MishBir Drabble : You're Mine, Darling !(I am Yours : Part 2: Pg 7) - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow !’ What a story !! Soo hot !! Please continue !!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehavinaya

Wow !’ What a story !! Soo hot !! Please continue !!

Glad you liked it dear

Will update tomorrow 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

🔥Woahhhh.....its hot in here.

Vaishuuu👏 Pls update the other parts quickly😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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wow vaishu where were you why didnt you write more till now... yaar read both the stories... i love how mishtu is so bold in both.. lit yaar 👏👏☺️☺️

and the title so so perfect... first one mishti's daring words even though she was shaking inside.. and ketu wedding time the wall pinning parallel perfect... 🥳🥳

here what do i say... the whole abirs monologue about her n the bus top night wow now whenever i watch that episode this will be in my mind yaar.. vaishu what are you doing to us.. ☺️☺️🥳

The reliving of their whole journey through abir's pov wow so perfect and awesome... hope to see this in show too yaar.. this will be a treat... and finally abir using his license n mish giving a go ahead n the specs removal just mishbir thing... wow so hawt yet not overboard just perfect vaishu... keep going i love this so much yaar.. 👏👏☺️🥳

now i've a perfect image in mind while watching mishbir gordhana in show.. hayee hayee i love it.. ⭐️🤗

yaar vaishu now i want you to continue this soon before actual epi dear... pls pls 😳🤗❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Oh my God ! 👏👏👏

You killed it vaishu totally killed it...like...tu itni chupi rustum niklegi mujhe pata nahi tha re 😎😎👏🥳🥳

Your description about the bus scene .. then various types of mishti...cute jealous ...dil ki sun ne vali at the end my life mishti ... bang on 👏 The entire journey...abir ki zubaani...fantastic 😎

Abir doesn't remember which color belt that is 😆😆😆

Finally they are engaged 🥳

And that hawt encounter was damn ....bold sensuous and beautiful ☺️☺️

Pls continue behna .... cant wait to read 😃😎☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Ohh god vaishnavi u write.👍🏼 i opened this thread by chance and read few lines of ur story nd its amazing.👏. i wld bookmark this and read it after u post the last part.. i lovee readng ffs, wld srch for all ur stories now...😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
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So beautiful and hot this was. There is love underlying all that they do and such a welcome read with all the high voltage suspense going on in the show. Please continue to write, your writing of their journey especially was so beautiful 👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome first part. Please write again, with all the drama in the show, your story was a fresh change.

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This is super super super gooood...what was really missing in the show you have completed it. Plsssss post the next part .

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I am Yours (Part 2)

I can feel her aroused peaks from the blouse too, and the sound she's making is making me go mad with desire. How can I control seeing her not resisting at all? I pressed her breast hard and she moaned loudly.

Not waiting for a second, I just took her in my arms and started walking towards her bed. I don't know what I am going to do now, how far will I go, but I can't stop here, I just can't.

Keeping her on bed, making her lie down I started standing up, but she didn't allow me and pulled me on top of her. "Mishti" I whispered.

She wrapped her arms around my neck pulling me more closer, our breaths were fanning each other faces, nose were touching together, I was so lost in her eyes that I didn't noticed her attempt to swap position, I helped her by pulling her on top of me lying down myself on bed, now she was on top of me.

I moved one hand from her waist to her hair, all the way caressing her bare back, feeling her soft skin, she closed her eyes and I felt shiver running down her spine. Using my hand to remove hair pin from her hair, I opened her hairs. God she is looking beautiful.

Moving my hand in front I caressed her cheeks, cupping her cheeks I pulled her for a kiss again. I could never get tired of tasting them. She moaned in my mouth and I just deepened the kiss. Breaking the kiss to breath I still held her in same position. She started kissing me on forehead, cheeks, nose, chin, coming down to my neck, she started sucking it. I growled clearly losing control by her way of showing affection towards me. Oh god her lehenga rubbing my lower body is not helping at all. I grunted and again came on top of her making her lie down on bed.

Looking in her eyes I could see desire, desire for me but that also didn't help from hiding her love for me which is clearly visible in her eyes I kissed her forehead tenderly making silent promise to never hurt her and to always cherish what we have, what I have.

Her smile told me that she understood my silent promise to her. I captured her smiling lips, sucking her lower lips I started moving my hand on her bare waist, moving my fingers around her navel, making her arc and pressing her more into me. Breaking the kiss I move towards her neck, sucking her soft skin, tasting every inch of her.

She's moaning continuously encouraging me more. Sucking her collarbone I move towards her ears. Removing her ear ring I kissed her there, taking her ear lobe in my mouth I bite her there, she hissed, I again sucked there, moving my fingers from her waist towards he neck I tickled her making her giggle. Hearing her giggle I smiled and kissed her both cheeks. My Mishti. I went towards the other ear and did the same. Then moving down I kissed her cleavage, god that mole always attracts me. I started sucking her mole. She was moaning my name. I started pressing her breast with my palm, still sucking her. Moving downwards I looked at her blouse covered breast, raising my head looking in her eyes I asked and she blinked her eyes. Moving my head again downward I sucked her peak over her blouse, pressing her other breast, giving wet kissed on her twin peaks and simultaneously pressing them, I moved downward pressing wet kisses on her waist. Moving towards her navel I kissed her there. Licking the area I put my tongue in her navel making her jump in shock, calming her down by caressing her arms I started sucking her there playing with her navel.

She was roaming her hand in my hairs, pushing me towards her moaning my name continuously.

I was going to move downward but knock on the door disturbed us. Trying to coming out of this passionate moment I tried to concentrate on the voice coming from other side of the door. It was Kuhu, she was calling us.

"Kuhu we are coming in 10 minutes" I replied and heard her leaving. Turning back I looked at mishti, just looking at her I felt glad the Kuhu came because I wanted our first time to be more special which would not have been possible considering our threshold to control our feelings. Leaning forward I kissed her forehead, now she opened her eyes.

Seeing her looking at me like this I can surely say that she's recalling our passionate encounter considering her red cheeks and lowered eyes, I was right angry chorni, you can't even look at me knowing my desire for you.

She got down from the bed searching here and there for her dupatta probably not meeting my eyes. I shook my head at her smilingly, getting down from bed too. I went towards the door, grabbed her dupatta from floor went towards her. Her back was facing me. I wrapped her dupatta around her from back and hugged her wrapping my arms around her from back.

I whispered in her ears "Calm down mishti", and it had a positive effect on her. We stood like this for sometime calming each other. Then I again I whispered in her ears smilingly"Lagta hai aaj bhi mujhe hi tumhara shringaar karna padega". Noticing her smile shyly on my words from the mirror in front of us, I kissed her hair from one side. She turned around and hugged me tightly. I also secured her in my arms, caressing her hair with one hand.

Leaning downward I whispered in her ears again, "Don't be embarrassed or get shy darling, I am always yours", and felt her lips on my sherwaani where my heart resides.

END

Finally able to update, lappy se nahi ho raha tha phone se kiya and its finally done, hope you all liked it , plese like and comment and give your reviews means a lot, I will reply on the comments for both the part together Baad mein 🤗

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