Originally posted by: NoeticLife
Haan, zaroor bolna. Main zyaada udhne lagungi warna. Pata chala ki yeh sochkar ki main achha likhti hoon, engineering chodh doon, phir pata chala main toh achha likhti hi nahi.
Me back to physics now.
Sorry for the headache, soul sister. ๐คฃ
Sure, sure, aaram se dena. Tumhaari requests mujhe likhni achhi lagti hain. (Agar tumhe meri writing achhi lagti hai toh...)
... Ek second, tum toh very good likhkar bahut baar chodti ho. ๐๐๐
Aab tum hi usko decipher karo ki mujha kya lagta hain.๐๐๐
Jab jab bohot acha lagta hain I really compliment jaisa ki aaj.
Aaj mujha sach main bohot acha laga .๐คฉ
It had depth , it seemed like kaafi mehnaat dali hain tumne.โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Usually you have so many requests but still tum sab ka liya likhti hon iss liya I write very good.
It's not that your writing is bad but iss liya cause meri books main taste kaafi ajeeb hain.๐๐๐
Which is very against my basic nature.๐๐
Ab aate hain request pai .
I know you have already mixed it in this one but I think a detailed one on this would really make sense as monami ko aisa lagna ki she has cheated karan would make sense after emphasizing on the lines kisi teesra ko hamare beech nahi aane dungi.
Could you if you don't have many requests write one where monami is really depressed and locks herself up in her room thinking she has cheated on karan going close to balli .๐๐
Toh everyone is worried about her state , karan usko bohot samjhne ki koshish karta hain par she still feels bad.
Toh karan sabke samne ussa manane ka liya belated valentine's party rakhta hain.( Time line ko maro goli , I know it's too late but still๐๐๐).
Where he rehearses a speech aur usko sabke samne apne feelings express karta hain . No not for wedding don't go there but a forvever wala promise.๐๐๐
Sab shock ho jate hain yeh soch ka ki kya yeh karan hi hain.๐๐ Bichare sirji monami ka liya kya kya kar rahe hain.๐๐๐
Maina basic premise diya hain ab tum likho.๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ
Merako khudh nahi pata maina kya mang liya as yeh forever jaisi cheeza Merako zyada samaj nahi aati par ๐๐ acha lagega padne main.๐๐๐
Main phir padke unko troll karungi ( not your writing unki halat ko dekh troll karungi.๐๐๐)
Ps Make sure monami is super upset.๐๐๐