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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Haan, zaroor bolna. Main zyaada udhne lagungi warna. Pata chala ki yeh sochkar ki main achha likhti hoon, engineering chodh doon, phir pata chala main toh achha likhti hi nahi.
Me back to physics now.


Sorry for the headache, soul sister. ๐Ÿคฃ


Sure, sure, aaram se dena. Tumhaari requests mujhe likhni achhi lagti hain. (Agar tumhe meri writing achhi lagti hai toh...)


... Ek second, tum toh very good likhkar bahut baar chodti ho. ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ

Aab tum hi usko decipher karo ki mujha kya lagta hain.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Jab jab bohot acha lagta hain I really compliment jaisa ki aaj.

Aaj mujha sach main bohot acha laga .๐Ÿคฉ

It had depth , it seemed like kaafi mehnaat dali hain tumne.โค๏ธโค๏ธ

Usually you have so many requests but still tum sab ka liya likhti hon iss liya I write very good.

It's not that your writing is bad but iss liya cause meri books main taste kaafi ajeeb hain.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Which is very against my basic nature.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Ab aate hain request pai .

I know you have already mixed it in this one but I think a detailed one on this would really make sense as monami ko aisa lagna ki she has cheated karan would make sense after emphasizing on the lines kisi teesra ko hamare beech nahi aane dungi.

Could you if you don't have many requests write one where monami is really depressed and locks herself up in her room thinking she has cheated on karan going close to balli .๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Toh everyone is worried about her state , karan usko bohot samjhne ki koshish karta hain par she still feels bad.

Toh karan sabke samne ussa manane ka liya belated valentine's party rakhta hain.( Time line ko maro goli , I know it's too late but still๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚).

Where he rehearses a speech aur usko sabke samne apne feelings express karta hain . No not for wedding don't go there but a forvever wala promise.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Sab shock ho jate hain yeh soch ka ki kya yeh karan hi hain.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Bichare sirji monami ka liya kya kya kar rahe hain.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Maina basic premise diya hain ab tum likho.๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ

Merako khudh nahi pata maina kya mang liya as yeh forever jaisi cheeza Merako zyada samaj nahi aati par ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ acha lagega padne main.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Main phir padke unko troll karungi ( not your writing unki halat ko dekh troll karungi.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚)

Ps Make sure monami is super upset.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Edited by Not_James_bond - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

Aab tum hi usko decipher karo ki mujha kya lagta hain.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Jab jab bohot acha lagta hain I really compliment jaisa ki aaj.

Aaj mujha sach main bohot acha laga .๐Ÿคฉ

It had depth , it seemed like kaafi mehnaat dali hain tumne.โค๏ธโค๏ธ

Usually you have so many requests but still tum sab ka liya likhti hon iss liya I write very good.

It's not that your writing is bad but iss liya cause meri books main taste kaafi ajeeb hain.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Which is very against my basic nature.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Ab aate hain request pai .

I know you have already mixed it in this one but I think a detailed one on this would really make sense as monami ko aisa lagna ki she has cheated karan would make sense after emphasizing on the lines kisi teesra ko hamare beech nahi aane dungi.

Could you if you don't have many requests write one where monami is really depressed and locks herself up in her room thinking she has cheated on karan going close to balli .๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Toh everyone is worried about her state , karan usko bohot samjhne ki koshish karta hain par she still feels bad.

Toh karan sabke samne ussa manane ka liya belated valentine's party rakhta hain.( Time line ko maro goli , I know it's too late but still๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚).

Where he rehearses a speech aur usko sabke samne apne feelings express karta hain . No not for wedding don't go there but a forvever wala promise.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Sab shock ho jate hain yeh soch ka ki kya yeh karan hi hain.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Bichare sirji monami ka liya kya kya kar rahe hain.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Maina basic premise diya hain ab tum likho.๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ

Merako khudh nahi pata maina kya mang liya as yeh forever jaisi cheeza Merako zyada samaj nahi aati par ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ acha lagega padne main.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Main phir padke unko troll karungi ( not your writing unki halat ko dekh troll karungi.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚)

Ps Make sure monami is super upset.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Mujhe toh lagta hai ki tum bas aise hi keh deti ho ki tum honest ho aur tumhe mera likha hua kuchh pasand vasand nahi hai aur bas dil rakhne ke liye likh deti ho.
Honestly bol diya karo. Koi aur bhi jhooth bol raha hai mera dil rakhne ke liye? ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ


Iske liye maine itni bhi mehnat nahi daali. Jitni usually hoti hai, utni hi hai. Mujhe toh ab bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai ki sab ko pasand kaise aa raha hai?


Shraddha, yeh tum maang rahi ho? Sach mein badal gayi ho tum. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Hamshakal. Koi jaao aur asli waali Shraddha ko lekar aao. ๐Ÿ˜†

Main add kar deti hoon.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Mujhe toh lagta hai ki tum bas aise hi keh deti ho ki tum honest ho aur tumhe mera likha hua kuchh pasand vasand nahi hai aur bas dil rakhne ke liye likh deti ho.
Honestly bol diya karo. Koi aur bhi jhooth bol raha hai mera dil rakhne ke liye? ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ


Iske liye maine itni bhi mehnat nahi daali. Jitni usually hoti hai, utni hi hai. Mujhe toh ab bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai ki sab ko pasand kaise aa raha hai?


Shraddha, yeh tum maang rahi ho? Sach mein badal gayi ho tum. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Hamshakal. Koi jaao aur asli waali Shraddha ko lekar aao. ๐Ÿ˜†

Main add kar deti hoon.

Abbe yaar ur writing is awesome usma kami nahi hain.๐Ÿ˜‚

Problem mera taste main hain jo ajeeb hain.๐Ÿ˜‚

Ab Merako khoon kharaba dekh ka excitement hota hain jitna violent ho movie utna mujha acha lagta hain par uska matlab yeh toh nahi ki the notebook, Titanic are horrible movies.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚( Yes for me they are but waisa toh they are decent ) oh yaar samaj la yeh mera liya bohot zyada ho raha hain.๐Ÿ˜‚

tumhara dil rakhna ka liya nahi bolti main acha , woh vakai main acha hota hain ๐Ÿ˜‚ meri taste sa alag hota hain aur mujha itna pyar kia dat nahi hain toh woh thoda zyada ho jata hain.๐Ÿ˜‚

Yaar main nahi badal gayi kal hi manners pai lecture mila hain mom sai to be kind .๐Ÿ˜‚

Main nahi badli.๐Ÿ˜‚

Merako tera yeh story pad ka troll karna hain ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.

Likh da please.๐Ÿ˜‚

Dekh ab please bhi bola.

Likh da varna galiya khayega ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ ab yeh hui na purane shraddha wali baat.๐Ÿ˜‚

Edited by Not_James_bond - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

Abbe yaar ur writing is awesome usma kami nahi hain.๐Ÿ˜‚

Problem mera taste main hain jo ajeeb hain.๐Ÿ˜‚

Ab Merako khoon kharaba dekh ka excitement hota hain jitna violent ho movie utna mujha acha lagta hain par uska matlab yeh toh nahi ki the notebook, Titanic are horrible movies.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Nahi tumhara dil rakhna ka liya nahi bolti main acha , woh vakai main acha hota hain ๐Ÿ˜‚ meri taste sa alag hota hain aur mujha itna pyar kia dat nahi hain toh woh thoda zyada ho jata hain.๐Ÿ˜‚

Yaar main nahi badal gayi kal hi manners pai lecture mila hain mom sai to be kind .๐Ÿ˜‚

Main nahi badli.๐Ÿ˜‚

Merako tera yeh story pad ka troll karna hain ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.

Likh da please.๐Ÿ˜‚

Dekh ab please bhi bola.

Likh da varna galiya khayega ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ ab yeh hui na purane shraddha wali baat.๐Ÿ˜‚

Tum keh rahi ho toh maan rahi hoon... ๐Ÿ˜‚


Please!? Haaye. Lagta hai zyaada hi lamba lecture mil gaya tumhe.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Tum keh rahi ho toh maan rahi hoon... ๐Ÿ˜‚


Please!? Haaye. Lagta hai zyaada hi lamba lecture mil gaya tumhe.

Abbe yaar kya batao kya hua mera saath.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Ab tum batao main kaha galat thi , kal mera niece na don perks chocolate khaye usa aur ek chahiya tha toh Maina kaaha chup kuch nahi milega terako.

Toh rona ka natak karne laagi.

Utna main mummy aayi job sa toh mummy na usa rota hua dekha , usna pucha kya hua gattu ( mom calls her gattu )toh woh apne sar ko ishare karne laage to say ki Maina usa maara , toh mummy ko woh sach laga aur usna mujha chapait maari.

Maina kaaha abbe oh pagal aurat Maina usa kuch nahi kya woh natak kar rahi hain ๐Ÿ˜‚ bas Maina yeh kaha ki woh natak kar rahi hain toh mummy na joota bhi phekh ka maare .

Thank god didi beech main aa gayi warna meri maa Merako yamraj ka dwar hi poch ka mante.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Mummy meri niece Avni ko leka bohot possessive hain usa kisina daata bhi toh band baja deti hain.๐Ÿ˜‚

Didi was like chingi (that's my nickname) usna kuch nahi kiya toh mom na usa bhi daat diya yeh bolka ki yeh batameez ladki tum side maat lo warna tumha bhi chapait padegi. Isko kisi sa baat karne ki tameez nahi hain tum isko cover up maat karo.๐Ÿ˜ก


Sach kahu toh meri petit sundar mom ko dekh ka koi sochega nahi ki yeh itni viloent ho sakti hain.

Sabko lagta hain she's that pretty , sweet elegant woman par bas Merako paata hain woh kitni khadoos hain roz uss 10 mahina ka shaitan ka karan Merako chapaita marti hain.

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Posted: 3 years ago

What amazing write ups and stories you write

I eagerly wait for new updates. Especially the code . What thoughts and beautifully expressed every emotion.


When Bali gets caught by monami. I just feel like I am seeing the future story

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Posted: 3 years ago

Amazingggg, Awesomeee.. You should be on the writer's team... Eagerly waiting for more ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey eagerly waiting for the next OS

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Hey eagerly waiting for the next OS

Hey. Am glad you like my stories so much!!

But I am really busy with school and exams, so I can't promise when I'll be able to post. I'll try my best though!

Thank you!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Yaaaar the Cave ki baat is so amazingly written!

I so wish makers have stretched that part lil bit, i mean Monu has been lattu over him for so many days! Now it was his turn to be in that zone.


To-say-not-to-say and Monu getting all confused "What is happening with him???"

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