MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

I finally read all the chapters
So the SHAURYA khanna is now provoked to prove his online deary friend...tat he is not a bad guy ?? Haan ?? 😉
I was totally enjoying the boss and PA moment 😆
Shaurya sounded like an hesitant teenager wen he was aking for a review regarding him at ISC 😆
After hearing Hina' first few words ..I was like
Hina..you are in big trouble 😲😆
But I was surprised at shauryas response ..
I thought he wud react the khadoos way ...but his reply telling abt professionalism... Made me just
But I really liked the way hina described SK's nature
She knows him very well...⭐️
One day hopefully our mehak wud also know tat 😳
And know the producer already selected the participants without telling judges ??
That's weird
On the other side .mehak was surrounded by the lovely wishes from her concerning people ..
Glad she replied him back without holding any grudge ...
She is really an princess by heart

So after hearing abt chef malik,..SK was definitely not happy 😆
But still he continues to care for her😳
Mom and son talks wer pleasant
The teaser was fabulous ...
She got him back telling , wether she shud consider him brother ..
And his reply was just

One advice to Mr.khanna don't overboard with ur emotions 😆😉

Everything is just perfect in this story kells , its just

I had an

Experience reading it

And Kelly

Keep penning down your talent girl ...you surely area an great writer ⭐️

Thanks Thabs. I am so happy that you have caught up and have enjoyed the story thus far. Yes Shaurya is a far cry from his usual acerbic self, but the storyline I have in mind has plenty of opportunity to see the khadoos man we all know and love. Right now, he is definitely trying to get on MS's good side, and that means a kinder gentler Shaurya Khanna.😆..I know it doesn't even sound right does it ?.

If I can pen it as well as I can see it in my head, it should be a good story.

Thank you for the sparkly review it brightens up the thread immensely😊

Kelly

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Kelly u make me feel so J ...women 😆
U write summaries in the name of reply ...I feel so embarrassed... That I really wish I can give cumnts like the way u reply ** covers face** 😳 😆

Back to back responses, eh?

You are hilarious Thabs. Considering that the only way I would be able to even fathom preparing such creative posts as you do on a regular, is to glue pictures all over my computer screen, like a pre-schooler😆 I will ignore your supposed deficiency. Absolutely no reason to be jealous, dear

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: sudha_
Awesome update Kelly 😳
Eagerly waiting fr next chapter.. ❤️

Thanks... Chapter 7 in its entirety is now up so I hope you have the chance to read it.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: shristi0706
Chapter 6: Sorry again for commenting so late!!!
Wht intrigues me the most tht Mr. Perfectionist is totally smitten with his online buddy without having seen her ever. He is making himself worthy enough for his online love MS. He has started feeling the pangs of jealousy for her when he comes to know tht she is going on a lunch date with her colleague...What i loved the most is the Mehak in spite of knowing KK is Shuarya khanna n all tht he hd done to harm her reputation is still giving him a chance.

Thanks for the PM Kelly...waiting to see wht the future has in store for these two lovers...i hope the CVs havent forgotten the crucial track of their online chatting. It was such a refreshing track from the usual love stories thts being dished out to us on television these days!!!

Never fear about the tardiness, Shristi. I am so far behind myself, I know I owe a few updates to my fellow writers right now😕

SK is certainly taking a real leap of faith right now, which is so unlike the character, but I am personally enjoying this side of him. From his perspective the scenario could go either way: the fulfillment of his dreams, or an agonizing betrayal, unlike anything he has ever experienced. I would like to think that someone like Shaurya would take a chance on life ( and love) again after the devastation of his past..

And Mehek, well she is just a sweetheart in general, so despite of the misgivings I could see her going the route that I have taken,

I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it progresses😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: bworm
Amazing chapter. ...love how you are exploring them.
Love their chats. ...
Will we be seeing a jala bhuna shaurua soon?

Another fabulous update...left me hankering for more.

Looking forward to next update.

Thanks for the pm

Thanks so much for the comment.😊 I am happy that you like the progression of the story. A little self-analysis never hurt anyone and hopefully our defective hero will remember this when the inevitable discovery of his online buddy's identity. Until then you can expect more of their chatting as they each carry on with their respective lives😉.

Will pm for sure when the next update is done.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: -Patsy-
Loved it Kelly, awesome update...loved the way he opened up to her...and he was like'bhai'- my foot...😆😆
Shaurya is going green with jealousy with the mention of chef Mallik... Wow, let's see what our Khadoos does now!
Eagerly waiting for your next update!

Thanks Patsy😛

What to say Shaurya maybe be clueless in some respects but he clearly understands how men think and he determined to be bhai-zoned and allow this new aquaintance to make inroads on his turff😆. Will he know success is the question that needs answering for now😉

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: Mayajac
Hey dear..read all the chapters in one go..

FF..

All the chapters are Wonderfully written..

Hope v get to see KK nd MS chat in serial too..

Gud to see jealous Shaurya.. Haha..

Thanks for the PM dear..

Glad you enjoyed Maya... hope you find it as interesting as it progesses😊

Will pm you when the next update is ready

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Patsy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Thanks Patsy😛
What to say Shaurya maybe be clueless in some respects but he clearly understands how men think and he determined to be bhai-zoned and allow this new aquaintance to make inroads on his turff😆. Will he know success is the question that needs answering for now😉

😆😆😆 I like the term Bhai-zoned...

PM me when your next chap is ready...it is always a pleasure to read your story! 🤗