MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Another brilliant update Kelly ⭐️ ⭐️

Thanks Sharlene😛

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: Faith28
Brilliantly penned...could visualise their dinner date..it was that detailed👏 tipsy mehek is sure sassy and bold😉 I hope he finds out about MS before she goes back... or Or Or... He can come looking for her in US😉😆 Looking forward to the post-kiss effects☺️

Thank you Faith.

Discovery is soon on it's way, and I can confirm there is a 50/50 chance of it happening as you had written😆.

Just keep reading, is all I request😉

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: jani_faizal
Wow... Words escape me... I didn't think Mehek would be that bold... looking forward to what happens next... what will Shaurya do. I hope when he finds out about MS being Mehek he doesn't think she played him.

Hey Jani, I don't even think that boldness was her original intent, but when fuelled by a couple of glasses of liquid courage, who knows what one is capable off😉. SK reaction to the story and the eventual reveal will obviously be paramount to the storyline.

Thanks for the read and the comment.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22
My my!!!!!
That was so dignified and at the same time intimate...
This is so much appreciable di ...without any of 'that' physical contact it wrenching sensual...

Mehek is yes been very bold!!!😳
Waiting to see the post-kiss effects...I just relished that part when she asked shaurya...and the next moment their dance..😳
It felt like heaven..

I surely contemplate on mehek's actions and I loved this side of hers...

Will be sincerely waiting...
Do update soon Di..

Thanks for the pm!!😛

Thank you, I do appreciate the compliment.

Between the time frame and her slightly looser inhibitions, Mehek thought her method the quickest way to achieve what she needed to. 😉

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: fizzyfairy
Just one word
Wow !!!!!

Could read your writing forever.
Thankyou.

And a simple word is the very best of compliments! Thank you so much.😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#666

Ahh, the quest for the perfect length teaser: something that has evaded me throughout this FF. Okay here's another attempt. Do tell how I have done with this one😉:

Chapter #18 Teaser...

"Keep still for a second and let your body get accustomed, Ms. Sharma. It will get better, I promise."

She pushed futilely against his chest. "Nahi, just let me up, Shaurya."

The tear-filled voice affirmed that any trace of the passion that had led them to this moment had evaporated when he had claimed her, and now she sounded as if she was seconds from entering a complete state of panic.

Capturing her hands above her head to hold her fast, Shaury brushed his lips against hers: softly with an infinite amount of patience in order to help her relax, for if nothing else, he had come to know that she loved his kisses. It took a minute or two, but soon he felt the tension easing from her body, and so he upped the stakes; releasing her, and then supplementing his lingering kisses with a sensual caress that began with a soft touch to her face and worked its way down. With an endurance, he would never have imagined he had, he ignored his own desires as he paid homage to her body with his mouth and hands, until he was rewarded with the indicators that hinted to his success in arousing her ardor once more. Nuzzling her throat, he tested the theory and shifted slightly, smiling to himself when Mehek threw her head back, emitting a breathy sigh as she did. In this, she looked to be perfect as well: honest to a fault in her passion. The man who finally took her as his life partner would be the luckiest man on earth, Shaurya thought. Briefly he wondered if after tonight, would she still look to her mystery man. He would be a lying bas***d if he didn't feel some satisfaction that it was him here with her, and not some lothario who had caught her eye. Then again, who would have imagined that, egged on by one champagne induced kiss, that their night would end with him being offered what was never, in a million years, meant for the likes of him either.

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Commenting after a long time!

And i am shocked to read this teaser...i thought shaurya loved ms...he don't know mehek and ms are the same...but mehek knows both are the same..oh..my!i am going to faint..!

I loved every chapters till now..very well written..my exams were going on...that's why i left with just clicking the like button..i think i will post a page full of comments for next chapter