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AshesToDustPM

@AshesToDustPM

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: KaranSGRules
wow...
amazing start
conti soon
thanx for d pm :)

Originally posted by: suhaaana
Hi thanks forthe pm
awesum prologue
do post part 1 soon

Thank You!😳

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Rafia

@GilrinTheGold

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Brilliant Start Suri. I love your way of writing 😃. A nice twist from the beginning, Kashaf being already engaged. You managed to go with the original characterization and thats saying something. Only a tiny problem lies with me which I already told you about. Continue soon!

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

My 1st ever zashaf story...
I m in love with zaroon these days nd addicted to zgh like anything..

Awesome start.. I loved it...

Continue soon

Nd continue pming me for dis one too...

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Sabina_Ansari

@Sabina_Ansari

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Thnx for the pm...
Loved the update...
Lookinv forwad for more...

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

oh good story ..

continue soon

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Amazing chapter...

So Kashaf's engaged😕

She's doing gr8 in the university and Zaroon wants to know her better

Would be interesting how he'd make her break those shackles and open up

Update soon

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Awsumm Dear!! So Kashaf is engaged to Saim(Also Asmara's cousin!) who didnt want her to study in her dream institution. Asmara is jealous..(Lyk Brother lyk Sister! 🤢) Well she always is..And Osama Intrested in her..😉 Loved the little convo of ZaShaf and The Computer Freak KaShaf! Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Kashaf the most intelligent of the murtaza's! True indeed. I liked how you've maintained the essence of the characters in your story...relatable. Kashaf's mom _/\_ she has instilled amazing values in her daughters. Asmara is so weird -_- she should get a life. The story is developing smoothly and you've penned it nicely too.
Update soon :))