My first Naksh ff#Zindagi do pal ki # part14/44pg - Page 26

Waaw yr so cute part 😊 dreamland of naksh but too small haa ..firstly loved naksh convo jo juba pe nhi aa rahi but dil mai hai..
Ak is thinking about nk aww so cute scene 😛 ..both r confused ki dono ko bura laga hoga but essa hai nhi 😆 ..
I loved most in this part naksh r falling in love of both small si injury ak ka na aana nk ko tang kar raha .. 😳 ..pyar ho toh gya hai..
This rr 😲 pagalo wali ebtry mohit sach mai woh toh best hai naksh ki story mai ..my fav 😊 ..his jock superb 👏 ..
Plz give precap na ..jaldi se update next part cant wait ⭐️ ..
Ur star ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ nd half ..
Mehnat karo aur bhi jayada hope u will get five star in next part 😳

Nice part nidhi...Naksh r thinking about that night...&Ak is blushing haha😳something is going on in her mind..Both r feeling how to face each other ...Naksh returned to India&loved Naksh cute conv after landing..RR ki entry...Loved mo teasing to NK..let us see how d story unfolds after RR entry in Naksh life..Lagta hai Nk abhi se jealous horaha hai RR se😆Eagerly waiting Do update next part soon😊

Originally posted by: munna111

Nice part nidhi...Naksh r thinking about that night...&Ak is blushing haha😳something is going on in her mind..Both r feeling how to face each other ...Naksh returned to India&loved Naksh cute conv after landing..RR ki entry...Loved mo teasing to NK..let us see how d story unfolds after RR entry in Naksh life..Lagta hai Nk abhi se jealous horaha hai RR se😆Eagerly waiting Do update next part soon😊

Thnku fouzi for your precious comment . For me mohit boht important part hai nk ak ki story mai... Nk jealous hai yan nhi aage aage pta chlega and rr kya role play krta hai will see . I'll update soon

itwas such a cute part ..

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

Waaw yr so cute part 😊 dreamland of naksh but too small haa ..firstly loved naksh convo jo juba pe nhi aa rahi but dil mai hai..
Ak is thinking about nk aww so cute scene 😛 ..both r confused ki dono ko bura laga hoga but essa hai nhi 😆 ..
I loved most in this part naksh r falling in love of both small si injury ak ka na aana nk ko tang kar raha .. 😳 ..pyar ho toh gya hai..
This rr 😲 pagalo wali ebtry mohit sach mai woh toh best hai naksh ki story mai ..my fav 😊 ..his jock superb 👏 ..
Plz give precap na ..jaldi se update next part cant wait ⭐️ ..
Ur star ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ nd half ..
Mehnat karo aur bhi jayada hope u will get five star in next part 😳

Thnku so much ruchi for precious comment Mohit toh mera bhi fav hai nk k baad ... Pyaar toh hona hi tha Rr Friend hai ak ka woh toh ayega hi na 3.5 stars thnku .

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

itwas such a cute part ..

rr ka surprise nd nk ka care for ak...

hope both realise nd fall in love soon

do update soon

Thnkx for commenting pyaarcka ehsaas toh ho rha hai... but realization woh bhi hoga jldi hi . will update soon .

Nice and beautiful part.. naksh thinking about that night and feeling shame.. ak ka naitik ke bare me sochna and blush karna cute.. then rr ki pagalpanti.. ak ko chot lagna and nk ko dard hona nice.. mohit and nk scene is so cute.. liking naksh closeness.. hope they will share each other feeling soon.. waiting for next part do continue soon

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

Nice and beautiful part.. naksh thinking about that night and feeling shame.. ak ka naitik ke bare me sochna and blush karna cute.. then rr ki pagalpanti.. ak ko chot lagna and nk ko dard hona nice.. mohit and nk scene is so cute.. liking naksh closeness.. hope they will share each other feeling soon.. waiting for next part do continue soon

Thank you pragu for liking this feelings bhi share hongi bs wait and watch I'll update soon

Part 12
Nk: ak ko call krta hun ... What.. not reachable ?
His office phone rings...
Nk comes home his coat hanging over his hand on shoulder tie loose ... all exhausted ... He sits on sofa
G3: mera beta boht thak gya ajj
Nk: maa sari meetings back to back thi ...
G3: jaa aaram kr le thora
Nk: went to his room ... Looking at ak room but she wasn't there
Nk: call krun ... He picks his phone and hus phone rings he attend it
After dinner
Nk: ek bar dekh k aata hun
G3: kya dekhna hai munna
Nk: maa woh ak office nhi ayi ajj phone nhi uthaya toh socha ...
G3: mai smajti hun beta pr iss samay mat jaa boht der ho gyi hai .. Aur tu bhi kitna thaka hai kl subah baat kr lena .
Nxt day in office
Nk: ak tum theek ho
Ak: han mujhe kya hua
Nk: nhi mujhe lga tum kl office nhi ayi ajj bhi upset lg rhi ho
Ak: didn't say anything
Nk: koi baat ...
Manager knocks door and their conversation got interrupted
While returning ...
Ak was silently walking
Nk: ak kya baat hai kuch bologi bhi lil irritated tone
Ak: kya bataun ... Mai khud kuch nhi smajh paa rhi hun ( more irritated than him)... Dadi aur maa ne pta nhi kya kr rhi hai ...
Nk: mtlab ky...
Ak: Mera rishta pkka ho gya hai Kl mujhe ldka dekhne aaya tha shaadi k liye ( let out a deep breath)
Nk: holding her arm and turning her... Lekin tumne mana kr diya naa...??
Ak: mana toh tan krti na nk jb mujhse kuch pucha jta ... Khud hi ldka psand kr lia aur unki taraf se bhi haan ho gyi hai ...
Nk: what .. I mean are you kidding me ... Seriously ak yr tumlog 21 century mai hi rehte ho ... Nk see a corner of her eyes were wet .. he wipes her tears with his thumb
Nk: itni jldi kya hai unhe tumhe bhejne ki
Ak: bdi bdi baatein krna sabse aasan kam hai nk
Nk: isme maine kya kia ab...
Ak : ghr aa gya mai chlti hun nk too come
Dev: aao bachon ...
Ak: maa yeh kis liye pura ghr sajay hai aapne
Nk: koi puja hai ky aunty
Dev: haan nk woh ak ka rishta pkka ho gya hai naa... Isiliye chhoti si puja hai ... Waise maine g3 ji ko kaha hai tumhe lekr aane ko ... Jldi ready hokr aao ..
Ak: maa mujhe kuch btana zruri hai iss ghr mai
Dadi: tere room mai jo saree rkhi hai jaa pehn le , kunal aur uske ghr wale bhi aane wale hai
Nk: kunal... kon
Ak: mera hone wala pati ... Kunal gupta ... Khush ab jao face red in anger she literary push nk out of door
Dadi: ldke walon k samne ache se rehna aise mat pesh aana woh tera hone wala sasuraal hai ...
Ak: shouts from room ... Maa mai kuch aur pehn lun mujhae yeh saari ka jhanjat nhi sambhlta
Dadi: nhi bilkul bhi nhi
Dev: tu chl mai madad krti hun teri
Finally ak was dressed up in a green and golden color saree and side braid Nk and g3 reached to their house .
Nk was upstairs on a call ... While girls peep into ak room to take her downstairs as ldkewake arrived
Ak : yeh kuch irritation kyu ho rhi hai back pr ... She touches her back tries to find out but girls hold her hand ... Ak : arre han ... she moves her shoulders back ...
Nk : turns as he was disturbed nk saw ak back ...
Nk: ak ... shit but no one listens him ... He immediately pulls ak by holding her elbow and ak back was towards wall and was facing nk
Nk: leans forward and places hand on his mouth as she was about to speak...
Ak: heartbeat was racing she could feel his warm breath
Nk: moves his other hand to her back... Closes the opened hooks of her blouse , his hand touches her back
Ak: again feels his touch
Nk: too was staring at her... feeling her but his phone rings he steps back
Nk: woh hh..hook looking at floor
Ak: ak turns red ... looking here there not meeting eyes with him . woh... Thanks .
Nk: phone was ringing continuously he picked it and went out
Soon Puja was finished
Drv: ak beta sb ko prashad do
Ak: ji maa.. She was giving prashad to Kunal when he purposely holds her hand and smile ...
Ak: forcefully smile a little and pulls her hand
Ak was going in kitchen when she notice nk
Ak: yeh lo prashad
Nk: holds her hand... Preshan lg rhi ho
Ak: looks at him .. tumhe hr bar kaise pta chl jta hai mai preshaan hun ,upset hun ( ak was amazed that nk knew her more than she knew herself but she was feeling good that someone cares for her )
Nk: mtlb... tumhari shakl pr saaf saaf likha hai k tum upset ho
Ak: itna toh rr aur maa bhi nhi pdh pate mera chehra ... Lekin mujhe toh tum bhi kuch khush nhi lg rhe ho ...
Nk: ab bolo toh hua kya ab
Rr came to ak house
Rr: ak ,dadi, aunty sab aiye mujhe kuch dikhana hai apko ... Ohh kunal gupta right .. Hello mr gupta shaking hand kunal was lil shocked..
Rr: hum pehle bhi mil chuke hai ... Remember kunal ?
K: noo... Mujhd yaad nhi aa rha
Rr: let me help you... Yeh dekho lo ..
Dev: kya hai yeh rr
Rr: aunty jis office mai mai km krta hun yeh wahan se nikala gya tha pta hai kis liye molestation k case hai iss pr isne colleague ladies ko molest kia wahan ... yeh rahrahe court casd ka evidence
Dev: itn bada dhok hua hmare saath ... Shukr hai rr ka jo yeh pta chl gya
Ak: drwaza uss taraf hai dfa ho jao yahan se tum .
K: looking at ak with anger
Nk comes in between
Nk: kya dekh rha hai bola na drwaza wahan hai ...
Everyone thanks rr
Nk: rr today you save your friend
Rr: I'm always here . ab mai chlta hun woh maa papa bhi aye hai India se toh woh mera wait kr rhe honge .
In night
Nk: ab sukoon ki neend lo
Ak: hmm.. All thanks to rr
Nk: yess..rr
Ak was lying on bed
Ak:closrs her eyes and she remembers how nk close her blouse hook today ... ek varsha se hi toh mai apne dil ki baat krti thi pr ab woh bhi ... Kuch smajh nhi aa rha mujhe .
Ak remember her conversion with varsha flashback
Ak: tujhe toh pyaar vyaar ka bda gyaan hai naa ... After all shaurya bhai se love marriage jo ki hai
V: jab tujhe pyaar hoga naa toh dekhna tu bhi aise hi khush rehne lgegi zindagi jeene ka nazariya hi bdl jta hai
Ak:Ohhh...gyaan hmm... accha tujhe pta kaise chla k tujhe pyaar ho gya hai
V: hr time bs uss ek insaan k saath rehne ka dil krta hai , aanjhe bnd kro toh kholo toh.. wahi dikhai deta hai , uske bare mai sochte rehna , uski care uska support accha lgta hai dil ko .
Ak: ohh... Toh iska mtlb hai insaan pyaar mai pagal jaisa ho jta hai ... Flashback ends.
Ak : surprisingly gets up and sits on bed she was holding a pillow...
Ak: kya mujhe bhi ... Nhi nhi aise kaise kisi se pyaar .. Ak closes her eyes and sees nk ... She opens her eyes and uss se baat krna accha lgta hai ... Uska saath aacha lgta hai, hours mins mai guzr jaate hai jb nk saath ho ... Ak hugs her pillow. and says shyingly YES...
So friends read and give your comments eagerly waiting. Thnx for reading this hope you'll like it.

Plz update next part nidhi waiting ??