Abhira SS – Abhi na jao chod kar ........./ Epi 4 on pg 2 updated

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Hey Guys! This is my first attempt at an SS or an FF. Please don't be harsh on the criticism.😉


Abhira SS – Abhi na jao chod kar ki dil abhi bharanahi…..

This SS starts after the fire incident.

Akshara saves Abhi from the fire and is injured. Her hands are burnt and one of the supporting staff from the hospital finds her coming from inside, limping with soot on her face. The lady approaches Akshara asking her if she is fine. Seeing the burns on her hands, the nurse treats her with first aid and asks her to visit the hospital again after they reach Udaipur. Immediately after the first aid, Akshara starts looking for Abhi to check if he is alright even though the nurse assured her that everything was under control and there were no major casualties.

Akshara finds Abhi sitting with Arohi and Neil. She finally takes a breath finding him safe. As she approaches them, she hears the conversation of Abhi thanking Arohi for saving him.

Abhi – Thank you Dr. Arohi mujhe bachane keliye!

Neil – Aap kya bol rahe ho bhai! Iss ne aapko bachaya?

Abhi – Ha meine dekha use, wo yahi white coat pehenke mujhe bahar laa rahi thi! Waise Akshara kaha hai? Is she alright?

Arohi – (inner voice) Agar ise pata chala ki meine nahi balki Akshara ne ise bachaya toh yeh aur uski gun gaata rahe ga! Aur woh phirse apni chikni chupni baton se iske saamne mahaan ban jaayegi!

Arohi – Woh toh chali gayi!

Abhi gets shocked to hear from Arohi that she left.

Neil – Chali gayi ka kya matlab hai! Meine dekha use accident ke waqt woh bahar hi thi!

Arohi – Woh jab Abhimanyu andar gaya dekhne keliye toh use koyi call agaya toh woh chali gayi!

Learning that Akshara left him in that situation just like that, Abhi assures himself that Akshara doesn’t love him! She probably doesn't even care for him. He is not as important to her as she is to him. Even though his heart is denying everything his brain wants him to believe. Even Neil gets surprised that Akshara left just like that. Even though she didn’t confess that she loves Abhi, Neil has seen the care she has for him. She wouldn’t have arranged a birthday party for him canceling her plans. She wouldn’t have come to the meeting to testify! Something just doesn’t seem right.

Neil – Eh! Chpkali kuch bhi mat bol! Yahi kahi hogi.

Abhi – NEIL! Enough! Jise jab jaana hoga wo jaayenge! Abihume bhi nikalna chahiye!
Abhi gets up abruptly asking them to check if they have any injuries and pack after they get treated.

Listening to their conversation Akshara dejectedly leaves the place.

Akshara – Aaru ne jhoot kyu bola?

After the incident, everybody starts packing to leave the place and assures the locals and the organizing committee of the NGO that they would visit again.

Abhi and Neil start their bikes when Arohi approaches them.

Arohi – Dr. Abhimanyu! Aap log wapas jaa rahe toh mujhe bhi chod denge?

Neil – Kyu tumne phirse bus miss kardiya kya! Chipkali ki aankhe humesha kuch aur cheezon mein busy rehti hai toh bus kaha se dikhega!

Arohi – Tum apne kaam se kaam rakho chamgadar!

Abhi – It’s fine Dr. Arohi ek second!

Abhi calls Dr. Varun who is a resident at the hospital and asks her to join them on the allotted bus.

Abhi – Dr. Arohi aap inke saath bus mein chale jaayiye.Yeh sab bhi wapas jaa rahe hai.

Neil – Ha toh ab sorted. Let’s go bro. Bye Chipkali!

Arohi – Ha Ha Ha Bye…..Chamgadar kahike!

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Arohi reaches Goenka Mansion. As she steps inside, she finds everybody sitting in the hall worried.

Arohi – Bade papa!

Manish – Arohi! Kaha the tum log? Tum log humesha phone kyu nahi uthate? Phone koyi accessory hai kya?

Arohi – Sorry bade papa who waha pe ek incident hogaya tha toh hum log immediately wapas aagaye aur meri phone switch off hogayi. Mujhe phone charge karne ke liye bhi koyi provision nai mili.

Manish – Ha humne abhi news mein dekha! Pata hai kitna pareshan ho rahe the! Aur Akshara kaha hai?

Arohi – Mujhe kya pata?!

Swarna – Mujhe kya pata matlab? Woh bhi toh usi camp mein gayi thi! Tum nai mili usse?

Arohi – Mili thi but uske baad woh incident ho gaya aur mein hospital ki staff ke saath aagayi. Ab mujhe kya pata woh kaha hai? Waha nai dikhi toh mujhe laga woh bhi nikal gayi.

Kairav – Tum uske saath nai thi? Are tume kisise poochna chahiye tha na ki woh kaha hai! Uska phone bhi nai lag raha hai!

Arohi – Aap mujhse kyu pooch rahe hai! Mein koyi uski caretaker hu jo uski aage peeche ghoomti rahoongi. Mein waha pe kaam ke liye gayi thi, uski jaise timepass karne nai! Aur waise bhi Dr. Abhimanyu bhi injure ho gaye the us incident mein toh mein une attend kar rahi thi.

Manish - Woh wahan pe kya kar raha tha?

Arohi – Bade papa agar uneeke hospital ne host kiya haitoh woh toh honge na! Aap jaante hai mein unke team mein hu!

Kairav – Akshu ka phone nai lag raha hai abi bhi! Mein jaake poochta hu kayi who hospital toh nai gayi! Use kuch chot wot lagi aur woh bina bataye staff ke saath hospital gayi toh? Mein jaake check karta hu!

Vansh – Mein bhi chalta hu.

As Kairav and Vansh leave for the hospital, Swarna takes Arohi inside to freshen up. On the way Kairav receives a phone call.

Vansh – Kiska call hai Kairav?

Kairav – Mishti Maasi ka.

Vansh – toh utha na!

Kairav – Nai bhaiyya agar une pata chala ki Akshu naimil rahi hai. Une bohot tension hoga. Aap jaante hai who Akshu ko lekar kitne tensionmein aajati hai!

Vansh – Ha! Par kuch urgent hoga tabhi who baar baar call kar rahi hai. Utha le hum kuch na kuch bol ke sambhal lenge. Waise bhi une kaise pata chalega ki Akshu nai mil rahi!

Kairav – Ha woh bhi hai. Mai le leta hu call….. Hello!Ha massi!...........Kyaa?

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Toh yeh chota sa part tha. Let me know if you like it!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Glad everyone is hyperactive after seeing the precap xD and treating us to such great alternative scenarios 💜💜💜💜


Extremely excited to know what happens next :') pls update soon

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Beautiful.. I really wanted naksh, Keerti, Abir and Mishti to come in the show as a support system for Akshara.. Kahi Akshara Rajkot to nahi chali gayi? Par Nani Rajshri k paas?

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I think Akshu is with Mishti

Continue soon... Waiting for next update

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Loved it i really hope akshu is okk 😭 plz update soon☺️

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Pls continue its 👌👌💕

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Wow yaar… this was so good. Please continue.

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Superb....beautifully written..... Much needed .....please write soon..... Cant wait .....🤗

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seeing the precap we vl asusual get irritated only and abhi vl believe arohi more than akshu.. this story you plotted is an interesting one.. am waiting for it..

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Episode 2


Kairav receives the call of Mishti.

Kairav – Hello! Ha Maasi!

Mishti – Kairav Akshu ko kya hua?

Kairav – Kk...kkkya h..hua?

Mishti – Kairav kuch bohot bada hua hai kya?! Woh yaha aagayi woh bhi itni raat ko?!

Kairav – Kyaaa? Woh waha pe hai?!

Mishti – Matlab tum logon ko nahi pata tha ki woh yaha aa rahi hai? Aur kuch toh haatsa hua hai! Usne bola kisi camp mein jaa rahi hai, par jab woh yaha aayi thi uski haalat bohot kharab thi!

Kairav – Kya hua use?

Mishti – Uske dono haath jale hue hai!!

Kairav – Oh god! I was right, usko chot lagi hai. Actually maasi jis camp mein who gayi thi wahan pe aag lag gayi thi! Who theek toh hai na?

Mishti – Ha, Thank god, it’s been treated! Meine use khana khilake sula diya par neend mein kisi Abhi ka naam le rahi thi. Abhi kaun hai?

Kairav – Abhi? Jab bhi yeh hota hai kuch na kuch kaand zaroor hota hai!

Mishti – Matlab? Tum jaante ho is Abhi ko?

Kairav – Actually bohot kuch ho chuka hai maasi! (He narrates the entire happenings right from Akshu coming back home to the trip, from the proposal to the refusal.)

Mishti – Itna sab kuch ho gaya aur tum mein se kisi ne call karke batana zaroori nahi samjha? Mujhe akshu ko waapas bhejna hi nai chahiye tha! Kam se kam uski zindagi mein khushi aur shaanti toh thi! Meine use sirf tere liye waapas bheja. Tu jaanta hai mein kitni khilaaf thi us decision ke.

Kairav – Ha Maasi, jaanta hu. Jab hume pata chala ki rishta Arohi ke liye hai toh Akshu ne aap se kuch bhi kehne ke liye mana kardiya! Use pata tha aap immediately yaha aajaoge! Usne ka ha ki agar rishta uske liye nahi hai toh baat ka patangad bananeka koyi matlab nahi hai!

Mishti – Akshu apna dukh kisi se khud share nai karti hai Kairav! Hume hi use samajhna padta hai. Woh har kisi ko khush karna jaanti hai par apni Khushi woh kabhi aage nai rakhti. Bachpan mein bhi meri bohot koshish ke baad usne mere aur Abir ke saamne khulke baat ki! Mujhe lagta hai us camp mein kuch hua! Aur mujhe yeh bhi lag raha hai ki woh bhi us ladke se pyaar karti hai!

Kairav – Jaanta hu maasi lekin abi ke liye dono ka dooriyan zaroori hai! Une samajhna chaahiye ki pyaar ki maamlon mein jaldbaazi theek nai hoti! Isiliye meine use jaane ke liye kaha tha!

Mishti – Jaldbaazi ka pata nai lekin mein itna jaanti hu ki jab tak Arohi equation mein hai, tab tak Akshu apna muh kabhi nai kholegi. Tujhe kya, woh mujhe bhi kuch nai batane waali. Hum sab jaante hai ki baat agar arohi ki ho toh woh kuch bhi karegi! Lekin use bhi samjhna padega ki Arohi ki har zid maanne se un dono ke beech sab theek nai hojayega! This is not even a bloody give and take relation! Mujhe bado se koyi ummeed nai thi par tum bhi Kairav?! Tumne kaise keh diya use jaane keliye!

Kairav – Sorry maasi! Mujhe kuch samajh hi nai aaraha tha!

Mishti – Theeke yeh sab chodo. Daadi aur sab ko bata dena ki Akshu mere saath hai. Aur woh kuch din yahi rahe gi. Burns ke baare mein abi kuch mat batana. Kal mein use hospital le jaaungi agar kuch severe nai hai toh ab bataake une pareshaan karna is not right.

Kairav – Theek hai!

Once he disconnects the call, Vansh asks Kairav if everything is alright to which he replies positively. He also tells him that Akshu is in Rajkot and is going to stay there for a while. He calls Manish and informs him of Akshu’s whereabouts.

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Mishti slips into deep thoughts after her conversation with Kairav. A hand on her shoulder startles her awake.

Mishiti – Kuhu!

Kuhu – Kya hua Mishti? Kaha kho gayi?

Mishti – Akshu theek hai?

Kuhu – Ha so rahi hai! Meine soothing music laga diya ab woh subah tak araam se sone wali hai! Amish aur Kritin ne bhi khana khaliya. They were worried but meine une samjha diya ki hum subah baat karenge! Ab bata kis khayalon mein khoyi hai?

Mishti – Kya tujhe lagta hai ki Akshu aur Arohi ke beech kabhi kuch theek ho sakta hai? Hum bhi toh ek doosre se ladte the par humare beech sab kuch pehle jaisa ho gaya! Kya Arohi ki nafrat khatam ho jayegi ek din?

Kuhu – Yeh sab uske wajeh se hua na! Chodungi nai mein use!

(Kuhu gets up to go smash Arohi’s face, but Mishti stops her.😆)

Mishti – Oh meri WWE fighter tu rukh ja do minute. Shaanti se baith pehle. Tujhe meine kab bola ki Arohi ne kuch kiya!

Kuhu – Bolne ki zaroorat hi kya hai Mishti! Who bachpan se tamasha hi toh karti aarahi hai! Aur Akshu ko hurt karne ke alawa usne kiya hi kya hai! Humesha toh use blame karti rehti hai, chaahe uski galti ho ya na ho!

Mishti – Tu bhi to aisi hi thi!

Kuhu – I know and I’m sorry Mishti! Saari baton ke liye.

Mishti – Kuhu meine tujhe guilty feel karvane ke liye nai bol rahi hu! Mein bas yeh keh rahi hu ki agar tere aur mere beech sab theek ho sakta hai toh un logon ke beech kyu nai! Agar koyi Arohi ko samjhaye toh-

Kuhu – Toh kya? Kuch bhi nai hone wala! Na koyi use samjhane wala hai aur na hi woh samjhna chaahti hai! Mujhe un Goenka’s se koyi expectations nai hai! Agar woh log us haatse ke baad bhi chup hai jo 12 saal pehle hua tha toh mujhe nai lagta woh kabhi Arohi ko kuch bhi bolenge! Agar usi waqt Arohi ko rok liya hota toh yeh naubat hi nai aati! Tujhe yaad hai na kaise usne Akshu ko ndhakka marke ghar se nikaala tha?!

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