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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Kelly, that was an awesome teaser!⭐️
Now waiting impatiently for the next chapter... And I am sure MS-Shaurya confrontation (particularly in your writing style) will be worth the wait...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Apologies for not responding to ur previous post... I read tht u r going to b very busy in the coming weeks... Family get-togethers n ur hubby's birthday... Hope u have a great time!!! We all need tht one good break to overcome the monotony of our daily life!!! So enjoy it to the fullest.
As for the teaser it's wonderful... Can't tell u how excited I m to read their confrontation... Eagerly waiting Kelly!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome teaser
Curious to know how Shaurya come to know about Mehak
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely teaser.
Battle lines are drawn.
Let the fireworks begin.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it Di..
Can't wait for the full Chapter..
Do continue Soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superrr...cant wait..cant wait ...cant waaaittt😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow MehRya came face to face. Shaurya knows now Mehek is his MS. This would be interesting to read main chap.
Pls update soonish

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Posted: 8 years ago
Guys, have been incredibly busy as I have been getting things done in advance of our travel next week. I will get back to the chapter as soon as possible...




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Posted: 8 years ago

Kelly...Just brilliant 👏.. I had made a start on this a while back, but couldn't make much headway. The forum had so many interesting discussions that whatever time I could spare, went in reading thro all that. But, now with the interest in the actual ZKM dwindling, I am devoting my time to all those FF that had caught my attention. I went from start to ch 23 in the last week, in between work, home and work. I kept scrolling down to look for ch 24 that hasn't come out yet!!!

There are many things I loved about the story, the plot in itself keeps you at the edge of your seat. But just to name a few of the others:

- The online chat that was just so heartwarmingly cute and reminded you of what was the heart and soul of the show. It was nice to see an entire romance blossom from that and bloom.

- I loved it that SK has character enough to fall for a nameless, faceless person on line, open up, let go of control and put himself out there that way, trust in that instinct that told him that there is something in that relation that is worth all the risk. At the same time, he is a man of action who can't sit idle and things pass by. You have stayed true to the essence of what he was originally and added on more layers to him that are just so lovable...

- Mehak was a complete pleasure to read. She is career driven, charming, takes charge of her life and yet is understanding and compassionate. I have read yours and Tibs FFs so far and the balance to characters that you girls have given is something that our CVs should learn.

- I read it at a time when ZKM and its characters are at their all time lowest. And I thoroughly enjoyed SK's assistant give him an earful and tell him what she thought of him without mincing any words. I absolutely loved it.

Just out of curiosity, when did you start this FF? At what point in the show did this story originate?

I understand that the show in itself right now might not be giving enough inspiration to continue. But, if it helps, the characters and the plot are so wonderfully removed from what is happening on the show that one can't even put those same faces on these characters! So, I hope you find the inspiration needed on your vacation and will give us the next chapter soon! Can't wait to see how that face-face go! It doesn't seem to have come as a total surprise to SK that MS and Mehak are one and the same or atleast grappling with it doesn't seem to have been hard!

Edited by DiyaKash - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DiyaKash

Kelly...Just brilliant 👏.. I had made a start on this a while back, but couldn't make much headway. The forum had so many interesting discussions that whatever time I could spare, went in reading thro all that. But, now with the interest in the actual ZKM dwindling, I am devoting my time to all those FF that had caught my attention. I went from start to ch 23 in the last week, in between work, home and work. I kept scrolling down to look for ch 24 that hasn't come out yet!!!

There are many things I loved about the story, the plot in itself keeps you at the edge of your seat. But just to name a few of the others:

- The online chat that was just so heartwarmingly cute and reminded you of what was the heart and soul of the show. It was nice to see an entire romance blossom from that and bloom.

- I loved it that SK has character enough to fall for a nameless, faceless person on line, open up, let go of control and put himself out there that way, trust in that instinct that told him that there is something in that relation that is worth all the risk. At the same time, he is a man of action who can't sit idle and things pass by. You have stayed true to the essence of what he was originally and added on more layers to him that are just so lovable...

- Mehak was a complete pleasure to read. She is career driven, charming, takes charge of her life and yet is understanding and compassionate. I have read yours and Tibs FFs so far and the balance to characters that you girls have given is something that our CVs should learn.

- I read it at a time when ZKM and its characters are at their all time lowest. And I thoroughly enjoyed SK's assistant give him an earful and tell him what she thought of him without mincing any words. I absolutely loved it.

Just out of curiosity, when did you start this FF? At what point in the show did this story originate?

I understand that the show in itself right now might not be giving enough inspiration to continue. But, if it helps, the characters and the plot are so wonderfully removed from what is happening on the show that one can't even put those same faces on these characters! So, I hope you find the inspiration needed on your vacation and will give us the next chapter soon! Can't wait to see how that face-face go! It doesn't seem to have come as a total surprise to SK that MS and Mehak are one and the same or atleast grappling with it doesn't seem to have been hard!


Diya, loved your analysis of Kelly's FF... I loved her FF from the start as the characters were so close to the show. She has done cent percent justice to the online love story between KK and MS, I love it! Amazing work of fiction! I love her Shaurya a lot!
Kelly makes sure that she keeps us on tenterhooks for her next chapter!!😆😆😆
Edited by -Patsy- - 8 years ago

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