MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#451

Brilliant. ..loved it.

looking forward to Mehek and shauryaa fights.

Thanks for the pm

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snehatara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#452

Thanks for the lovely update Kelly.😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: -mina-
What a punchy ending!! That was a very satisfying chapter Kelly, thanks for including all of these scenes. Hehe I feel Shaurya's balance will not soon be restored - there's so much he doesn't know. Will be intrigued to see how it goes. Loving Mehek's return home after a period of independence and growth. Will we be seeing much of her with her family? I know to tell a focused story they may not fit but "home" can only mean family na? 😉

Also, I still remember receiving a PM from you when I was posting one of my first fics, and your appreciation meant so much to me ❤️. I accidentally deleted all my PMs a few months ago so I no longer have it but I do remember it well. Was beyond excited to see your name as a fic author when I peeked in on the forum specifically hoping to find an interesting story! Loving the progress and looking forward to more 😊

Mina thanks so much for the comment😊. As I am stickler for continuity and for details, I find myself unable to leave things that make sense in my mind. I do wonder if I overwhelm the readers sometimes with too much info, but I cannot help it, so I am especially grateful when it is appreciated.

Of course we can expect some family interaction, you know the Sharmas will have an opinion to offer on anything and everything to do with Mehek. I will try not to let that aspect take on a life of its own, but this certainly would be something I couldnt ignore.

And I cannot believe you remember a pm I sent you...I must have penned it so well😳😆. Frankly I am stll giddy knowing that you are enjoying this.

So there will be interesting times ahead here for this pair( at least for the next 10 days anyway). I hope you enjoy the upcoming updates as we determine which of them mantains the upperhand.😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: -mina-
First comment 😲 😆

WooHoo😛

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Awesome update Kelly...
Loved to see their encounters now 😛
Malik is such a sweet character...
Loved the Scene where SK caught staring at her 😆
Men will be men 😛

Waiting for the next chapter ...Thnx for the PM 😊

Thank you Sham😊. See, there was still a lot more after my teaser /update to relay to you😆

Malik is a sweetie isnt he? Definite plans for him, but if all else fails we can always let him end up with the Mel of this story😆

But back to our hero: Mehek has got him totally off centre with both her unexpected appearance , not to mention her changed look. If just a nice top and a pair of jeans mess with shaurya's head imagine the poor man's reaction if she ever puts some real effort to entice him😉.

Will be starting on the next update soon.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: stellaV
Kelly 😊 That was amazing.
Ohh you did a great job introducing a character like Chef Malik. How I wish i could have a man like him in my life too 😆
So, mehak back to India with her beauty all the more enhanced now. Even The Great Shaurya Khanna was not able to resist looking at her. She has definitely become more efficient in dealing with all sort of people, and this quality won't go unnoticed by SK 😃. I simply loved the ending 😊
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks a lot for the PM 😊

Thanks Stella😛

I must say I agree with you. Every girl should have their own Chef Malik: a guy of the highest quality who is a total piece of eye-candy😳😆.

Mehek is back with a bang and although I expect she hasnt intentionally made the effort to change her look, it was only natural that she do some shopping while in th US right? And even if she hadnt planned on it I would expect that last shopping excursion she would have been encouraged by Rachna and Naomi...a designer and a former model who arent catty witches and little instigators in their own right😆 to indulge a bit. I am sure that would have resulted in a few more trendy/interesting purchases dont you?

But as you mention not only are the changes physical, and I sure that SK will be floored by them as well😆

For now though Mehek is of the opinion that the devil you know is better than one you dont, but how Shaurya feels about her snappy comeback is something I will definitely disclose in the next update.

Will PM when something is ready to post.

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Santiago24

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#457

Kelly, I want more.. post more.

Can't wait!!! Puhleese

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#458

Kelly love it ⭐️ this is the build up to another interesting face to face with Mehrya 😆. Shaurie just like the typical man was drawn to her beauty and he noticed the difference 😆 Looking forward to their tom and jerry fights also their online chats I really want to know if Shaurie will discuss with his MS about his interactions with Mehek the torn in his side will she slowly become a rose at his side

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Patsy

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#459

Fantabulous, Kelly...you have a way with your words! just love your style of writing...⭐️

Please update soon, just want to see Shaurya's reaction to Mehak's sudden early appearance for the shoot - very eager for their one-on-one conversation...you have maintained the thrill and excitement so far as MS knows that KK is Shaurya but KK doesn't know that MS is Mehak...Wow!...but this suspense is becoming unbearable now, so break the suspense soon please!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#460

Another amazng update from a terrific writer Kelly!!!! Great work!!!

So Mehak is back in India and is shooting for ISC season 2. Well, we already knw that she was beautiful of course, our handsome Shuarya took time to realize that. Good, that he was checking her out..maybe he did miss her after ISC ended. Maybe he misses their bickering and fights.

Oh and Malik, he is a sweetheart.. Hope you are not thinkning of a love angle for him with Mehak..Please i wouldnt want that coz I want him to remain a loyal and trustworthy friend for her..only a friend!!!

I hope i get to see more of Mehrya conversation in the nxt update...face to face😎 I would want to read how Mehak would react when she talks to Shuarya knowing all about him. That will be interesting to read!!!

Thanks for the PM once again!

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