OS: Lal Ishq - Page 3

Amazing!! This is beautiful and hilarious all at the same time 😁. Absolutely loved it! I would also love if this was followed by a bedroom scene of Abhira where Abhi teases Akshara for her bossy attitude, then tells her how proud he is of her and then showers her with love, not like mature content but affectionate/light flirty romance. (Not saying I would mind some ahem ahem romance 😜) Is there any chance you can build up on this and continue?? Pretty please 🥺 😊

This was so good... I loved how Akshu handled the Birla elders, especially Harsh... thank you for tagging me and hope to read more from you.

I just loved it 😂it was too good 👌👌💖

Originally posted by: chremma

Wow wow loved it soo much🥰🥰i love it when akshu give it back to harsh🤣🤣

Itne pyr se smjhana, i would love to read more stories of a cute banter between harsh and akshu or of them bonding and abhi getting jelly🤣

Abhi jealous of Akshu Harsh bond?! 🤣 That would be fun to watch.

Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed 🤗

Originally posted by: Mehersudha

Beautiful story Satya. Writer and Doctor combo in you rocks always.

Never been called or thought of myself a writer before. You are the first. Thank you so very much Meher 🤗

Originally posted by: Monstuholic

That was such a lovely scene!

Loved it to bits!

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Akshara is definitly a meethi churi here.

I could actually visualise her standing up to Harsh. .

Absolutely loved this

Yes. It was easy for me to visualise Akshara and Senior Birlas banter too. Glad I could bring it out.

And thanks to Pooja for suggesting the topic

Originally posted by: SatyaVS

Yes. It was easy for me to visualise Akshara and Senior Birlas banter too. Glad I could bring it out.

And thanks to Pooja for suggesting the topic

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

OMG! This will surely happen on the show sooner than later.

Absolutely brilliant writing. Dialogues were bang on. Seeing Akshu in the recent episodes..I won't be surprised she stands up for Abhi Everytime and he won't have to open his mouth! Thanks for the tag!

And yes Neil is always the best!

Thank you.

That's why I didn't give many dialogues to Abhi in this. She can get angry with him and scold him but she is not going to let anyone else do it. I like that equation in a couple and Abhira bring it out beautifully.

Originally posted by: Imhaisha

Loved your OS....

I just loved....❤️❤️❤️❤️

Akshu concern for Abhi....

Giving idea to Harsh for PR....

I loved the way she talked making them understand it wasn’t wrong.... but what he did was right.... they way she roared i loved it....

And after stating her point....

How she got back in her calm....

Asking them tea....

🤣

I hope even in the show....

After shaadi she will give them a tough time.... and give brilliant ideas for the PR... 😅

I wasn't sure about my ability to bring in humour so double glad it came out ok.

Thank you so much