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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: nicky13
Oh nice ... Please continue it soon ..

Thanks for the encouragement nicky 😆

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Waida1234
Well Sharlene...! Aware of your camaraderie with Kelly...I know you'll come out with something beautiful and exciting...! 😊

Thanks Waida yes Kelly and i met in another forum and i enjoy her stories. I am new to writing so there will be mistakes 😆 This show is very interesting and enjoyable also the members of this forum are so friendly I decided to give it a try every episode i get ideas but i don't have time to write this being the weekend i give it a shot.I hope you enjoy and even if you don't a comment will be nice 😆 it helps motivate me to do better 😆

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oceanus85

@oceanus85

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

First of all no need to apologize for any mistakes, because that was an amazing update. I laughed when PD was like "do you want me to slap you in this old age" to Balwant. Also like crtkelly I loved when Sonal disclosed her conversation with Mehak and Shaurya's comment about Mehak being pregnant soon. You know I could totally imagine this scene playing out and like crtkelly I too wouldn't mind if this is the route the CV's went down. Please do continue your story and PM me.

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sketie

@sketie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

loved it dear!!!

aqwesome !

please write more of them !

it is really nice

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nicky13

@nicky13

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

It's so beautifully written... MehRya wedding wow ... I m more than happy... And the way Shaurya purposed to get marry to Mehak... Really impressed dear ... But only thing bugged me and that is he didn't purpose her directly ... Never mind I m fine with that ... He is so funny here when he said that Mehak is not pregnant but soon she will b( besharam Shaurya pata nhi after wedding what he is gonna do) thanks sweetie pie ... Love you for this story ... Your this story is like pyase logon ko PaNi mila ... Keep it up .. You r good writer... Give us more stuff on MehRya...

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tibs09

@tibs09

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Wow such genuine emotions .. Great read ..

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@Abhimita_love

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

wow love it
... keep writing
and update soon...
and marriage they both i want to see what will happened after marriage ... how they will react

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Auditi Ahsan

@Auditi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Nice... ❤️

I think you should continue as a FF... 🤗

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Waida1234

@Waida1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Hey...Sharlene...!

Awesome and beautiful one shot dear...! As far as grammatical errors issues...you just give it a miss...! When someone can eat a fly, taking it to be a dried raisin in a bowl of "riz au lait" @ kheer...these minuscule errors get unnoticed in such a long shot...! It's the taste that count...not the ingredients...sweetie...!

So..the Great Shaurya Khanna got a dose of his own drug...! Trying to defame Mehek using/playing dirty tricks...he too get buried in the grave, he dig for Mehek...! In fact. Shaurya lost much more than Mehek..his business deal, his mother's trust, his respected public image...while Mehek, lost only her good girl reputation...!

Apart from Dadaji...Mehek still had the rest of her family to support her to come out of this bad phase...but, Shaurya was all alone...! So the biggest looser was Shaurya...! There's a saying..."while taking revenge...you should always dig a second pit for yourself", what goes around comes around like a boomerang...!

I know for a man like Dadaji, self-respect is very valuable, more than money itself...but, in case of Mehek, i think he exaggerated more than needed...! He hates Mehek so much...blaming her of his elder son and daughter-in-law death...that, he couldn't see through Mehek soul...how much more she's suffering of her parents demised...! Genuine idea...Shaurya took his mom along with him while visiting the Sharma's...! Mrs Khanna was the protecting shield...that protected his son from getting beaten black & blue by Mehek family members...!

What to say about PD and Sonal...! They are the well-wishers of Mehek...! PD and her unlimited love for her sweet Ladoo...and Sonal the BFF...who unknowingly activated the timing bomb which aggravated the already tensed situation...!

But...at the end of the day...everything ended in a positive way to the satisfaction of both parties...The Sharma's and The Khanna's...! Shaurya proposal of marriage...and his promise, very soon to implant his seeds inside Mehek body, and produce a healthy junior Shaurya/Mehek...made everyone happy and the deal of LOVE was sealed...! ⭐️

Edited by Waida1234 - 8 years ago