MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: -Patsy-
Hey Kel, awesome twist wala update...👏
I am a bit disappointed that Shaurya has not gone to Florida yet, but I leave it to you to decide. But the only thing that surprises me is that everyone had joined the dots and found out that MS is indeed Mehak...why is our bhai acting like a bhudduram?
I liked Rajeev and Hina's convo...smarty Hina will definitely give the clues to Shaurya but can't Rajeev also help Shaurya by giving Mehak's Florida address? Karuna aunty too guessed and gave him clues...poor Shaurya, he's so pre-occupied now that all he wants to do is give explanations to MS...his Dost❤️
I don't want him to go to PWG now as Kanta may snub him but will he get any clues by going there?🥺 When he learns that Mehak has gone away all of a sudden, Ab toh he can put two plus two na? 😆
And I am just not interested in this Malik guy...😡 Kabab mein haddi...

Please bring in the MS-KK face-off in the next update yaar! Cannot just wait...😛

I confess not being entirely happy with that chapter initially, but I imagine that such will be aftermath of such drama. If you have read the teaser you will see that decisions to head west has been made, and while I cannot guarantee a full interaction between the two, but the makings of one are there. In the meantime there are some details to take care of😉

Oh and as to Malik, I can't believe so many are hating on the man😆 who had been such a support to him, Never fear, his overbearing tendencies, which stem from his worry, will be reined in, in a way I hope everyone enjoys LOL...but you have to know that he will most likely go head to head with one SK...soonish.

Anyway I hope you enjoy the next update. Posting it soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: bworm
Exciting. ..fireworks ahead I guess.
Weekend update..yay

Thanks for the pm...so worth it.

So is SK going to join the dots on this long flight ...or be suprised.

Rajiv going to give rhe heads up the mehek...ir will let them sort it out.

Or kana chachi call malik aprise him of the situation.

Questions galore and answers by this weekend

some answers accounted for...some questions remain.

I hope you enjoy the update.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: shristi0706
It's early morning here... I log in to check for new updates n to my surprise it's ur PM... So happy to read ur teaser... So our Shaurya Khanna is off to US to track his MS... Such an impatient soul!!! But thts wht love does to u n here it's the fear of losing his love tht made him get on to tht flight n go for her.
I hope u would update the chapter as u promised!!

Hey Shristi, this is one time I am going to use the time difference to may advantage. Still Sunday here so technically I am posting on the weekend. It took longer that I thought but I think I am finally ready to post.

I hope you enjoy it.😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Shaurya finally flying to Orlando. Hoping he would find out soon both MS & Mehek are same. He is going to Connect all the dots to reach MS but it will lead him to Mehek.

Thanks for PM

Waiting for weekend

Vinu

Thanks for the comment. Yes finally moving everyone into the position they need to be. So while not the full blow meet everyone is looking for, the details I couldn't omit.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: -Patsy-
Super teaser Kel...👏👏👏
So, Shaurya is desperate in getting to the US as soon as possible to get to his dost, MS...from your teaser I got the clue (him giving the bouquet to his Mom) that he neither went to Mehak's house nor met Kanta chachi...since he is assuming that Mehak is still in Delhi, he is again not going to join the dots ...no problem there, I want him to be in total shock and surprise when he learns that MS is none other than Mehak... !! 😲
And I think 19 hours is enough for him to be ready with answers to Mehak's questions What can you do for me and how far can you go...? Well the answer lies in the fact that he can literally cross the seven seas for MS leaving his show and his business just to make sure that his dost has not misunderstand him!⭐️

Looking forward for the dhamakedaar weekend update!😉

And thanks for the PM dear...😛

Thanks Patsy, you are right, Shaurya has left clueless as to certain facts in his haste to get to his MS. As I mentioned, getting everyone where they need to be, and in the roles needed for the continuation of this story in sunny Florida.

Hopefully I will translate well enough from my head to the word document. Felt a litte adrift for a bit, but hopefully reining things back in.

new update coming up soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Woww a surprise teaser ... thanks for the PM Kelly..
He hasn't met Mahek before leaving means he still thinks she is in Delhi, hope you have decided whose encounter you are gonna show us first...

Waiting eagerly for Weekend update..

Still the weekend thank goodness, so I haven't reneged on my word.😊

Update coming up soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#877

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87
Hi Kelly,
Here I was hoping of a Dhisshoom Dhishoom between Kanta and Shaurya, n tumne use plane ma bitha diya. 😆 Duffer has yet not figured out the truth. Looks like he will only understand when he comes face to face with MEhek 🤪🤣

I really thought about it and then realized that it wouldn't add anything but more chaos and mayhem to an already complicated situation. There is, I reckon plenty of time for that, if and when MehRya get together LOL.

So instead I have focused on getting everyone where they need to be in this new phase of the story.

I hope you enjoy it.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: SAHELIM
Great Chapter Di..👍🏼
I liked Rajiv and Hina Convo..Smart Girl,I must Say..⭐️
good to see k Mel is back and her way of calling Mallik..Uncle 🤪
and yes Shaurya..Bhai tera aqkal kya ghaas charne gaya hey..Mr. Tubelight Khanna 😆
karuna aunty too guessed and gave him clues..but yeh toh 😕
Teaser seems Interesting..eagerly waiting for the next chapter..😛
and Sorry for being late Di..

never apologize hon, I am happy enough that you needed.

@ bold we need Mel back for sure right now, as the story continues you will see why😉

As to Karuna, even though she used the key words, I wouldn't say that she understands the true connection between Mehek and MS, but she recognizes that something is definitely up with Shaurya and Mehek.

I hope you enjoy the next update. I can assure you that after this one...it will be fast moving😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#879

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Kelly what a teaser Shaurya going to be in shock when he finds out MS Is Mehek
He really loves this girl who he has never seen face to face just read her words and Mehek he is deeply attracted to her with her he can control his emotions being loyal to MS the unknown Ms means who means the world to him

What a moment that will be 😆

Thanks for the comment Sharl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#880

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Okay Kelly first I have to apologize ...becoz I read the chapter 22 long back but I guess I for got to cumnt so

About that 😭 !!
Hmm do the misunderstandings take an toll on both shaurya and mehak ...
Mehak already left and shaurya us not aware about it ...
On the other end , he is worried about his friend Ms , thinking wat wud be her first reaction after all this link up fiasco !!

Good thing that rajive came to know ,wat went wrong with mehak ...and has the proof ready !!
Mehak was indeed mad at shaurya tat she bid him good bye ...
And he wanted to fly to Florida ? For her 😲 !!

The next chapter was interesting ...
Rajiv and hona had sum smart convo I must say ...
Rajiv knows abt chef malik from mehak ?
And the picture and the chef name they we're discussing about
I guess these two rajiv and hona must have concluded that mehak is ms ?
The interviews part was very well written kells !
Nehal is a perfect sister and sonal is a perfect , really. Liked they way they bombarded shauryas office 😆
Karuna being a kind mother cud sense his sons actions...

And yaay I'm. Glad to see Mel back 😆
Orlando part beautifully written ...
Shaurya agreed to his mom that he wud accoympqny his mother at sharmas ...
If he had then he must have known the fact that , she left !
But going by teaser ..I think the devastated man dint get an chance to find it out !!
Well the story is moving in an interesting pace...

You did great buddy ⭐️

No apologies necessary Thabs,

Remember it is Rajiv that is totally aware of everything that has happened Mehek, Disney, Chef Malik etc because it was he who acted as the Middle Man when the Sharma's didn't believe the offer to be legitimate. So yes he would also know where she was staying, and would have recognized the photo...the only thing he did not know was that Mehek was MS, so he is just as shocked.

So yes the story is heading west, with SK making the choice to go after his MS...we will just have to see how that all goes😊

Thanks for the comment Thabs!