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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Thanks for understanding my pain...really poor me...

& again awesome update...

Well,first part had a little bit silliness...karvi were behaving like teenage lovebirds...but enjoyed their fight over those silly things...

Tai...this lady gabbar singh...
Kartiya should say"tai,mein tera khoon pe jaunga"...
Where is kartiya now...oh no...shrikant dead...survi never gonna forgive kartiya now...as shrikant was not only her dad but also mom,mentor...kartya won't be forgiven easily by her...though he didn't do anything...

Update was too good...
Precap-suspence...waiting for it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
omg ,kya update tha both part was awesome ,and now this suspense ,this is such a treat to read ur update .update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Sorry for short episode bt i m bizy with my uni work
Part 22
5 years leap
Kartik wakesup in the morning n smiles seeing around n wishes good morning n goes for jogging
After joging kartik got
ready for office in a way kartik stops for signal a boy comes with flowers
Boy : sahab g sahab g plz le lo apni biwi k liye
Kartik : meri shadi nai hui abhi angrly
Boy : acha apni girl friend k liye le lo ya jo b ho ap ki life mn ap ki dost
Then kartik smiles n buy it n put it into front seat then take out his voilet n saw survi's pic n kisses her pic n smiles n then again put it in his pocket n leaves
In office
kartik got angery on client n his mode is off n whole day pass kartik in angry mode comes back to home as he enter in his room his anger disappears n start smiling
Kartik : tmhn pata hai survi mera sara ghusa a k yehn khatam ho jata hai jese hi mn tmhn dekhta hn ...
In delhi
A boy is asking forgiveness from a lady in college
She is sitting on a bench
Boy : plz plz mujhe maff kar do mn yeh ghalti dobara nai karon ga plz janki
Janki : janki jb ek dafa ek s breakup kar leti hai na to sari zindgi use palat k nai dekhti
Holds him from collar
Janki : tm larkay log samajhtay ho k hamesha tm log larkion ko bunk kar saktay ho ...
Janki na tm jeson ko roz kapron ki tarha badlti hai n pushes him with force n he falls on ground
Boy runs behinds her
Boy : plz janki...ainda mn tmhare ilawa kisi r k sath nai jaon ga
Janki walks away
Janki : i dont care
In college everywhere this news is revolving that janki is single yet again
As she enter into hall every boy of college start perposing her
Janki : umm last month thare sath the na mn so is week chalo tmhare bare mn sochon ge...
Precape : someone inform kartik that he had office meeting in dehli



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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
yaar ekta kapoor ki tarah leap and janki ..interesting .mazaa aayga ab
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi_gupta

omg ,kya update tha both part was awesome ,and now this suspense ,this is such a treat to read ur update .update soon

Hehheeh thanks alot dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow...leap...well,actually leap gives the fresh feeling to the story line...so for me this seems interesting...

Now,I'm too much curious to know what actually happened to both karvi...
Why kartik refused the fact that he is married...
Janki...who is she...is she survi...looks very intriguing...
This girl is a pure heart breaker...
Amazing update...
Waiting for more to come...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 23:
Kartik got a call in office about urgent meeting in dehli n left for it
Here janvi playing with kittens n boy is staring at her janvi is disguise sp she slap him
Janki : tameez nai kia tujhe subha s ghuray ja rahahai mujhe
Boy : mn n kia kia ?
Janki : bataon kia kia u bast...
Here kartik arrive in dehli n janki felt something n runs from there
Kartik arrives in medical collge for his meeting with principle n want to become a trustee of the collge n he also felt some thing n turn here n there to saw bt all in vain then kartik heard name of janki from every boy n smiles
Kartik : janki nice name yeh aj kal har taraf janki hi kun sunai deta hai mujhe pata nai kahin yeh wo janki to nai jise mn ...
Here janki comes out from washroom n clean her face from towel her friend aliya comes
Aliya : hey janki kahan the tm
Janki : washroom mn r kahan
Aliya : r fone p kia kar rahi the washroom mn ??? Dont tell me tu phr s use...
Janki : shutup aliya he soo sweet mn kitni bakwas karti wo phr b itna sweetly n annoy hie baghairbat sunta meri ... He soo sweet
Aliya : what ever u r mad ... Collge mn roz ek naya boyfriend hota tera r itnay salon s is banday ka picha nai chora tu n
Janki smiles : hn kun k yeh buht nice hai
Then they leaves for class here kartik is about to leave n here some one calls janki he turns bt she left
Now kartik is back at home n msg someone n smiles
Kartik : tmhn pata hai survi tmhare bad mn is ki bataon p hansta hun lakin lakin jalous na hona plz tmhare jaga koi nai le sakta kun k ... Tm to meri zindgi ho na n smiles n sleep huging survi's pic then his room shows its decorated with survi's pic hanging everywhere
Next morning janki is playing basket ball with a boy n challenges him to make her lost so she will kiss him infront of whole college
Manav smriks
Manav : kiss to main le k rahon ga har hal mn
Janki : kiss my foot dekhtay hn aj tk janki ko koi hara nai paya
Match start
First she did goal n smiles at manav
Then manav plays n did goal
Again janvi n again manav did goal now both are on last score
They see each other n both smiles victarously at each other
Here kartik reached at home
N saw survi's photo n clean it with hands n start talking to survi's photo
Kartik : i m so sorry survi i m soo sorry mn tm s buht piyar karta hn sirf tm s hi piyar kia hamesha s r tm s hi karta raho ga hmesha ab nai hota tmhare bina guzara plz wapas a jao plz ek dafa awaz de k to dekho apnay kartik ko plz survi n cries
Then lata calls him for lunch kartik after eating lunch search papers bt doesn't find them then realize he forget papers at college so he left for the collage lata stops him bt he doesn't...
reaches college n went to office
Kartik : helo sir sorry main papers yahi bhool gaya tha
Principal : han Mr.kartik wo papers mere pass hn kahan rakh diye main na
N searches for papers kartik waits
Principal : ohh hn yeh lijeye yeh rahe papers
principle handover him papers
Kartik : thanks alot
Principal: ur welcome
Kartik : bye
Principal : ok bye
Kartik left the office
Here its last goal everyone is curious about who wins n manav plays n wins
Janki is shocked as its happens first time in the college she lost now there is no option to kiss manav first she refuse bt everyone forces her so with no choice she went close herw kartik is in corridor as she kissed him kartik saw n shocked kartik doent belives his eyes n follow janki
After kissed manav smriks n wi k at her n janki shys n startssmiling at him manav signals her n she node in yes
Janki went to locker room to meet manav manav comes n about to hugs her she put finger on his chest n doesn't allow to comes close her
Janki : zyada pass anay ki zarorat nai hai
Manav : kun ? Kiss to mil gai mujhe mere
Janki : cheetin ki tm n
Manav : kab kahan kase kisi ko pata hai kia kia mn n bolo na janki ab chup kun ho
Precape : manav perpose janki n invite her for date kartik listen wirh teary eyes






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Posted: 8 years ago
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what an update,dear...brilliant...

Loved the fact that in ur story survi is still studying as a medical student...didn't leave her n her father's dream...othetwise,in yvr survi is a multi-talented women"all in one"...at the beginning she was a nurse & a third year medical student...then when she got married she left her studies...this was truly pathetic...then she became a housewife...then a business women...n then a lawyer...n now again a housewife...loools...
Cvs totally ruined it all...
as every M. S. tries to complete their studies at any cost n never leaves it midway just like that...all this was pure bull shit...

well,i'm sure that Janki is none other than survi herself...but why she is doing all this?
wow,karvi felt each others presence...what!what!what!She kissed manav...this couldn't happen...this shouldn't happen...& nahiii !!! Kartik saw it...so many questions left unanswered from their past...hope u will give those answers soon...this is getting more n more interesting...really,i feel ur story is far better than yvr's...in yvr the show slowly slowly kept losing it's charm...
But in ur story u r increasing the charm day by day with ur amazing writing skills...too good...keep it up...loved it...
I'm sure"masterniji ka kartya bara chant hain,asehi nahi janedega"...well,i'm waiting as"handsome/chumbakram/angry bird kartik bhawra is gonna rock for sure"...
Precap looks heart wrenching...but she is not wrong here at all...loving it...
Am waiting for the next one...so,continue soon...
Edited by Aparikshita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aparikshita

what an update,dear...brilliant...

Loved the fact that in ur story survi is still studying as a medical student...didn't leave her n her father's dream...othetwise,in yvr survi is a multi-talented women"all in one"...at the beginning she was a nurse & a third year medical student...then when she got married she left her studies...this was truly pathetic...then she became a housewife...then a business women...n then a lawyer...n now again a housewife...loools...
Cvs totally ruined it all...
as every M. S. tries to complete their studies at any cost n never leaves it midway just like that...all this was pure bull shit...

well,i'm sure that Janki is none other than survi herself...but why she is doing all this?
wow,karvi felt each others presence...what!what!what!She kissed manav...this couldn't happen...this shouldn't happen...& nahiii !!! Kartik saw it...so many questions left unanswered from their past...hope u will give those answers soon...this is getting more n more interesting...really,i feel ur story is far better than yvr's...in yvr the show slowly slowly kept losing it's charm...
But in ur story u r increasing the charm day by day with ur amazing writing skills...too good...keep it up...loved it...
I'm sure"masterniji ka kartya bara chant hain,asehi nahi janedega"...well,i'm waiting as"handsome/chumbakram/angry bird kartik bhawra is gonna rock for sure"...
Precap looks heart wrenching...but she is not wrong here at all...loving it...
Am waiting for the next one...so,continue soon...

Awww thank u sooo much aperikshita u know ur lovely comments boast my energy 😉 yup i will post as soon as possible ... N sorry mn previous comment ka reply nai de pai bcz i have really hactik routein ... N advance sorry if i will not reply in future... N yup u get all ur answers slowly ... Lols wo kia hai na slow n steady wins the race 😃😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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tumhara update is i don't hav words to explain .abhi ankush ke quit karne ka pain tumhare update se hi thoda kam hua hai. u dont believe every time i check here only for ur ff update.and feel good to read ur update

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