Dialogues can be better !!

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riti4u

@riti4u

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 6 years ago

From past some episodes.. I am thinking that some of dialogues could have been better written as they were not getting impact that one would want the scene to have... Just a small example from yesterday's episode..when Shan is confessing to Puchki and he says ..He is indebted with Adopted tag .. Well isn't that only adopted tag ..he is doing for his brother for his own guilt too . I thought they cud have made it more relatable with what Shan was saying.. somehow I didn't feel shan' s vulnerability with his confession to puchki.. just the fact that he said those words..ki tum mujhe chod kar gayi toh main Marr jaunga..apart from these lines..I wish they had shown some of heart talks with his friend..

Hoping that makers atleast improve on that. .story ka toh jalebi going on ...

It's just a constructive feedback not criticism of the show..

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

It's been really longtime I haven't watch this show

So have no idea what happening neither I give a damn

I'm really disappointed with what happening in the show

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@Semeira

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

I agree dialogues could have been far better with Shaan drugged and Asmita in the bedroom.. that scene disapoint me a little coz of it..it was time to show some true heart talk some deep talk but we get nothing like that...shayad drug ka asar khatam ho raha tha 😆

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riti4u

@riti4u

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya
It's been really longtime I haven't watch this show
So have no idea what happening neither I give a damn
I'm really disappointed with what happening in the show

honestly last few episodes , i am also disappointed.. just giving few more episodes.. i might quit watching then for my own sanity..😆

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riti4u

@riti4u

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Semeira
I agree dialogues could have been far better with Shaan drugged and Asmita in the bedroom.. that scene disapoint me a little coz of it..it was time to show some true heart talk some deep talk but we get nothing like that...shayad drug ka asar khatam ho raha tha 😆

yeah it was such a good opportunity.. I thought some really touching dialogues would come...hmm its better not to expect from this show...😛