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soniaanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#641

Great

Left wanting for the next update fast after reading this.

Take care

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#642

Let me add few caps for u ...😛

Itna daraya dhamkaya Hai Isleaa 😉

Khadoos is trying to open up his feelings😲

It's good Mahek didn't tried to show her sympathy 😆

He doesn't deserve it so soon...And good he realized that what he did with MS wasn't justifiable coz he himself gone through all that betrayal ..

SK now thinking about friendship 🤪 but I know he will make all his efforts to gain back that trust...Try had Mr .Khaana 😉

Chalo good Shri. ..Tuny Tuesday ke din Update kardiya..Means dhamkiyaan ka assar baaqi Hai Abhi 😆

Loved this chapter...And hoping some MehRya moments in next chapter😉

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#643

Finally an update...thank you Shristi

Loved it very much. My favorite part had to be when Mehek questioned SK why he would to inflict the same as he had suffered on her. That's it make the man think. And think he has...the end was too funny as he contemplated a friendship with her.

Please update soon. Loving this story so much.

Thanks for the PM

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melissaR

@melissaR

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Posted: 8 years ago

#644

Shristi! Nice update 👏 the only one I could read out of the many pending . My only complain is its too short 😭 but a nice one. Handsome opening up and even joking 😲 😳 The ending... Just when he makes progress he goes straight back to square one

Sham!! Thanks for the pics 🤗 They are perfect!!

Edit: I completely forgot...I love the question Mahek asked him. Going through all that betrayal and pain himself why does he inflict it on others...that was such a potent question 👏

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#645

Shaurya impossible he is his heart says something & mind something else. Mehek realised he was very hurt from inside that's why he won't trust anyone in his life.

Nice update & thanks for PM

Vinu

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#646

Nice update shristi dear 👏
Very well written,enjoyed reading it
Waiting for next chapter 😉
Love n hugs,
Sanjh ⭐️

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desiangel24

@desiangel24

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#647

Shristi di, great update! Although I have to agree with the other forum members, it was too short. 😭

But I love how you developed Mehak , I love her character. I just wish that Shaurya would serve the same along with her. What's wrong with him battling mind over heart.

I love that Mehak brings him a different perspective. It was much needed for him. The way she ask him why he did the same to her. Part of me was saying that he just didn't realize the severity and part of me was saying that she's so strong, stronger than him like when he was defending her to her family.

I just can't imagine what the big final punch would be when Shaurya finally realizes and accepts that he just loves Mehak.

As always wonderful update!

Cheers!

Jaya

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sb1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#648

Loved it !!! So finally Shaurya is opening up about his past .. loved the whole conversation

Thanks for the update .. waiting for the next part :)

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Kash

@KashishJ

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#649

Nice update Shristi.

Love the ending where he was confirmed and confused about Mehek being his friend.

Let this friendship be basic of their future

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Vedika211

@Vedika211

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#650

I really like this story. I like Mehak a lot in this one. Shaurya is also true to character here 😊 I love the way she ignores him, and the way it drives him mad. I hope to see some more lovely scenes between them as their friendship slowly deepens. Thank you so much for writing this.

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