Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 67

Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Nice update shristi dear 👏
Very well written,enjoyed reading it
Waiting for next chapter 😉
Love n hugs,
Sanjh ⭐️

Originally posted by: melissaR

Shristi! Nice update 👏 the only one I could read out of the many pending . My only complain is its too short 😭 but a nice one. Handsome opening up and even joking 😲 😳 The ending... Just when he makes progress he goes straight back to square one

Sham!! Thanks for the pics 🤗 They are perfect!!

Edit: I completely forgot...I love the question Mahek asked him. Going through all that betrayal and pain himself why does he inflict it on others...that was such a potent question 👏

Originally posted by: desiangel24

Shristi di, great update! Although I have to agree with the other forum members, it was too short. 😭

But I love how you developed Mehak , I love her character. I just wish that Shaurya would serve the same along with her. What's wrong with him battling mind over heart.

I love that Mehak brings him a different perspective. It was much needed for him. The way she ask him why he did the same to her. Part of me was saying that he just didn't realize the severity and part of me was saying that she's so strong, stronger than him like when he was defending her to her family.

I just can't imagine what the big final punch would be when Shaurya finally realizes and accepts that he just loves Mehak.

As always wonderful update!

Cheers!

Jaya

Originally posted by: sb1234

Loved it !!! So finally Shaurya is opening up about his past .. loved the whole conversation

Thanks for the update .. waiting for the next part :)

Originally posted by: KashishJ

Nice update Shristi.

Love the ending where he was confirmed and confused about Mehek being his friend.

Let this friendship be basic of their future

Originally posted by: Vedika211

I really like this story. I like Mehak a lot in this one. Shaurya is also true to character here 😊 I love the way she ignores him, and the way it drives him mad. I hope to see some more lovely scenes between them as their friendship slowly deepens. Thank you so much for writing this.

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Hey shri...

For accepting all dhamkis and giving us updates 😆

I totally loved the way he opened his heart up before her ..

Telling everything abt his past ...

I was going ...aww here reading all ...like this

And his self confession abt the way he lost cool was funny

Witnessing love of a true family ..seeing jeevan Chachu and mohit worried for mehak ...SK seems like he changing

The self talk to himself abt having a friend ...

Gave me an

But he snapped out of it soon...* face palm * uska kuch nahi ho saktha

Enjoyed reading it shri

PS...was definitely not an long update 😆

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Thank me again and I wud land up here with my bazooka ...samjihi...

Wat are ur thoughts abt abt my PS in my cumnt 😆

Originally posted by: shristi0706

I don't know why everyone is complaining tht it wasn't a long update 😭 Kyun?????? Ab toh ek badawaaala update Dena padega... Mayb I ll ask Kelly's help for that... Jai Kelly guru maiyya ki!!!! 😉