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Posted: 1 years ago
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Loved ruhi and matashree path

Amazing story 👏🏻👏🏻

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Loved the part 2

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Part 3





Hii guys,


If you had any kind of suggestions then you can suggest me in comment section and now without wasting anyone time let's continue the story.


So the Scene start in Lucknow's Resort.

Armaan came in his Room and take a bath to calm his unrestlessness because he was feeling really negative and he doesn't why he is feeling like this.


Armaan came out and saw his phone which hasn't any call or message from abhira as Abhira never forget to call him when he goes out of city for any case. If he feel really odd. And he goes to the balcony and saw a couple having fight over ice-cream. Seeing this Armaan remember something.


Flashback


Abhira's mood was off as she had a argument with dadi saa on food. So she had have her food and was trying to focus on studies but couldn't do because she can't bear hunger. So she drink a glass of water. Just then armaan entered in room with a tray of food.


Food👇



Armaan:-) (With care) Abhira let's have your food I know you hadn't have food since morning.


Abhira:-) (Angrily) No.... Did you forget what dadisaa said I got 3 hours late so I won't get food. So how can I eat this food which dadisaa made specially for her Mummy saa.


Armaan:-) (Lovingly) I know you won't eat the food which dadisaa made but this food is cooked by me with so much hardwork by using so many tricks as you know I am not so good in cooking still I cooked Palak paneer and Roti for you.


Abhira:-) (Angry) Still I won't going to eat this food.


Armaan:-) (Using his new trick) See! If you won't eat then even I won't eat.


Abhira:-) ( With concern)Arma.....


Abhira word died in her throat as armaan kept a morsel of food in her mouth and the sabzi just melt in her mouth. The food was so tasty that she forget her anger and take away the plate from armaan hurriedly start eating the food like a child.


Armaan just looking at her cute antic and was mesmerized by her simplicity.


Abhira almost finished the food then she remember that armaan hadn't have his food so she looked innocently looked toward armaan.


Armaan understand her look and told that there are more food in kitchen then abhira start eating again and armaan bring his plate and both have food while chit chatting. After finishing their abhira start looking toward him by making puppy eyes.


Armaan:-) (Suspiciously) Abhira Why are you like this toward me. Whenever you look like this toward me then Always I got scolding from someone. So just don't look like that toward me , this time I am not going to fulfill your any wish. So just don't do this.


Abhira:-)(Puppy eyes) Armaan you are so good. You are world's best friend, husband, brother, son and everything. So just fulfill just my small wish..... I just want to eat ice-cream.... please armaan ...please.... please..... please..... please.....


Armaan:-) (Sternly) NO.... Abhira you get cold if you eat ice creams in night so you won't going to get any.....


Abhira:-) (Start crying like child and shouting) You are really bad armaan ..... you can't even brought me a cup of ice cream.... I am not going to talk to you ......please armaan Only cup.... please ... please.... please....


Armaan -) (Shouting) OK just do this drama more... Get ready.... Drama queen...


Abhira get happy and came running and hugged armaan tightly.


Abhira:-) (Happily) Thank you .... Thank you so much.


After that both left in car and saw a kulfi stall and abhira asked armaan to stop the car and as soon as armaan stopped the car abhira runned toward the stall and ordered 2 Almond kulfi and Armaan came behind her and scolded her for running like this. Abhira take both kulfi and started eating them like a child . Armaan got shocked and say "Abhira tum do kulfi kyu kha rahi ho tumne kaha tha naa ki you will take just one and now you are eating two. This is called cheating."


Kulfi👇



Abhira:-) (Enjoying her kulfi ) Everything is fair in love and war. And kulfi is my love.


Armaan start snatching away the kulfi but abhira was let him do that and both start doing Tom and Jerry game. And suddenly abhira leg get slipped and armaan saved her and both have an eyelock. After 2 mins abhira came out of eyelock and start showing fake anger seeing her cute antics armaan give up and abhira start jumping in happiness and had 1 kulfi more. Even armaan ordered one pista kulfi for himself and enjoyed there kulfi.


But when they were returning abhira start sneezing badly and armaan looked toward Angrily and abhira smiles sheepishly. And then armaan take care of her whole night.


Armaan came out his imagination as soon as he remember that abhira didn't called him yet. He take his phone and called her but she didn't picked up. He felt something odd. He tries 4 times more but she didn't picked up his call and armaan start getting bad ideas.


Then he called Rohit.


Scend shift to Rohit's Room,

He was looking out of window lost when he hear the ring of his mobile phone and saw the caller ID and abruptly cleans his tear and take a long breathe.


Rohit:-) (Trying to act normal) Hii Bhai ... Did you reach your hotel...


Armaan:-) (Worried and in one go)Yes but tell me where is abhira and why she isn't picking up my calls.... how worried I am for her and she is showing so much carelessness...


Rohit:-) Timout bhai.... why are you getting so panick .... abhira... bhabhi is ok, she had gone to meet her friend as her friend is not well as soon as she came back I will ask her to call you... Acha I am doing some work I will talk to you later.


Rohit cut the call. Armaan feel that something is dangerously wrong in Udaipur and thought to complete his work as soon as possible. Armaan start doing his work keeping Abhira in his mind without resting....


On the other hand,

Rohit goes to kitchen and cooked Smileys, French fires and burger as when his mood is off he eat junk food and he cooked Smiley because seeing that may be abhira could smile. And unknowingly he cooked Vada Pav.


Food 👇






He put all the food in food trolley and goes towards Abhimaan's Room.


Rohit saw Abhira lost and say cutie pie....


Hearing this new name, Abhira turned and saw Rohit...


Rohit:-) (Smiling) Cutie pie...


Abhira:-) Rohit yeh kis naam se bula rahe ho mujhe .....


Rohit:-) Jab hum first time mile the toh tumhari shaadi ho chuki thi but now as I consider you as my little sis, so I thought to give you a name. So just tell me how is this new name.


Abhira:-) (Smilingly lightly and overwhelmed) Very nice. I never had any brother so I just don't know how does brother loves his sister but now as I got you as a brother then I am the lucky one to have you as my brother.


Rohit smiles back. Rohit saw the food trolley and started serving food to both of them. Then abhira saw vada pav and says vada pav but for whom you made this. Rohit saw vada pav and got shocked and goes into a flashback....


Ruhi was talking to her friend.


Ruhi:-) (Making cute faces) Yaar! I still miss those vada pav which got melt in mouth. You know what Still today I didn't forget the taste of it. I am having so much craving of it but my bad luck I couldn't have....


Ruhi didn't knew that some is hearing his talk and that person was Rohit....


Then after sometime he came back in the room and ruhi was in balcony. So he went there and called Ruhi.


Rohit:-) (excitedly) Ruhi I have something for you come with me.


Ruhi followed and Rohit asked her to open the Lid. Ruhi did the same and what she saw is unexpected.


Ruhi:-) (Happily) Wow! Vada Pav.... Rohit How did you bring them. You know what I was having so much craving of it.....


Rohit:-) (Happy that Ruhi was happy) I knew...


Ruhi started eating and feeded a piece in Rohit's mouth and then herself.


Ruhi:-) (lickering her fingers) It's yummy. From where did you brought them??


Charu:-) From Rohit's Kitchen Bhabhi...


Ruhi:-) (Confused) Means???


Charu:-) (Smiling) Bhabhi I think you must be having craving of vada pav, so bhaiya himself prepared it by youtube's help and even burnt his hand two times.


Ruhi looked at Rohit hand which was burnt. Ruhi got tears in her eyes.


Ruhi:-) (Tear eye) Rohit it was just my small craving, why did you do so much. Look how badly your hand got burnt.


Rohit:-) (Smiling) Even your smallest wish is very important for me....


Ruhi got more tears. Rohit asked her not to cry but then Ruhi did his first and didn't let him do any work for the whole day and take a very good care of him....


But his flashback ended with abhira voice...


Abhira:-) Rohit.... Rohit...


Rohit:-) Ye.. Yes cutie pie...


Abhira:-) What happened , What you were thinking... and for whom you made this vada pav....


Rohit:-) (With tears in his eyes) Actually I made them by mistake. Vada Pav are Ruhi's favourite and unknowingly I cooked it.


Abhira:-) (With tear ) You love Ruhi immensely. Then why are you leaving her.


Rohit:-) (With tears) Love Can't be forced. She never loved me, she always loved bhaiya and myself he sacrificed his love. That time I didn't knew the truth but now I knew the truth. So now I will give Ruhi his happiness, I will give bhaiya to her. Because her happiness is my happiness.


Abhira :-) (Teary eyed) Ruhi is going to lose a gem. No one can loved her like you do Rohit bhaiya....One day she will regret...


Rohit:-) (Teary eyed but still Smiling weakly) No Cutie pie... I can't keep her happy like Armaan bhai could because he is best....


Hearing this Abhira felt a pang of pain in her heart and Rohit could understand her situation.


Rohit:-) (Smilingly weakly) Leave all that see what I made for you specially Smiley...


Rohit picked one Smiley and feed Abhira.


Abhira:-) (Smiling little) Thank you Rohit bhaiya.... You know what I always craved for brother's love and today I got my brother.... Thank you so much for being here for me.....


Saying this abhira hugged Rohit and cried her heart out....


Rohit:-) (Tapping her head ) Shh don't cry.... And who thanks their big bro...And I don't like when my sister cry...


So he start doing tickling her and abhira laughed out loud....


Rohit:-) That's like my cutie pie...


Then both had their dinner...


But Rohit a small fridge in Abhira's Room


Fridge👇




Abhira looked toward the fridge and remember the day...


Flashback


Abhira was completing her project when armaan came in the room with a big box but abhira didn't noticed him...


Armaan:-) Abhira


Abhira:-) Armaan yeh kya hai itna bada box???


Armaan :-) Tumhare liye Hai... open it...


Abhira opened and say fridge ....


Armaan:-) Haa tum kaafi raat tak padhti ho aur tumhe phir mid night craving yaa bhook lagti hai isliye yeh fridge lekar aaya hu talking tumhe problem naa


Hearing it abhira got emotional that how much armaan think for her and she hugged and he gives her chocolate which she have like a small child....


But she came back to reality by Rohit voice ....


Rohit:-) Cutie pie what happened. Aur yeh fridge...


Abhira:-) (emotionally) armaan ne gift kiya tha


Rohit didn't said just then abhira phone ringed and it show Armaan's name...


Rohit:-) Abhira please baat karlo bhai Shyam se pareshaan the baat karlogi toh unhe accha feel hoga aur waha woh akele hai


Abhira nodded.


Abhira picked up the phone.


Armaan:-) (Worried) Abhira what carelessness is this? Why didn't you picked up my call. How much worried I was...


Abhira:-) (Weakly) Actually I have gone to meet my friend and my phone was on silent, that's why didn't picked up your phone.


Armaan:-) (Worried) What Happened.. You are looking weak...


Abhira:-) Actually I had some ice cream, So I am not feeling good...


Armaan:-) Are you sure... I am not feeling good.


Abhira:-) I am OK, I will call you later... my phone battery is about to dead....

Bye...


Abhira cut the call and cried .... and Rohit hugged her...


On the other hand,


Armaan was very bad vibes so he call his assistants to complete lucknow work as soon a possible.


Armaan POV


I am not getting good vibes at all... I have to go as soon as possible... Abhira I am coming back... You were sad that was evident in your voice... I am coming abhira....


Armaan POV ended.


That's it for today guys.


Let me know how is today update.


Do like it and comments.


Till the next update bye guys....

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Just want to know about Armaan and Roohi reaction now

Early waiting for next parth

Amazing story

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Love this!

Do write more!

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Part 4



Hii guys,


Sorry for updating late but I fell sick so sorry. Thank you so much everyone for showering so much appreciation. I will try to my best to give this story.


Without wasting anyone time, Let's continue the story.


Next Morning,


Ruhi was sleeping comfortable but her sleep disturb hearing someone voice....


Person:-) Ruhi how much will you sleep, See Today's Sunrise is so beautiful. New day bring new hopes....


Ruhi:-) (Sleepy) Yes....But give 5 mins more and I am having a beautiful dream.


Person:-) Aree.... Ruhi see how beautiful sunrise is looking...


Ruhi:-) (Opening her eyes little irritatingly) Please...


Her words died in her mouth and she smiled broadly. In front of her, Rohit was standing Smilingly.


Rohit:-) See.... I am waking you up from so long but you aren't ready to wake up.


Ruhi:-) (Smilingly) Now you are here so my morning become really good.... I wish my every morning will be like today...


Rohit:-) (Smiling) Beta but your every morning can't be like this, your B.Nanu won't be there with you naa...


Ruhi:-)(Shocked) B.Nanu....


She opened her eyes consciously and saw Manish...


Manish:-) (Little suprised) Yes... Me... Whom you were expecting....


Ruhi:-) (Stammering) None nanu.... See how much I got late.... I will go and freshen up...


She left....


In bathroom,


Looking in mirror,

You are daydreaming Ruhi you have fallen so hard in love with Rohit... You should confess your love soon otherwise you will become mad.....


She blushes thinking about Rohit....


In Lucknow,


Armaan Completed almost his work.


Armaan to his assistants (Naman)


Armaan:-) (Very fastly) See I almost completed my work, So I am going to udaipur back and whatever work is left, you must complete it and comeback after that...


Naman:-) OK Sir but Can.... Can I ... Can I ask you something Sir...


Armaan:-) (Little Rude) Speak up fast...


Naman:-) Sir I never saw you working so aggressively in court.... I mean you didn't give chance to opposite Advocate to speak up...


Armaan think of abhira and his negative feelings...


Armaan:-) Actually I was not well that's why... Now I am leaving...


Armaan left from there.


Armaan's POV


Abhira I don't know what happened to you but I am coming back to you.. I am feeling so restless that I can't describe... J will find peace only when I will see you smiling.... Your Armaan is coming back to you...

Armaan's POV ended


Scene shift to Poddar house,


Abhira was packing his bag when she saw Armaan Photo frame, she pick it up and say to his pic,


You know what Armaan when I first met you I had a very bad impression and after sometime I used to get irritated by seeing you but when you bring me here and fought with your family for me, I saw a very different side of you. You always stood by my side, always tried to make me happy, fought with dadisa for my admission. Your this side made me feel like I have a family and you become special for me after my mumma. You know what After mumma, you are the one for whom I could do anything. But Your happiness lies in Ruhi, so you will get Ruhi because you deserve all the happiness of world and you have done so much for me , So I can do this much for you. But I want to share something with you, I couldn't say this anymore infront of you , So I am saying it now.... I love you Armaan bit see how much Unlucky I am that I can't say it to you and I couldn't get the love of you... I wish even you had loved me... but No problem seeing you happy I will be happy...


Saying this tears started flowing from her eyes and she kissed armaan pic and kept his pic and in her bag and closed it....


Scene shift in Rohit's Room,


Rohit packed his bag and thought


Ruhi I fulfilled my promise, now you will get your happiness...


Just then his phone rang and the other person say your work is done..Rohit said thank you...

Just then servant hand over him a packet, he takes it and goes to Abhira's room and informed her. She nodded teary eyed.


In Goenka's house,


Ruhi came down Happily and goes to dinning table where swarna was serving breakfast when swarana looked at Ruhi and says "Ruhi you are looking so beautiful and this saree is looking so beautiful on you when did you purchased it....


Ruhi goes into flashback...


Ruhi was ready to go with Rohit to his friend wedding reception when suddenly she fell ill.


Rohit:-) (Worried) What happen Ruhi... you are looking so Pale...


Ruhi:-) (slowly) Nothing Rohit... I am just getting ready.


Ruhi start getting ready But she get dizzy and was about to fall when Rohit catched her and made her lie in bed...


Rohit:-) (Worried) Ruhi you should rest... We aren't going To Karan's reception..


Ruhi:-) (Trying to get up) No I a... I am OK... I will get ready soon...


Rohit:-) (Sternly and Worried) No... we aren't going anywhere... nothing is more important then your health... I will call my friend and informed them that we aren't going...


Rohit called Riddhi but mistakenly he video call her and she picked up....


Rohit:-) (As always happily) Riddi you are looking so beautiful...


Hearing it Ruhi felt Bad and angry...


Riddhi:-) Why won't I will look good... Did you forget this dress is given by you... I just love this dress.


Hearing it Ruhi felt to just killed Riddhi...


Rohit:-) (Proudly) After all who choose this dress... Rohit Poddar....


Like that they talk for 5 mins and after Rohit cut the call and turned to see a very angry ruhi..


Rohit:-) (Innocently) What Happened Ruhi....


Ruhi:-) (Angrily) Who is your wife Mr.Rohit Poddar.


Rohit:-) (Innocently) Obviously You Ruhi...


Ruhi:-) (Angrily) Then why did you gifted that Riddhi a dress.... Till today You hadn't gifted me a dress and I am your wife and I have the right on that dress not that of Riddhi.... I am feeling like to kill her and you as well.


Rohit:-) (grinning) Someone is jealous... hahaha...


Ruhi:-) (Angrily) Obviously I would... this is my right... I am your wife...


And Ruhi Angrily slept and when next morning she waked up she saw a beautiful saree with a note...


Saree👇





Note👇


I Have brought this dress for you a long time ago but never got time to give this to you but today I am giving this to you.. I hope you will like it.


Your and only your

Rohit..


Ruhi smiles.


Ruhi comes out of flashback when swarna shakedown her.


Swarna:-) Ruhi where are you lost...


Ruhi:-) (Smilingly) Nothing... B.Maa I am going home actually ai have some work there.


She left from there without waiting for their reply and goes to house and asked servent to decorate back garden for them...

In next two hours the garden was decorated


Garden 👇






Ruhi POV


I will tell you today Rohit How much I love you.... I will make this day special for use and I will ask you to marry me again....


Ruhi POV ENDED


She start going toward inside the house when she saw a car is coming and the person who came put of it..


Any guess



















He was Armaan...


Ruhi smiled toward him and start going inside and Saw Abhira and Rohit there....


Ruhi:-) (Smiling) Rohit... I was coming to you only..... I have suprise for you ....


Rohit:-) (Supressing his pain and smiling painfully)Even I have a suprise for you Ruhi .... I...


Abhira:-) (Shocked) Armaan...


Armaan:-) (Smiling and he came hurriedly and hugged abhira in a bine crushing hug) Abhira I missed you so much... So thought to give you a suprised ... Aren't you happy to see me here...


Armaan came out of the hug



Abhira:-) (Trying to hide her pain) No... It's just I didn't expected you to be here.But if you had come then I have a suprise for you....


Armaan :-) (Smiling) What is that....


Rohit and abhira give ruhi and armaan a small box wrapped



Armaan and Ruhi opened the box and tear brimmed in their eyes.... Ruhi felt like her world collapsed


Ruhi:-) (Looking at Rohit and tear coming out of eyes) Divorcee Papers.......


Armaan:-) (Teary eyed and bloody red eyes) Abhira yeh kya mazaak hai ....


Abhira:-)( Not looking toward armaan) Divorce Papers...


That's it for today guys....


I know this update is like what you have expected but I am not well today... So please forgive me but I will try to improve myself..And please give me your suggestion as well....


And thank you for all your support guys..


Till the next update bye guys.....

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Originally posted by: Ariyashivya

Just want to know about Armaan and Roohi reaction now

Early waiting for next parth

Amazing story


Thank you 😊

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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Love this!

Do write more!


Thank you 😊

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Take care of yourself.

Get well soon ☺️

Sad for Abhira and Rohit 😭😭

Want to know Ruhi and Armaan reaction on the surprise 🫢🫢

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