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This is after there personal space arguments though they have mend there ways and solve there fights and dadisa has refused to come under rohit pressure demand to marry them two days have passed to this things the poddar house and there people have not changed they keep on fighting mostly armaan listens and rohit shouts one thing has changed abhira stops involving in all this matters once she heard the argument and just close the door which made even dadisa and ruhi shocked what she is upto armaan felt very bad and was shocked himself but manisha has smile on her face thinking abhira plan working.

Flashback

At outhouse

Abhira lost in thoughts when manisha came and scared her from back

Manisha : yeh phaltu ka darna chod tu soch kya rahi hain

Abhira : mujhe nahi lagta ruhi rohit se pyaar karti hain

Manisha : yeh to mujhe bhi pata hain tu bol tu kya soch rahi hain

Abhira shocked thiking chal is ghar main koi to samajhdar hain main kya hi sochungi uske aane ke baad rohit armaan armaan aur main sirf jhgda hi kar rahe hain aapko pata hain who date spoil karne wala plan bhi ruhi ka tha usne sabko kuch aur hi bata

Manisha : to tumne bataya kyun nahi

Abhira : abhi main aapko samajhdar samaj rahi thi

Manisha : kya matlab main samajhdar nahi hoon

Abhira; chachi aapko lagta hain meri baat us ghar main koi manega bhi yaha tak armaan ko bhi yehi lagta hain ruhi move on kar gayi

Manisha : are who kuch zada hi bhola hain uska chod

Abhira : bhola acha sab hain chachi aur uski usi baat ka phayeda ruhi utha rahi hain main soch rahi thi jaise ruhi ne apni chal badli hain sabko yeh dekha rahi use armaan ki padi nahi sirf rohit se matlab hain aur sabko armaan ke against kar rahi hain main bhi kuch ulta karun ke sab confuse ho jaye khaskar woh ruhi use aisa lage ki who mujhe armaan se dur karne main kamyab ho rahi

Manisha : beta armaan ko kyun saza de rahi hain

Abhira: are chachi main sirf natak karungi waise bhi armaan ne mujhse kaha hain hi meri wajah se jhagde ho rahe hain main matters main involve na hoon to main wahi karti hoon armaan ko bhi shak nahi hoga phir

Manisha: armaan ne yeh kaha

Abhira : chachi pls who bahut pareshan hain ismain uski galti nahi hain

Manisha is very happy finally armaan is getting selfless love jo who bacha sach main deserve karta hain main bahut khush hoon tu usse kitna pyaar karti hain

Abhira ab emotional hona band kijiye aur mera plan suniye main ab se kisi bhi jhagde main involve nahi houngi jab armaan pochega tab usne jo kaha use hi use karungi aur pls aap ruhi par nazar rakhiye aur dekhiye who zada armaan ke kareeb aane ki koshish na kare aur kare to bhi aap use thik se handel kariye use humare plan ka pata nahi lagna chahiye aur drame main wazan badane ke liye main yeh bhi bol dungi main rent pe ghar dud rahi hoon taki armaan aur uski family ko mujhse break mil sake

Manisha : kya tum humhe chod ke jayegi

Abhira : chachi ruhi aise apni asliyat samne nahi layegi uske maan main kya hain use bahar lane ke liye humhe kuch bada karna hoga jaisa who chathi hain. Aap bilkul phikar mat kijiye humhe alag dadisa nahi kar payi to yeh ruhi kya karegi haan ek baar who beech main aayi thi lekin tab halat alag the armaan uske saath tha uski sunta tha lekin ab sab kuch alag hain to aap tention mat lo hum dodno milke us panauti ko bahar nikal ke hi phekenge .

At present ruhi was happy seeing abhira indiffrence but she was irritated with chachi when ever she sneak into armaan room or try to find out what he is doing everytime she is there and shouting at the top of her voice ruhiii so that everyone listen and armaan to realises ruhi is standing near his room door this has happen 3 times already in two days which make armaan also suspicious about ruhi and he told her to not interfere much with him and his life and keep his door close only .. he got suspicous after that medicine phiasco

After the fight armaan knocks abhira door of outhouse as he was also frustrated now with abhira behavour from last two days even though they are having breakfast lunch dinner together but she talks very less and only give answrere to questions which is asked by him not he is frustrated with her behavior abhira opens the door

Abhira : kya hua armaan darwaza peeth kyun rahe ho tumare out house ka door hain tut gaya to dadisa mujhe hi sunayegi

Armaan not interested in any fight any more just hug her tightly (abhira felt bad for what she is doing but its needed to be done ) abhira also hugs him

Armaan : tum mujhse gussa ho naraz ho chila lo thapad mar lo par aise mat raho

Abhira : breaking the hug and made him sit main naraz nahi hoon armaan main naraz kyun houngi

Armaan: to phir tum aise kyun behave kar rahi ho aaj jab jhada hua tum bahar bhi nahi aayi mere liye stand bhi nahi liya

Abhira : checking his head tumari tabiyet to thik hain abhi do din pehle tumne kaha tha main involve ho rahi hoon isilye itne jhagde ho rahe hain main tuamri family aur rohit ka bhala sochun lekin maan main tumhe to mujhse personal space tak chahiye thi kyun ki mera itna zada involment se sab galat ho raha tha isliye ab main apne kaam pe hi focus kar rahi hoon tumari family pe nahi aur tumare liye stand lena tumhe khud ko chahiye main hi hamesha loon aur buri banu kyun tumhe hi to kaha tha main dekh lunga mera aur koi aur tumare ghar pe stand leta nahi tumare liye yeh meri problem nahi hain

Armaan was stunned with the words abhira said he realised he was the only one who told her all this but hearing this from her again made him realise how abhira might have felt balming her for the fights which any case keeps on happening in his house she is involve or not involve is not the case

Armaan : abhira I am sorry maine pehle bhi kaha tha phirse I know tumhe who sab bahut bura laga hain

Abhira : mujhe bura nahi laga hain armaan tum sahi the meri wajah se daidsa rohit ko aur zada gussa aah jata hain aur baat aur badi ban jati hain uapr se tumhe mujhe supoort karne ka aur mujhe tumhe support karne ka ilzaam bhi lagta hain isliye maine bhi phaisla kiya hain ab main tumare family matters main aur involve nahi houngi dadisa waise bhi humari shadi ke liye manne wali hain nahi itni jaldi main soch rahi thi apne work pe focus karun

Armaan : aur main

Abhira: itne din tumare upar aur tumari family ke upar hi focus kiya kya hua armaan rishtey aur ulajh hi rahe hain

Armaan : tum mujhe chod ke jane ke barrein main to nahi soch rahi ho

Abhira : nahi armaan bikul nahi haan lekin

Armaan : lekin kya

Abhira : mujhe outhouse se shift hona hain taki tumhe aur tumari family ko mujhse break mil sake aur tum log soch sako ki humare rishtey ka future kya hoga main tumhe nahi chod rahi hoon armaan bas yeh out house chod rahi hoon

Armaan: nahi meri gharwalo ki wajah se mujhe kyun saza de rahi ho mujhe break nahi chahiye mujhe sirf tumara saath chahiye bas

Abhira : who tabhie hoga jab dadisa manegi aur unhone mana kar diya hain aur bhag ke shadi karne ka option humare pass nahi hain kyun ki tumari family tumare liye bahut important hain tum unke begair nahi reh paoge

Armaan : aur tumhe lagta hain main tumare begair reh lunga

Abhira : main bhi nahi reh sakti armaan lekin humhe yeh phaisla lena hoga aur apni zindagi main aage badna hoga

Armaan : no no no never main dadisa ko last baar baunga nahi mani to hum dodno ghar chod denge and he left

Abhira bang her head yeh mera pura plan chaupat karega aur isko bataya to saath dega nahi as he think ruhi is innocent so she called chahi to stop him …

Armaan on his way thinking maine apne hi pair main kuladi mari hain abhira se woh sab kehke mujhe isi abhira se pyaar tha jo mere liye stand leti thi meri bhai behno ke liye bhi dadisa se bhi jhagda kar leti thi aur maine hi use badalne ki koshsish ki agar shanti pasand hoti to ruhi choice hoti na achi bahu banne ke lye who to galat ko bhi sahi keh de main uski jin batton se pyaar karta tha maine usi pe sawal uthaye aur aaj who mujhse hi break chhathi hain nahi nahi nahi main apni life se abhira ko jane nahi de sakta kisi keemat par nahi never ever …..

Prerecap chachi stops armaan and abhira leaves , ruhi is excited , rohit finds ruhi behaviur suspicous

I don’t know I will continue this or not but haan kiya to max 5 -6 chapters


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Part 2

Armaan was going to dadisa room and ruhi was stalking her chahi came and stop him

Armaan : kya hain chahisa please abhi nahi abhi mujhe dadisa se baat karni hain

Chachi- mujhe kuch zarori baat karni hain tu pehle chal iske pehle ruhi could have followed them chachisa herslef called ruhi who was hiding behind pillar

Chachisa : kya hua ruhi beta yaha aisi kyun khadi ho

Ruhi : nahi chahisa main to bas yaha se guzar rahi thi

Chachisa: tum yaha rohit ke liye hi aayi hona jab dekho jaha armaan hota hain tum wahi se guzarti hoon kal maine tumhe outhouse main bhi dekha tha abhira se kuch baat karte beta rohit aur apni shadi pe focus karo jao rohit tumhe bula raha tha

Ruhi : jee chachi

Armaan thinking ruhi abhira ke pass gayi thi lekin usne to mujhe kuch bataya nahi kahi ruhi ne to kuch nahi kaha tabhie abhira chachi bringing him out of his thoughts.

Ruhi decided today not to follow them as chachi is hell bend after her so she sadly went to check on rohit

Chachi : beta abhira ko jane de yaha se

Armaan was shocked chachi aap bhi pehle maa dadisa ab aap bhi

Chachi : are main tere bhale ke liye bol rahi dekh abhira tujhe har baar aise koi blame karta hain to who nahi dekh sakti who kuch bolti to baat badti hain aur phir tu bhi ussi ko chup rehne ko bolta hain tum logon main bhi jhagda hota hain isse behtar to yeh hain tum log thode din dur raho

Armaan: aur agar who hamesha le liye gayi to

Chachi : who tujhe nahi chod rahi hain armaan who sirf outhouse se ja rahi hain aur tu dadisa ko kya bolega tumari shadi ke liye maan jaaye ya tum log ghar chod ke jaaoge. Last time kiya tha kya hua dadisa ki tabeyet kharab ho gayi aur zara ilzaam tum dono par hi aaya . is baar bhi kuch aisa chatha hain (she knew she has press the correct button he will now not go to dadisa abhira ke pass jayega to abhira dekh legi) so she left leaving armaan in his thoughts .

Armaan decided to talk tomm morning to abhira again as she is not in mood to listen today

Next morning

Breakfast was there plate set but abhira was not there he was searching for abhira while she came from main door

Abhira : nashta kar lo armaan maine kar liya hain

Armaan : mere begair

Abhira : addat dalni hain na akele karne ki ab se tum tumari family ke saath hi khana armaan main aaj se shift ho rahi hoon

Armaan: what standing from the chair aaj hi itni jaldi jagah kaise mili kaha jaa rahi ho following her to the room as she went inside

Abhira: actually papa ne madat ki maine unse kaha unhone mujhe apne friend ke ghar ka address diya hain waha who log payin guest dudh rahe hain aur starting ke month who log bina rent ke bhi maan gaye as papa recommended me smiling

Armaan thinking bas papa ki hi kami thi sab mera ghar todne pe hi tule hain but armaan being armaan didn’t allowing her to pack and throwing all the clothes here and there which she was keeping in the bag

Abhira got irritated

Abhira : armaan please stop irritating humari is barrein main kal baat ho chuki hain let me pack

Armaan : aur maine bhi kaha na tum kahi na jaa rahi ho matlab kahi nahi

Abhira : kyun

Armaan : mere liye pulling her close because I love you and you love me abhira please baat karte hain na we can sort this out aise ghar chod ke nahi jaate hain aur maine sirf space magi thi ek raat ke liye relationship se break nahi

Abhira : thik hain mujhe break chahiye

Armaan : mujhse

Abhira : nahi in jhagdo se roz roz ki insult se roz roz ke tano se tum khud socho last 5 day se humne ek bhi din shanti se bitaya hain pehle tumari family jhagda karti hain phir hum karte hain aur phir who ruhi abhira suddenly stopped

Armaan remebering about ruhi ruk kyun gayi ruhi ne kya kaha tumse aisa ki tum yaha se jane ki zid kar rahi ho

Abhira :Usne aisa kuch nahi kaha hain

Armaan: jhoot mat bol tum dekho idar kya hua hain batao na tum aisi kyun sab chod kar jana chahati hoon main tumare begair nahi reh paunga

Abhira : aisa tumhe lag raha hain armaan aur tum to aisi baat kar rahe ho jais main yeh shahar chod rahi hoon main udaipur main hi hoon kher mujhe late ho raha hain packing karne do

Armaan : nahi jab tak tum wajah nahi bataogi you are not going (holding her hand tight and near him)

Abhira : maine bata to diya main roz roz ke dramo se tang aah gayi hoon

Armaan : do din pehle tumne bola tha ki tum mujhe chod ke kahi nahi jaogi aur aaj tum

Abhira thinking yeh itni asani se nahi manega she hold his hands made him sit on the sofa realising the out house door is open sensing danger near by she close the door for safe side went inside the room and took him there and close the door

Armaan: yeh tum pechle do minute se poora ghar kyun gooma rahi hon mujhe koi baat nahi sunni tumari you are not going bas

Abhira: I am going you cant stop me tumare upar mera haq hain armaan lekin tum mujhe force nahi kar sakte aur please rather than fighting can we talk pls ….

Armaan: mujhe to baat hi karni thi fight to tum kar rahi ho mujhe chod ke jaa bhi rahi hoon

Abhira : to kya karun batao tumhe sach main lagta hain is ghar main meri jagah kabhi bhi ban payegi pehle dadisa aur ab to unki favorite bahu ruhi bhi aah gayi hain hamehsa comparison hoga hamesha blame game honge aur yeh sab aisi hi chalta rahega I need time to think mujhe aisi life chahiye bhi ya nahi

Armaan: iska matlab you are breaking up with me who bhi ruhi ki wajah you are so immature

Abhira: to thik hain isliye break up karlo I am immature I don’t fit in your house aur rahi ruhi ki baat to who to khud hi yeh chathi hain ki main yaha se chali jaoun usne yehi to kaha tha mujhse who us ghar ki bahu hain aur main koi nahi aur kabhie banugi bhi nahi

Armaan: tum uski baaton ko aisi dil pe le rahi hoon tum meri zindagi ho abhira

Abhira : tum decide karlo main immature hoon ya tumari zindagi hoon

Armaan : tum jaisi bhi ho I know tum meri zindagi ho aur tum meri ho aur mujhe tumse break up nahi karna rahi ruhi ki baat woh khud pareshan hain rohit aur uska jhagda hua use chot bhi lagi rohit ki wajah se

Abhira : r you real armaan tumhe sach main lagta hain rohit ruhi ke saath misbehave karega sach main tum aur tumara blind trust ruhi par

Armaan thinking nahi misbehave nahi galti se lag gayi

Ruhi ; aur aisa tumhe definitely ruhi ne kaha hoga

Armaan : haan aur maine dekha bhi tha dono jhagd rahe the

Abhira tumne use us par haath uthathe dekha

Armaan: thinking nahi and she came down when he was coming out and today also chachisa saying who hamehsa mere peche rehti hain

Abhira bringing her out of thoughts mujhe nahi pata tum kya soch rahe ho aur kya nahi lekin itna to samajh aah gaya hain ki ruhi koi to khel khel rahi hain jisse tumme aur rohit main duriya aah rahi hain aur jane se pehle mujhe tumhe kuch dekhana hain (she showed the restaurant manager given her the bill details where ruhi booked the table last minute giving extra money armaan was shocked seeing this ) abhi bhi waqt hai armaan apni akhen kholo aur dekhne ki koishish karo kaun kya kar raha hain shayad tumhe bhi samajh aah jaye mera ab yaha dum ghutne laga hain aur uska reason kya hain tumhe shayad samajh aah gaya hoga tumhe meri kasam armaan tum mujhe nahi rokoge please she kissed on her forehead main tumare saath hoon lekin ab yaha is outhouse main nahi reh sakti

Armaan was too shocked to react don’t know what to say his life is going away from him and fault is his only blindly trusting someone and allowing always her to come in between and always fighting with each other

Abhira thinking I am sorry armaan maine tumhe ruhi ka jitna sach batana tha bata diya ab tumhe yeh tumari family ko kaise batana hain aur kis tarah se yeh tum decide karoge agar ismain main beech aayi to ruhi aur naya game khelegi mujhe yaha se abhi jana hoga taki ruhi ko lage woh jeet rahi hain ab yeh tumhe decide karna hain tum is baat ko family ko kaise bataoge and she left

Dadisa got the news and was very happy dancing in joy ruhi also has small smile on her face when she saw rohit seeing that she change her expression but it was too late and armaan was heartbroken and lifeless which also rohit noticed vidhya wanted to talk to abhira but madhav stop her .

Armaan was too much engrossed with too many things happening around in the platio reslessly calling abhira but she was not picking calls

Ruhi came

Armaan: please yaha se jao abhi isi waqt warna tumara pati dekhega aur mujh par hi baras parega just leave

Ruhi : tum abhira ka gussa mujhpe kyun nikal rahe hon maine pehle bhi kaha tha who tumare layek hi nahi hain

Armaan ; ruhi just stop was about to slap rohit came

Rohit : yeh kya batamezi hain tum aise ruhi par haath nahi utha sakthe

Armaan : to apni biwi ko sambhalo na phir jab dekho mere room ke aage peche kyun ghumti rehti hain

Lisning the voices all came outside ruhi got scared this is going wrong way she tried to stop rohit

Rohit : pushed her away intentionaly ruhi tried to fall on armaan arms but at that moment itslef armaan shifted himslef back he was now just disgusted with her and ruhi fall hard on ground armaan was least interested rohit made her get up and ruhi was not at all happy

Dadisa: interfearing yeh sab kya ho raha hain armaan

Armaan : haan aapki hi kami thi aapki fav bahu se pocchiye mere peche kyun aayi yeh maine bulaya isse jab dekho

Ruhi: main to bas check karne aayi thi insaniyat ke naate

Armaan thnking aur kitna neche giregi to ab yeh insinayet mujhpe barsane ki zarurat nahi hain mujhe pata hain tum kaun ho aur kya ho and messaging that bill recept to there group wa …. maine aap sab logon ko kuch bheja hain please check that aur aienda se yeh aurat mere 10 feet bhi aas paas aayi to main is par restraning order le aaunga aur aaj se main out house main hoon jab tak yeh yaha hain mera is ghar main rehna mushkil hain . aap logo ko isse mauka dena hain dijiye jo karna hain kariye lekin mujhse aur abhira se ab yeh dur rahegi .

Dadisa: asking ruhi tumne khud us hotel main booking ki thi

Ruhi dadisa main chaithi thi dono bhai ek ho jaye isliye

Armaan : acha to jab pura ghar mujhpe aur abhira pe ilzam laga raha tha to kuch bola kyun nahi aur tum agar humhe milane ki koshish kar rahi thi to tumare aane ke baad hum dono har din jhadad kyun rahe hain abhira ne pehle hi warn kiya tha main hi befkuf than tumhe achi samajhta tha socha tum sach main rohit ke saath move on kar rahi ho tumne to pyaar dosti shadi sabka hi mazak bana ke rakh diya I am done this is my last warning abse main out house main rahunga aur waha kahi bhi ass pass dekhi to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga and he left

Vidhya and rohit were confused and shocked to see what all is hapenning all went ruhi was just sitting on the platio lifeless she didn’t understand what has just happened her every plan failed ….

Prerecap

Ruhi master plan

Dadisa slap armaan

Parnanu slap ruhi and drag her out from the OH

dadi shocked how he slap armaan

armaan : want to live only with abhira

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Amazing

Loved reading how armaan brought out the truth of ruhi

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Show wale kab samjhenge humein yeh sab dekhna hai sympathetic armaan nahi! 😭

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Loved this! Satisfaction of ruhi's truth coming out fulfilled!

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