pritus ff ~kismat connection - 2~ pt 30(last pt) pg 45 - Page 2

pr-but sir yeh meri file nhi ..

Hmmm hmmm

Nice part.. nk like ak work and I like the way priti drool over nk.. haha nakku 😃ak is also helping girl thats suprb😊 naman proposed ak and unwillingly ak accept it.. naksh meets in mandir
flashback scene is superb like naksh fight
waiting for next part to know more about naksh past do wrote soon

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Hmmm hmmm

u wrote that much part...

par kuch b reveal nahi kiya huh

ak accepted naman proposal omggg

Nk nd ak face off finallyyy...

waiting for more nd flashback for actually wat happened wats all dis suspense...
Do update soon
Mysterious girl huh

Nk is impresed with ak work wowww...

Bunny fever omg...

hmm hmm i know na ki suspense ryt time pe open karte h 😉 thabhi u waana read it more nd more na.
yupiee faceofff 😳 thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 😊 haa hogi na sab kuch saf saf 😳... ale bunny prem urs nd me also na 😆 i will do update soon next

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

Nice part.. nk like ak work and I like the way priti drool over nk.. haha nakku 😃ak is also helping girl thats suprb😊 naman proposed ak and unwillingly ak accept it.. naksh meets in mandir
flashback scene is superb like naksh fight
waiting for next part to know more about naksh past do wrote soon

aww u liked that scene priti ka rolll samaj aayega na 😳 haa dont worry it was needed for story line so naman ke proposal ko accept kiya 😛 haa ab flashback scene aayega i will try to put some gyd scenes..
thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it 😛...
i will do update soon next part

part-3
nk-uff start essi hain toh end kaisa hoga.. wer is my way.. hlooo he called to someone.. tujhe saram nhi aati main yaha aaya hu aur tu party karta phir raha wer is ur room bata.. mujhe tera colony mil hi nhi raha.. wer r u haan.. turant aa.. yeh koi.. dont know moll hain.. hmm.. come der.. he was waiting.. oo god bas ghar se toh nikal gya hu yeh bol ke ki mba karuga yaha bas atleast do sal cross ho jaye phir main khud kuch karuga bas mere Hitler tauji ko kuch sujhe nhi ki woh mujhe bole aaja business karle.. oo god. . someone knocked to door nd he sees to him. .
thank god mohit tu aaya toh sachi power also came..
mo-see i m so lucky for u kya kismat hain.. bol aa gya na yaha piche piche mere..
nk-hmm aa gya chal tera colony kaha h bata .
mo-sale tere liye party chod ke aaya hu dhopla... are yeh tere car ki light kaise tut gai.. both came out..
nk-shitt yeh us khatpat ka kam hain..
mo-who... ooo...
nk-dont be senty khatpat queen thi scooty gusa di aur mujhe mujhe chila rahi thi..
mo-aur nk g toh kisi ki sunne wale nhi.. hain..
nk-chal.. are wats this.. yeh toh koi ring hain.. par kiski..
mo-hmm ussi ki hain teri queen..
nk-shutup oki.. he took it on pocket.. hmm esse kisi ki chiz gumate toh nhi aayegi yaha kojegi nhi milegi tang ho jayegi mera badla pura yuhuu..
mo-wat ladaikhora.. .
nk-shut ur mouth oki.. than dey went in mohits room... hmm yeh teri room hain nice main reh lunga yahi. .
mo-aur woh kitchen subah food milega sam ko bhi rat ko sometimes meri party hoti hain so outside food bhi milta hain.. sun kal toh hly hain yaha pass main ek pool hain aur thodi aage mandir tujhe gumna ho toh chale jana oki.. but yeh mandir south Indians ki hai.. god r one for all.. tu herdrabad main hai so u will get so much telgue guy here.. mere frds bhi h kuch jo puri nhi but small bolte h hindi.. tu fun karega yaha.. main kal din main mom dad se milke aauga rat ko hum party pe chalege oki..
nk-hmm i can manage tqq.. meri habit hain bhi morning walk ki. .
next morning... nk wore t-shirt nd lower... he was going in walk. admiring to all way.. it was so beautiful greenery everywer.. white white water drops.. nd flower.. suddenly he sees to pool..
nk-waaw it is beautiful... kya scenes hain yaha.. janat hain yaha toh.. suddenly his eyes went on one girl.. she was stood on side pillow of pool.. nk sees her back..
nk-who is see wat she is saying. .
ooo goddd help me.. i mm vry vry sad.. really sad m.. meeru thana pranam kappadali(apko unko thik karna hoga).. many people suicide here but nenu thanani suicide chesokunda appa(maine usse suicide karne se bachaya)..
nk-wat kahi yeh marne toh nhi ja rahi oo god... he runned near of her..
its decided. .. main boli hu na toh puri karni padegi main is water main dubakiiyy lagawga..
really god i will do..
nk-pani main dubki means no way.. heyyy.. she heard nks voice..
ak-who coming... she was about to turn than nk held her stomach. . she was in chudidar nd kurti.. hey bewkuf girl marna kyo chahti ho haa.. der face off from each.. nam kya hain haa.. saram karo kuch tum jaisi ladkiyo ki wajah se india taraki nhi kar raha thodi si problem hui nhi ki suicide commet kar liya.. kya problem hain fail hui ho shadi nhi ho rahi.. wat haa... she was seeing to nk from anger..
ak-who r u main kuch karu ya na.. tumne mujhe boli kyo haa.. meri man maru ya maru.. if u dont know anything dont give speech to me it is my life.. i better know how to live it oki.. just shut ur mouth..
nk-waah ek toh jan bachya txx bolne ki wajah mujhe attitude dikha rahi..
ak-yes i have so much.. maine nhi boli na ki meri side aao.. mujhe touch karo.. i dont like someone touched me oki.. show her finger.. akshra is my name.. remember that.. nd yes i was not committed suicide.. just stay away from me.. she turned
nd her duppata flowing on nks face..
nk-kamal hain yeh ladki bhi kal wali bhi essi hi thi pata nhi yaha sari ladki itni ladaiwali kyo hain.. uff... help bhi nhi karuga kisi ki.. than someone was shouting for help. he was on scooty suddenly he falls on mud..
nk-yuhuuu.. laugh... he made face.. enjoy ittt... went in his way...
here ak went in one house but swlly swlly.. with no voice. ..
aa gai meri setan... put hand on ak...
ak-sshh pakdu gai..
haa pakda pakda gai.. teri dadi hu... wish mang aai...
ak-yup... dadi maine us stupid girl ko boli thi ki us boy ko milni nhi hain but usne suicide ki howz she now..
da-fine aachi hai woh.. meri poti hai par bat nhi sunti tu meri kuch nhi phir bhi itni pass hain.. meri bachi..
ak-now i m biggg one.. u know that day mandir pe wen u was crying because u lost ur bahu nd son.. i felt really bad jab apko maine apni shoulder di i felt ki world main pain hai itni pain ki koi bhi isse dur nhi karti.. i was 14 years old apki poti bhi..
da-haa beta jab se tu roj aati hai koi dikkat ho toh help karti hain meri poti ko bachaya beta tujhe har khushi mile.
ak-dont to worry na u better know how i enjoyed my life vry much.. m happy.. surrounding.. mujhe meri life bhut pasand hain because meri joan hoti h woh i can do bina kisi ke.. think nd had tears..
da-na beta na aansuu nhi apke papa hain na woh kehte h read karo toh pado..
ak-no way agar woh kahege ki main doctor banu toh kyo bannu main no.. mera jo man hoga banugi aur karugi main.. if he has no care for me y should i have..
bachapan se ek bachi ne sirf maa baap ko ladai karte dekha baap ne marzi thopi mere sare frds chudwa diye mera school jabardasti chod diya aur to aur seher bhi.. mujhe kheer pasand hain toh main halwa khau.. movie pasand h nhi dekhu chup rahu kyo.. meri life meri marzi hogi if he is chiidi than i m vry much than him.
da-chiddi nhi ziddi..
ak-wahii.. na.. haww dadi mera results aane wali hai today if i got passed than mba. . meri mannat. .
da-waah tu toh normal ho gai..
ak-tut jaugi toh sad rahugi khush pal ki khushi toh bannati hain na..
da-haa beti meri sikh yad hain tujhe.
ak-tqqq... aati hu oki... but but mine halwa wer is.. give me na.. plzzz..
she was having. .
here nk was got ready..
nk-m getting bored yr.. wat should i will do.. now.. hmm pass main mandir hain jau kya.. jata hu..
haa gud idea..
he went in mandir..
more part coming soon...

nk-hmm nice mandir... gud..
one men-lelo na prasad chadaoge toh fal milega..
nk-wat fruit milega laugh.. yakin hain than do mujhe main bhi itnii lambi list h boluga but puri sure ho na..
men-g g man main visvas ho toh sayad mil bhi jaye..
nk, took it nd went on mandir.. folded his hand..
nk-god plz meri life meri hain i dont know ki meri life main koi bhi insan khud ki marzi chalaye.. i cant changed to me for anyone. .. god god god says someone from besides from nk.. he sees to her.. she was ak.. she has thali in her hand. eyes were closed. .
nk laughs so much..
nk-billi yaha bhi aa gai bhagwan ke kan pakane 🤣. .
ak-god u know meri kitni hard work ki maine one year study ki only in exam time but i waana passing mark.. plz i dont want marry mine abba will do marry plzz.. if i got passing mark main apko laddu dungi khane ko really woh bhi meri dadi ke hand ki really..
nk-haaa haa haa with loud voice... god esse nhi manege riswat se.. essi ladki jo attitude show kare aakhir woh hain toh aadmi hi na..
ak-hey opened her eyes.. ooh tum yaha bhi aa gye mera picha kar rahe ho haa.. main tumhe pitwa bhi sakti hu..
nk-laugh tum mujhe pitwa wat d luf.. tum last girl hogi na is world ki bhi tab bhi piche na aau miss.. khitpit billi..
ak-wat u said to me cat haa u dog..
nk-eee... with anger nd grabbed her hand. nk kisi ki gali nhi sunta jaha tak milne ki bat hain it was itifak oki.. mera picha karne ki kosish mat karo.. skipped to her.. enjoy with maska..
ak-shittt eee... she was in anger... but nk went... i hate uuu..
nk-i hate u tooo.. ...
ak-uff. ... meri result. ... she search on net in dadis house... god god god god god..
da-beta tu pass ho gai hain..
ak-really yuhuuu... wohhhuuhuuu... party dadi party.. kissed to her on cheeks.. i prayed daai plz make halwa na...
da-pagli ladki hamesha tu pass ho jati hai par tension.. aa tujhe halwa deti hu subah nhi diya na.. aa.. than she put near of god.. meri pagli poti ko khushi dena aur gussa kam karna iska ladai na kare jayada.. ek pyara sa rajkumar dena..
ak-wat rajkumar.. i m kid..
da-aacha g beti badi ho jati h pata hi nhi chalta dekhna ek din tu samjdar ho jayegi tab sochna ki tu badi ho gai.. ladai ek paheli lagegi .
ak-dadi... i love u.. but i dont want to do marry.. i waana stay with u..
da-aa meri god main sir rakh ke soja...
ak put her head on her lap...
ak-m south Indian u r north indian but i like ur festival.. sab ek jaisi hoti na.. aap meri pyari dadi ho..
da-tum mujheme apni maa ko khojti ho na..
ak-dadi i m going.. she stood..
da-beta itni nafrat..
ak-she is nothing for me... m going.. went in her house.. it was a big house.. her father was a great businessmen..
ak was on hull..
vis-ak.. wer was u..
ak-i went in clg.. for my results.. i passed in my exams..
vis-gud. . now go in ur room. . nd yes i waana say something..
ak-now start ho gai yeh.. she swlly swlly put rui on her ears..
hhaa na oki oki got it..
vis-gud.. take healthy food nd yes now two year u can go clg but after that ur promise..
ak was upset. .
ak-yes... i will.. now main ja.. can i go?
vis-yes u can... go... sleep soon...
ak went in her room.. sees that all light got switch off.. uff light band meri mission chalu call to someone..
here nk mohit got ready for party..
nk-party aachi hogi na.. because i m tired yr.. i want relaxing..
mo-yes aachi hogi aur u know ladkiya bhi hogi.. meri frds bhi h milwaunga main tujhe oki..
nk-yupiee yuhuu party chal.. dey went in bike.. reached in disco...
nk-wawww mere city main bhi h disco but u know mere tauji. . laugh.. i came for mastti let's go..
mo-hey meet my frd nk.. yeh mumbai se aaya hai aur main iske sath waha padta tha we was best frd.. now isne call ki maine yaha bula liya.. yup. nk he is sujal meet natasa.. wer is our chute chulbuli frd..
na-she is on way.. coming..
mo-yup dekh nk woh south Indian hai but u know hamne sabko hindi sikha di hai..
nk-yr kitni aachi party h na..
mo-haa hum yaha bhut masti karte hain games bhi kelte h..
nk-really..
mo-mohit say hloo to someone.. i was waiting.. wer was.. mohit hug to her.. nk turned nd sees..
nk meet her ak samrajhu. . my cute sweet sissy frd ak..
nk-not again not again.. ufff.. .
ak-tum.. uff.. oo god..
mo-tum dono jante ho ek dusare ko..
ak-nhi.. nhi janta.. nd m not interested. . mohit m going with my gang... ak was in short dress upto her thigh..
nk-yeh isse din main dekha suit main now yeh short dress party oo god todays girl..
mo-kyo tu party kar sakta hain woh nhi kar sakti.. dont be so stupid oki..
aa chal..
nk-he was laughing on bear table..
mo-hmm toh yeh panga hain tum dono ka.. she is so sweet girl u know..
nk-i don't think. . she is jehrili nagin.. oki.. khatpat billi..
ak-mohit.. sees to nk made face.. tere pass time nhi kya hamare liye.. come..
mo-coming chal nk..
nk-m taking it u go.. i cant handle to her... ak mohit wer talking than one girl came nd besides of nk..
she passed smile nk too..
ak also came..
ak-hey i want coke.. give me.. u know simaran kuch logo boring hote hai unhe kuch karna aati hi nhi expect jhagadi..
si-chill.. dey were going..
that girl-hii..
nk-hloo.. r u north indian..
gir-yup sima..
nk-u know hindi ryt.. warna kuch log to hindi ki band baja dete hain..
ak heard it she was shocked..
nk-u so preety u know kuch essi bhi girl hain jo yaha apke samne pani kam chai hain khabhi toh mandir jake dhong karte hain aur to aur rat ko disco party.. black dress pehen ke ekdom billi lagti hain.. she laughs... but u so pretty.. look at ur smile..
si-ur smile is also cute..
nk-txx.. aap to ladai janti hi nhi kya hoti hain.. agar koi apki help kare aap kya bolegi..
si-txx..
nk-but somone fight only.. pass bhi nhi ho sakte khud god se maska lagate hain.. laugh.. hey frds. .
si-frds... amm i m coming oki..
nk-laugh chutti kar di usski.. haha... ak came with biggg angry face..
ak-say directly to me oki.. dont think that u r so smart.. their is not other topic..
nk-no mera mouth kuch bhi bolu y u r involving so much...
ak-because yeh meri bat h main short dress pehnu long pehnu ya kuch bhi pehnu..
nk-u will always look billi..
ak-see dont try to be vry smart oki.. u is shirt main ekdom haa u r looking like monkey.. u know jisko koi work nhi hoti woh girl ko line marti hain nd sakal bad di god ne toh atlest bat toh sweet karni chahiye na..
nk-tumse toh aachi h.. thabhi bar bar milti ho aur nagin lagti h..
mo-hey cool down..
ak-mohit hato.. mrr yaha dekh ke bat karo..
nk-mujhe joker dekhne ka shok nhi..
ak-but i m seeing.. laugh uuu..
nk-oye..
mo-nk plzz tu stop ho ja..
nk-hat yeh war hai big war. .
mo-plz ak..
ak-yes i will won... hato mohit..
mo-aaajhhh..everyone sees to ak nk nd mohit..
ak-hey..
nk-billi..
mo-shutup oki... ab dono ne fight ki toh police report ho jayegi.. jail jaoge dono 😆 oki..
bhagwan aur kismat tum dono ko is liye mila rahi thaki tum dono gud frd bano..
nk-aacha tu god hain.. tu bolega hum karege woh..
mo-i m ur comman frd oki...
ak-frd ho malik nhi.. it is not possible oki... dey went in different way...???
so guyzzz plz read full part nd say something about ur view.. m waiting badly.. plz which dey r reading ff say atleast say nice work..
plz press like button.. sry for mistake. .
precap-ak got dare to kiss to nk.. but she didn't kiss but kiss to him..

next third part is on page 3...read it..

Hmmm...

Nice part.. naksh ki khitpit all time was superb.. like mandir scene and party scene 😆naksh dialouges are awesome
mohit's character is so cute precap is mindblowing 😃 do update next part soon