps it in his pocket...
Mahek has closed her eyes and was shouting please don't touch it ...she shouts in pain , Shaurya gets worried Karuna comes with milk and tells let him do beta pain will vanished in few minutes, Mahek makes a crying face but aunty it's hurting ... Shaurya tells Maa iskyy mooh par ek tape chipkao pehly...she talks a lot , Mahek beats him on his shoulder and tells I don't talk more than you , Karuna gives her milk and Shaurya does massage carefully , and put a bandage when karuna was on phone he asks you said it happened because of me ...means you were thinking about me right??? he mischievously smiles at her and mahek replies yes I was thinking about you , I was planning how to kill you , Happy ??

Mahek gets a call from kanta chachi who is worried about her...as nehal has informed she got hurt ..Mahek tries to pacify her ... Chachi mein theek Hoon aap pareshan mat hoiye ,mein bas Kuch deir mein aarahi Hoon .

She hangs up the call and tries to get up but wasn't able to walk , . Karuna holds her and tells driver will drop you beta .. Shaurya tells nahi MAA I will drop her , she is our guest and would be relative .. Shaurya comes and gives her support to walk Mahek and Karuna both look surprisingly at him .

Vicky comes there and gets shocked to see Mahek there and tells Mahek Di aap yahn ??

Vicky hasn't met her before but had seen her many times when she came to drop nehal to college.

Mahek smiles at him ...Vicky ?? Karuna gets shocked you all know each other but how ??

Shaurya tells Maa i will Come back and tell you everything, Vicky tells Bhai you talk to Mom I will drop her and come ... Shaurya gives a angry look at him , and Vicky tells ok ok Bhai aap drop Kar aaiye . Shaurya holds her and helps her to sit in the car .

Precap : Shaurya drops Mahek and next day Karuna visit Sharma house along with Shaurya and Vicky :D
Edited by Shamrouz - 8 years ago

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