Lost and Found- An AbhiRa SS ||Update:Part 4, Pg 17|| 17/06 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Sonia.himk

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Thank you lovely!

Originally posted by: lturlapati

You are an amazing writersmiley27

Thank you so much!!

Originally posted by: esha143

Not just succeeded...you're Outstanding in portraying Abhi's inner turmoil seeing Akshara's state and his battle between his conscience and feelings...this part is simply marvelous 👏👏....will be eagerly waiting to read the next part....please update soon....

Thank you so much. @bold - I took a long while writing this aspect to get it perfect. I am sooo glad it had the desired effect. Ill try and update soon. Thanks! 💙

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

Heyy, thanks for the update, and the tag ❤️💜

Your emotions were on point. I think we're so used to watching Abhi feel so passionately about Akshu, that here also I could totally imagine his mental anguish. And how the poor boy prayed with all his might that it's not his Akshara..

Poor kid :( I feel so bad for Abhi... But somehow, you made up for all his pain as soon as Akshu woke up and looked for him :') called out his name only ... Just wanted him next to her .. Idc about Goenkas and Birlas atm, they just come in between and ruin stuff. Noone would care about Akshara's health, rather they'll fight over the fact that Akshara needs Abhi and what not.

But I know, that for her, he'll do whatever it takes. Rare..but treasured by everyone :')

Thanks for making our mornings bright 😊

Loved the update and already waiting for the next one 💜

Thank you soooooo much! Whatever you wrote, that was exactly what I was aiming at with this part, and your comment tells me I managed to pull it off!! Thank you for reading, and commenting.

You are so right - Goenkas and Birlas just ruin things.. 😁 that's why in this story, as per @UKGirl22's idea, Akshara wants nothing to do with them lot and when they try to get near her, she is going to run far away - right into Abhi's waiting arms ( I am so eager to write that part now) 😁 and your comment just gave me an idea, so thanks much!

Glad you are enjoying this SS.

Originally posted by: Khayali_pulao

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M gonna read it slowly to gasp it in. Right now in my son’s online class learning with him ABCD again.

Will come back soon. Thanks dear for tagging me

Awwww. ABCD ke liye online class.. baap re, I toh am glad schools are open here, both of them go to school, and I can lounge around in the forum without any guilt. Teehee.

Will wait for your review lovely.

Originally posted by: imkt

Wow very interesting concept

Hmm memory loss .. great .. it will be fun to see abhi-akshara married life moment though abhi has to pretend as her huaband.

Loved it and I can’t wait to read more

And m waiting for your comment which u reserved

Thank you for the tag darl

Thank you so much. I'll try and update soonish.

Now the kids are in school, toh I can go and read your SS now. Will go read now.

Thanks for reading and commenting here.

Originally posted by: UKGirl22

This is going soooo well. I’m loving it. And it’s exactly what I need to read given what’s been shown on TV. My imagination coming to life!!!!

Girl, thank you so much!! I am so glad I met your expectation and am able to do justice to your idea! Thank you! :)

PS - Are you from the UK?

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Yes you cansmiley31

I have exams in end of month sweetie... So I'm unable to write but have some incomplete ones..will try to complete if possible

Great, Zen it is then. 😁 AaH, exams, good luck and do well! Fictions can wait. 🤗

How much I loved this part…. Esp she calling him “Abhi” and the very thought of he planting a kiss gave me goose bumps😳.

I loved this. What a brilliant writer you are👏

The way you had brought out that inner voice vs the actual emotions was simply awesome. I visualised the turmoil that he went through all the way walking towards her room.
I can’t wait… thank you so much🤗

Such a beautiful chapter......

Also show us Abhi's understanding of Akshara's life before they met... It would be nice na

Originally posted by: Khayali_pulao

How much I loved this part…. Esp she calling him “Abhi” and the very thought of he planting a kiss gave me goose bumps😳.

I loved this. What a brilliant writer you are👏

The way you had brought out that inner voice vs the actual emotions was simply awesome. I visualised the turmoil that he went through all the way walking towards her room.
I can’t wait… thank you so much🤗

Thank you so much! 🤗🤗 I am go glad this part had the desired effect! I'll try to update soonish.

Thanks! :)

Originally posted by: maneetarhi

Such a beautiful chapter......

Also show us Abhi's understanding of Akshara's life before they met... It would be nice na

Thank you!! Yes, that's exactly the plan - right now in the show they don't know much about each other, I intend to correct that with this fic.

Thanks. Ill try to update soon. Keep reading and commenting.

Superb update

Waiting for next....👏

I got goosebumps and got teary eyed. I could see the scene play out beautifully. Heck, even Manish Goenka made it into my imagination.

Well done, Mridhu!!

Originally posted by: Maneetlover123

Superb update

Waiting for next....👏

Thank you. Ill try to update soon.

Originally posted by: Namita-M

I got goosebumps and got teary eyed. I could see the scene play out beautifully. Heck, even Manish Goenka made it into my imagination.

Well done, Mridhu!!

Namiiii🤗🤗🤗

Thank you thank you thank you!!

Very well written, thoroughly enjoyed both parts.. I was really curious to know how you'd play out Abhimanyu's emotions if he has to take up the role of her husband, the conflict of knowing she rejected him but now has forgotten and the lack of consent since she has lost her memory.. I think you brought that out beautifully in the last few lines . Looking forward to part 3...