Bygones! A MishBir Story - Page 5

Abhir's concern and Mishti's pain is nicely written.... your writings have a nail biting end and a curious beginning too....

Thank you and eagerly waiting for the next chapter.....

this is so perfect...

mishti's turmoil explained very well...

abir's helplessness made me emotional...

kunal... he totally rocked...

karishma finally put her secret and shekar know it?

its a wonderful twist...

waiting for next

So Mr.Kapoor purposely brought them together?

I absolutely loved this chapter. You described mishti's past experience so beautifully. Poor girl had to go through so much without any fault of her own 💔

Loved this update too Shonali! It's so true - you can move on but you can never forget words and incidents that change you. It's difficult enough when people blame you for your mistakes, but to be blames for something others did is just awful. As usual, you nailed the emotions.

It was beautiful Shonali. Everyone’s emotions and thoughts written to perfection. I liked the background you gave to Mishti’s story, her journey into the Maheshwari house, with everything was lovely to read. So many things we didn’t get to see in the show, thank you for putting it into words 🤗

And also this was a nail-biting write-up as mentioned by everyone else! You always leave us on a cliff hanger and now we need the next one 😆

Abir’s struggle on how to approach her, Mishti lost in her thoughts- so lovely. Special shoutout to Kunal!!! He’s a sweet one

All the best for the next one!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: riya27

Aww... Thanks for letting me know about this FF.

You amaze the readers with your awesome writing which holds the "what's next? " factor till the end of the chapter.

Awaiting next chapter to know how the story unfolds.. Nail biting chapters with an realistic story line. 🥳

I became an fan of your writing.... ❤️

BTW.. How so I call you dear??

🤗

Heya Riya!!

Haha! I am glad you like my cliffhangers! <3 Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! <3

I am so glad to know you liked them.

You can either call me C or Shona. Whatever you like.

Originally posted by: ViSions

Ashkon ka andaaz hai ye, Bin bole sab kuch kehte hain,

Chupke se jab ye behte hain, Shor ghana kar dete hain,

Bin aahat un raahon par, Jab shuru safar ye karte hain,

Kadam ye aage na chalkar, Koi mod purana lete hain,

Dhul Purani Yaadon ki, Saath baha le chalte hain,

Ashkon ka andaaz hai ye, Bin Bole sab kuch kehte hain.

Hey!

Beautiful story, can't wait for more..❤️

OMG!! Wow!! What a shayari man!! I wish I could you be as good with shayari as you are!! You basically summarized this whole chapter in few words of your shayari! Thank you!!

Will definitely try and update when I can.

Originally posted by: Mii5

Abhir's concern and Mishti's pain is nicely written.... your writings have a nail biting end and a curious beginning too....

Thank you and eagerly waiting for the next chapter.....

Thank you so much for reading <3 I am so glad to know you liked it <3

Will definitely update when I can,

Originally posted by: ruhi19

this is so perfect...

mishti's turmoil explained very well...

abir's helplessness made me emotional...

kunal... he totally rocked...

karishma finally put her secret and shekar know it?

its a wonderful twist...

waiting for next

Hi Ruhi!

Thank you so much. I am very very glad to know you liked it. I know you are one of the few who know stuff from the parent show. So thank you!!

Haha!! Wait and watch for the next updates to know more. I am zippeedddddd