MishBir Drabble : You're Mine, Darling !(I am Yours : Part 2: Pg 7) - Page 6

ohhh ok i need some time... uff kya hai yeh vaishu hats off to you for this subtle hawt amazing writing 👏👏👏👍🏼⭐️

our favorite bold mish ☺️ n the way both went with flow yet the love shining between them superb yaar.... and that "My mishti" aww so cute only them..

🤣🤣 the intruder kuhu chaa i'm reminded of kunals gordhana pull... like husband like wife 🤣🤣 omg after reading such an intense scene suddenly this came to mind for kuhu 🤣🤣 mood got shifted totally yaar...

but i accept what abir said their first time should be special... not with people roaming outside n any minute ready to interrupt..

and the reference to shringaar n him calming her down... so beautiful vaishu this is worth the wait all these days... 🤗👏👏🥳

vaishu we are getting photoshoot n earring scene maybe and tilak ceremony... can you pretty please write for earring scene 😳🤗❤️

Aaye haaye....🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥...awesome awesome.....my chuppi rustum, it was worth the wait 👏👏👏👏 Sensuous and hawt yaara ...keep it up

The best part was him calming her down after the hawt encounter That was so so so ajeeb rajvansh ☺️☺️ and of course the cherry on the cake was the way you ended with abir ready to do her shringaar...loved loved loved it ☺️

Well done vaishu...fantastic job 😎😎

Looking forward to see more ❤️

Ps: abir ka toh ff mein bhi naseeb khrab hai 🤣

Amazing !! Very nice !! Could totally picture it !! Keep writing

Originally posted by: Mii5

So🔥🔥🔥🔥

Thanku so much Yaar 🤗

Hope you'll enjoy next part too 🙈😁😊👍

Originally posted by: Mimzy

🔥Woahhhh.....its hot in here.

Vaishuuu👏 Pls update the other parts quickly😳

😆😉Thanku so much 🤗

Updated the next part, hope you'll like it

I totally loved the ending where Mishti is shy again . This is so typical of Mishti and you have brought it so well in the writing . Cannot wait for more OS from you as they go through the leap. Amazing 🤗👏

Originally posted by: LetThereBeLight

wow vaishu where were you why didnt you write more till now... yaar read both the stories... i love how mishtu is so bold in both.. lit yaar 👏👏☺️☺️

and the title so so perfect... first one mishti's daring words even though she was shaking inside.. and ketu wedding time the wall pinning parallel perfect... 🥳🥳

here what do i say... the whole abirs monologue about her n the bus top night wow now whenever i watch that episode this will be in my mind yaar.. vaishu what are you doing to us.. ☺️☺️🥳

The reliving of their whole journey through abir's pov wow so perfect and awesome... hope to see this in show too yaar.. this will be a treat... and finally abir using his license n mish giving a go ahead n the specs removal just mishbir thing... wow so hawt yet not overboard just perfect vaishu... keep going i love this so much yaar.. 👏👏☺️🥳

now i've a perfect image in mind while watching mishbir gordhana in show.. hayee hayee i love it.. ⭐️🤗

yaar vaishu now i want you to continue this soon before actual epi dear... pls pls 😳🤗❤️

Awww,thanku so much diyu 🤗

Glad you liked it that much

I really wanted more of that bus top scene, that's why wrote about it 🤗🤗🤗

Hope next mishbir gd mein sach much aisa Kuch mile 😉😉

Originally posted by: Onyourface

Oh my God ! 👏👏👏

You killed it vaishu totally killed it...like...tu itni chupi rustum niklegi mujhe pata nahi tha re 😎😎👏🥳🥳

Your description about the bus scene .. then various types of mishti...cute jealous ...dil ki sun ne vali at the end my life mishti ... bang on 👏 The entire journey...abir ki zubaani...fantastic 😎

Abir doesn't remember which color belt that is 😆😆😆

Finally they are engaged 🥳

And that hawt encounter was damn ....bold sensuous and beautiful ☺️☺️

Pls continue behna .... cant wait to read 😃😎☺️

Thanku so much Yaar Uru 🤗

Next update padke to prove Ho gaya hoga ki Kitni chupi rustam hu main 😉😂

Bus waala Mera favorite hai 🤗😊🤗😊

He always say the wrong color of belt, I remembered at time of typing so Wo bhi add Kar diya 😊

Originally posted by: piyasingh

Ohh god vaishnavi u write.👍🏼 i opened this thread by chance and read few lines of ur story nd its amazing.👏. i wld bookmark this and read it after u post the last part.. i lovee readng ffs, wld srch for all ur stories now...😃

Thanku so much Yaar 🤗🤗

Now you can read it as I updated last part

Waiting eagerly for your reviews

You can refer index visible in my signature 🤗

Originally posted by: Krpkab_superfan

So beautiful and hot this was. There is love underlying all that they do and such a welcome read with all the high voltage suspense going on in the show. Please continue to write, your writing of their journey especially was so beautiful 👏

Thanku so much Yaar 🤗🙈

MishBir Kuch bhi Kare they could never forget the way they love each other 🤗🤗

Glad you liked that part, bus and that part are my fav 🤗🤗