MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1131

Originally posted by: jani_faizal
Finally Shaurya knows what the problem is and who's involved. Now it's time to fix it. I hope Mehek isn't too stubborn to see the truth. Update soon.

The truth is out at last...I'm certain in his wildest dreams, SK didn't expect to hear what he has. 😕.

I have begun the next update, so barring any distractions, hopefully that the wait won't be as long as it was for this last chapter.

Thanks for the read and comment Jani. The feedback definitely keeps me going.

Will PM when the next update is ready.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1132

Originally posted by: sarroo
Nice update.. thanks for the pm

Thank you Sarroo, glad that you liked it and took the time to comment.😛 I will PM when the next chapter is ready.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1133

Originally posted by: bworm
Wow. This,one packed a wallop.
So the truth is out. Communication is the key.
They confessed in a matter of fact way...it was sweet.
Now, SK you need to fix what you didn't break, but broke.

Thanks for the pm

I am so glad you are happy with it...for the longest time, I wasn't. I rewrote their interaction in her new flat over and over...and then all of a sudden the chapter was 4K words😲😆

With reference to their confession, I figured that the circumstances were dramatic enough, so no OTT declaration of love was need. I am glad it translated well.

So SK has his work cut out for him, with none of this his fault...poor guy.

I will PM when the next chapter is done,

thx for the comment!

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1134

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Thanks Kelly for the pm 😊
Loved the update ⭐️ I am going to be bold face and state my demands 🤣 Kelly 😆
I want Shaurya to explain to Mehak what she think she knows to be the truth is indeed a lie a mirage by Uday to bring in ratings and a performance by a young witch I want her to realize and accept Shaurya's love
Malik can stay will Mel away from Mehak 😆

Not asking for much aren't you Sharlene. But hey if you don't ask you don't get right😉. Lets see if the man can get his love to see the truth why don't we?😛

Thankd for the read and comment

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vimikrao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1135

Shaurya showed her the clipping of Uday, but Mehak is still unhappy abour Esha who was seen in his dressing room 😔

Hope Shaurya would manage to convince her, that lady has nothing to do with Shaurya's life 😕

Thanks for PM Kelly

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Mishtilove

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1136

hello kelly di.

discovering the magic is one beautiful story written by a beautiful writer.

Their online chat was so good to read,im actally go through those magical time of zkm during those chat time.

i love sk n ms alot of ur story ,but ,uff that esha n that malik...hw long the came between my loving Mehrya???

i want mehrya together...3 year long contact i wonder how sk n ms manage after their marrige(well,that is of my imagination only,but i knw u too got them married😉hain naa di)

di plz update the nxt part soon naa,i wanna knw hw shaurya gonna handle all the misunderstandng with his love.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1137

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Shaurya showed her the clipping of Uday, but Mehak is still unhappy abour Esha who was seen in his dressing room 😔

Hope Shaurya would manage to convince her, that lady has nothing to do with Shaurya's life 😕

Thanks for PM Kelly

You are quite welcome for the PM Vimikra; thanks a lot for the comment!

Shaurya has his work cut out for him, but one thing we know is that he when he is determined, he can get things done, no matter what it takes😊

working on the next chapter with the view of getting it posted sooner rather than later,

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1138

Originally posted by: Misthilove
hello kelly di.
discovering the magic is one beautiful story written by a beautiful writer.
Their online chat was so good to read,im actally go through those magical time of zkm during those chat time.
i love sk n ms alot of ur story ,but ,uff that esha n that malik...hw long the came between my loving Mehrya???
i want mehrya together...3 year long contact i wonder how sk n ms manage after their marrige(well,that is of my imagination only,but i knw u too got them married😉hain naa di)
di plz update the nxt part soon naa,i wanna knw hw shaurya gonna handle all the misunderstandng with his love.

Misthi...THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!

I certainly know that this hasn't been the fastest moving story, so it is especially gratifying to know as long as it has taken, that there are readers who patiently wait for the updates and are enjoying it so much.

Never fear, all of the side characters will be set in their respective spots very soon, and it is my hope that everyone will at least understand Malik's POV if they can't forgive him out right. Now the others, personally I think they are due some real Shaurya Khanna retribution, especially if he cannot get his MS to see the light.😉

So silly me has started another FF, which I am anxious to get on with, so I hoping that this will instill the discipline I need to be more frequent with my updates, as until DTM gets updated, the other will have to wait.

That being said, I better get on with things😆, but I wanted to give you lovely comment a just response,

Thanks again

Kelly

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Diva200

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1139

Thank you for the pm.
What a lovely update and sorry for late reply. So Malik hits Sk and Ms was not happy with Malik. Ms is professional and accepts working with Sk for 4 days even though Malik was not pleased with the idea. Sk had been planning to win back ms but ms takes him to dine at Mels place where they have chance to have one to one chat. She confronts him about being with Esha in his dressing room. So how is Sk going to explain and prove to her that It was Uday and Esha playing games to deceive her about Sk and poor Sk is innocent. Pls update soon.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1140

Originally posted by: Diva200
Thank you for the pm.
What a lovely update and sorry for late reply. So Malik hits Sk and Ms was not happy with Malik. Ms is professional and accepts working with Sk for 4 days even though Malik was not pleased with the idea. Sk had been planning to win back ms but ms takes him to dine at Mels place where they have chance to have one to one chat. She confronts him about being with Esha in his dressing room. So how is Sk going to explain and prove to her that It was Uday and Esha playing games to deceive her about Sk and poor Sk is innocent. Pls update soon.

Thanks for the comment Diva. So the truth as Mehek knows it is out and it will take some work to get her to believe Shaurya...either that or some shock treatment. New update is ready so you can find out in a bit😉

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