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Team Abhira (Gen 4)

Posted: 3 months ago
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Armaan decided to leave poddar house and poddar firm after rohit and dadisa decide to do divide the property. Armaan was against that and he decided to leave with abhira leaving everything to rohit and others .

Ruhi plan failed he brainwashed rohit so that armaan fights for property and all family with abhira go against him and she support him but what happened ruhi didn't expected

Rohit ab kya soch rahi ho ruhi tum jo chathi thi wahi hua

Ruhi tum befkoof pehle bhi the and bhi wahi ho maine jo bhi kiya armaan ko phir wapas lane ke liye kiya mere saath par abhira armaan ne mera poora plane bigad diya rahi tumari baat jis Bhai ne tumare liye apni khushiyan parivar property sab chod di tum uske hi nahi hue mere kya hoge ......


Rohit was shocked and got paralysis attack


Story will start after 6 mnths leap after this episode if people interested to know this version of story pls do comment


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part 2 page 2

part 3 page 2

part 4 page 3

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Posted: 3 months ago
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please update soon🥺🤞...and tag me when its donr...waiting 🥰
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Posted: 3 months ago
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Part 1

15 daysafter rohit come back

Rohit havegiven chance to ruhi because of her manipulation skills falshback

Rohit – tumab yaha kyun aayi ho mujhe tumari shakal bhi nahi dekhni

Ruhi dadisaaur maa chathe hain ki hum apne rishtey ko ek aur mauka de

Rohit –sach main tum mujhe mauka dena chathi ho ya mere bhai ke pass rehna chahithi ho

Ruhi sensingher plan getting failed started crying very badly tumhe nahi pata rohit merigalti nahi hain main to pyaar main andhi ho gayi thi mujhe armaan ne kaha thauski family uske liye sabse important hain main baad main aur yeh bhi kasam lithi ki main tumse shadi karun aur who kisi aur se pyaar ya shadi nahi karegalekin sab jhoot tha usne pyaar bhi kiya aur shadi bhi abhira se use abhira kealawa ab kuch nahi dekhta na yeh family na koi aur rohit please mujhe ek chancedo main koshish karungi tumara saath nibhane ki please

Rohit lovesher still so agreed to give chance

In those 15days armaan tried to make understand rohit everything but he was not in anymood because of ruhi dadisa phuphasa continuos brain washing . ruhi wanted everyoneagainst armaan even abhira then she will be with him and tell him that see allthe people whom you love and left me because of them are all against you exceptme but situation takes u turn

ARMAAN ANDRUHI

RUHIfinding armaan stressed bring her camamile tea

Armaan:main tumse kitni baar kahun please mujhse aur abhira se dur raho aur pareshanmat karo

Ruhi armaantumne jin logon ke liye mujhe choda who sab log to tumare khilaf hain tum akeleho par main ab bhi tumari dost banaene ke liye tayar hoon mere saath tumne jokiya uske baad bhi

Abhira agartum itni hi achi dost ho to rohit ke kaan kyun bhar rahi ho kun bol rahi thi useproperty main apna hissa lene ke liye

Armaan :yeh tum kya keh rahi ho shocking

Abhira :sach

Flashback

Rohit andruhi

Ruhi tumagar armaan se itni hi nafrat karte ho to apna hissa mango firm main aur property main aur use puri tarah sealag ho jao

Rohit yehtum kya keh rahi ho

Ruhi: dekhoarmaan bachut bada lawyer hain tum chahke bhi uske uski barabari nahi kar saktebettr hoga alag ho jao aisa mujhe lagta hain waise bhi who tumara saga bhaithode hi hain

At presentruhi got num her plan got failed she tried convincing armaan but he didn’t listenand got tight slap

Armaan merizindagi ki sabse badi galti thi tumse pyaar karna aur rohit se tumari shadikarwana he just hold abhira hand and left the place

After thathe wend straight to talk to rohit to explain again but he didn’t listen anythingand ask for property division ruhi again came and brainwashed telling heslapped me

Ruhi stillthinking she has chance property division armaan will fight and all will goagainst him even abhira then she can posses him finally but boom

All family memberswere called by armaan

Armaan:rohit ko is property main hissa chahiye but mujhe koi hissa nahi chahiye indino main mujhe yeh to samajh aah gaya hain ki main is ghar ka apna nahi hoonkabhie bhi paraya ho sakta hoon isliye main aaj yeh sab khatam hi karata hoon mainaur abhira yeh ghar sorry abhira to waise bhi is ghar ka hissa kabhie thi hinahi main yeh ghar chod kar jaa rha hoon hamesha hamesha ke liye nah mujheproperty main hissa chahiye na firm main mujhe kuch nahi chahiye

Madhav: yehtum kya keh rahe ho tu is ghar ke bete ho tum aise kaise ja sakte ho

Armaan:main sautela paraya baharwala sab hoon beta nahi

Madhav thikhain main bhi tumare saath chalunga

Armaan: nahimaa bhale hi mujhse pyaar na kare mainaap dono ko alag nahi dekh sakta

Vidhya wasconfused she wanted to stop but seeing rohit and dadisa face she stops

Krish triedto stop but scolded by kajol so he went back others were too young to sayanything

Outhouse

Abhira :tumne ache se socha hain na armaan kya is waqt yaha se jana sahi hoga jab humhepata hain ruhi kya kar rahi hain

Armaan :packing her stuffs mujhe jitna samjhana tha samjha liya rohit kuch sunne kotayar hi nahi hain aur yeh kabhie apna kabhie paraya sunte sunte main thak gayahoon pls abhira ab aur nahi maine papa aur krish ko ruhi ke baarein main batayahain who log dekh lenge

Abhira makinghim face her as he was hiding the tears : armaan tum reh paaoge in sab ke bina

Armaan :tumare khadoos maan ki family tum ho aur koi nahi aur tumari family sirf mainhugging her tighly and crying .

After anhour when they got sorted chorus gang came to meet them with madhav and Manishachachi they bid good bye to them and flew to mumbai new place new life

After somedayswhen ruhi could not hold her frustration broke everything in the room abhira nemeri zindagi barabad kardi rohit lisning came

Rohit ab kya soch rahi ho ruhi tum jo chathi thi wahi hua

Ruhitum befkoof pehle bhi the and bhi wahi ho maine jo bhi kiya armaan ko phirwapas lane ke liye kiya mere saath par abhira armaan ne mera poora plane bigaddiya rahi tumari baat jis Bhai ne tumare liye apni khushiyan parivar propertysab chod diya tum uske hi nahi hue mere kya hoge ......

Rohit was too shocked to register this and fainted doctor came and check hegot paralysis attack

Prerecap

6 mnths ahead

Sanjay was owner of Poddar firm who was loosing cases ruhi took charge ofthe house and shown kaveri and Vidhya there places as property was in boththere names rohit and ruhi

Somewhere else

Khadoos maan chodo na yaar tumara yeh roz ka hain I have work

Armaan pulling her back mere alawa kya important kaam hain tumare pass

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Excited to read more

Great concept

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Enjoyed reading part 1.

Glad that armaan and abhira separated. I hope you plan to keep them separated and make them successful

Please write a piece on dadisa reaction to Ruhi manipulation and taking control over

Excited to read more

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Poddars aur Rohit ke sath yehi hona chahiye!!! I am so sick of them "sautelafying" Armaan every time he doesn't do what they want: they don't want a grandson/stepson/nephew/brother... they want a monkey who'll dance to their tunes and use his weakness to hurt him each time he doesn't perform as per their expectations.

Such toxic and disguting trashy ppl, exept Manisha/Kiara/Madhav and maybe Krish (I can't believe that they took all this time to build/strenghten the bond btw him & Abhimaan, only to have him again flip for the n. time).

And when this time P's come at Abhimaan's door, can we have the latter not immediately not melt like icecream during summer days? Let them and Rohit be held accountable for their actions and words against Armaan (who has been treated like an outsider all his life by them and shamed by KV as if he didn't belong in the family).

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Happy to read everyone comments will update on Fridays mostly.....


This FF concept is armaan will cutoff from everyone except abhira so no melting is there in this one ..... Everyone will get paid for there deeds....

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Updated first part hope you like it

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Loved it 🥰... How I wish show also go in ssimilar way...waiting for the next part 🤞🤞...
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Posted: 3 months ago
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Just read the part 1 it's awesome wish this comes true in the show but it is never gonna happen anyways will enjoy by reading ur FF

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